Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Tet Offensive

Tet Offensive
I've done some major editing on this article recently, and would like comments & improvements. Thanks! KarlBunker 15:58, 23 June 2006 (UTC)

Kirill Lokshin
Quite nice! A few general suggestions:


 * There's some very choppy prose—things like single-sentence paragraphs and such—throughout the article, but particularly in the "ARVN and U.S. readiness" and "Media impact" sections. This should be cleaned up, either by adding more material or by combining neighboring paragraphs.
 * More footnotes would be helpful, particularly as this article is one prone to the occasional POV-pusher.

Overall, though, this is very good. Keep up the great work! Kirill Lokshin 00:08, 24 June 2006 (UTC)