Wikipedia:Peer review/United States cable news/archive1

United States cable news

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for January 2009.
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for January 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I believe this article has a good start, but needs some work.

Thanks, Son (talk) 01:57, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

Comments by using Eddie6705

 * Firstly i would start by adding the following template for each citation, rather than simply the web address; (Delete the parameters you don't need).
 * I would try and expand the lead to make it at least two paragraphs long. Summarise the article more in this section.
 * The first half of the article needs more referencing, there is only one before the ratings section.

Per the peer review directions, I am archiving this as it has a cleanup tag at the top of the article. Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 04:11, 29 January 2009 (UTC)