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The Holocaust
I find this article is at present quite poorly presented, but I removed some of the disorganised portions and my edits were reverted. How can we improve its presentation; and also what efforts need to be made to bring the article up to featured standard, please? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brent Ward (talk • contribs) 11:23, 11 June 2007