Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/"Weird Al" Yankovic

"Weird Al" Yankovic
I think it's a pretty good article, and want some tips before re-nomination for Good Article consideration. ~ Gromreaper 10:31, 23 October 2006 (UTC)

Yannismarou

 * It needs more citations. Some paragraphs have no sources.
 * In some sections there are some stubby sentences. They need fixing so that the article flow gets better.
 * The "Trivia" section is short and listy. Get rid of it, incorporating the information there in the prose of the other sections.
 * I think the discography is long. For GA this may not be a problem, but in FAC you'll be asked to make a selection with his most important works and make a seperate article, if you want to have all his discography.
 * "Directing career" is stubby for me. I propose you merge it in some other section about his caree. I also think the the "Notable Television Appearances" should go before "discography". GIve us a full image of his whole career (songs, TV etc.) with the right structure of the relevant sections and then go to discography.
 * Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.--Yannismarou 07:22, 24 October 2006 (UTC)