Wikipedia:Peer review/Xbox 360/archive1

Xbox 360
I noticed how great this article is, and it looks like it's got what it needs to be featured. But I want to have it reviewed before I nominate it. --Karrmann

In short, the article needs reorganized badly. The information is there, but there's no rhyme or reason to it, just a bunch of one-paragraph sections and sub-sections. Nifboy 20:43, 17 April 2006 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be expanded.
 * Replace the promotional images with free images for bonus points.
 * Tiny single-paragraph sections need to be merged.
 * I like prose, so I'd prosify the table of features between the regular and "core" systems.
 * Stability is a bit of a concern: I saw a piece of vandalism survive the most recent round of reversions (and removed it).
 * Consider renaming "Launch" to the more open-ended "History", and consider expanding it; a two-paragraph section is a bit short. (Given that it has its own article, I've revised my position on the matter)
 * Components and Accessories: Get rid of the sub-headings; sections of only one paragraph (or one sentence, even) are way too short.
 * Hardware specs should be moved to the bottom, I think; it's technical info, so my eyes kinda glaze over when I look at it.
 * "User Interface" should be renamed to something less technical. Again, really short sections should be merged together.
 * The article just survived some heavy cutting because of a tag, several sections were split off and the text is now a bit disjointed. ˉˉanetode╞┬╡ 10:34, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Ah. Looking at the old version that seems to be the right idea. Nifboy 18:02, 18 April 2006 (UTC)