Wikipedia:Peer review/The Long Bright Dark/archive1

The Long Bright Dark
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've spent the last few weeks doing substantial work on the article. "The Long Bright Dark" was promoted to GA status on January 5, 2015, and eventually, my ultimate goal is to polish the article so that it is FA worthy. I would like some feedback on the current state of the article, kinks that are present, and how I can improve on them. Though I likely won't immediately go through the FA process at this time, I will try my best to commit and implement these changes.

Thanks in advance, DAP388 (talk) 22:55, 9 January 2015 (UTC)