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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:39, 28 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "17-year" should be hyphenated.
  • I would expand U20 on the first mention.
  • Link promotion.
  • "and Football Conference." vs "Conference National"?
  • "play-offs in 2005" probably ought to have the whole lot in the pipe.
  • Could link captain.
  • "much of his 97" many, not much.
  • Could link "loan".
  • Is there a link for caretaker?
  • Link substitute.
  • "1998–99 season" etc etc, put the "season" inside the pipe.
  • Could link "manager".
  • "Derby would be relegated" avoid the "would be" and stick with "were".
  • "Murray would feature only" ditto, -> "Murray featured irregularly"
  • "for the "Stags", " avoid these unexplained nicknames.
  • Link "sending off".
  • "after a tough spell battling alcohol addiction" bit tabloidy.
  • "overcame this battle" ditto.
  • "transfer-listed" is there a link?
  • "helping the "Cumbrians" to qualify" again, no unsourced/unexplained nicknames.
  • "of the 2006–07 League One season" this is confusing linking.
  • "; "Gulls" manager" see above.
  • "for the "Silkmen"" etc. Not mentioning it again.
  • "a virtual ever-present" what is that?? "nearly ever-present"??
  • "A back operation caused Murray" maybe "Following an operation on his back, Murray..."?
  • "but he now saw Wilder as one of the best manager in " -> "but now saw him as one of the best managers in "
  • "Hatters", but departed" probably "and" rather than "but".
  • "20 miles from" convert.
  • Link extra time.
  • "to qualify for the play-offs" is there a link?
  • "red carded" hyphen.
  • Link player-manager.
  • "with energy and tenacity whose natural talent" according to whom??
  • "later at Field Mill, was" overlinked.
  • Any link for "free transfer"?
  • "After a successful month" more like two weeks??!
  • "in 21st-place" no hyphen required.
  • "in 15th-place and" again. Not mentioning this again.
  • "at Burton Albion.[103]" Burton is overlinked.
  • "to assist Valérien Ismaël" no need to repeat his first name.
  • "is known as a manager with an eye for detail" according to whom??
  • "Karl Hawley was" who he?
  • Fix all the spaced hyphens (should be en-dashes)
  • Consistent BBC Sport or just BBC Sport.

That's enough to be getting on with. On hold. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:08, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Okay thank you, I've done all that.--EchetusXe 08:44, 2 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination[edit]

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 22:17, 29 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Self-nominated at 13:55, 4 May 2022 (UTC).[reply]

  • Substantial article, meeting of GA criteria implicates DYK pass. Article was nominated within 7 days of passing GA. Earwigs pings only properly attributed quotes. QPQ has been completed. Hook is interesting, cited, and short enough for DYK. Morgan695 (talk) 23:18, 5 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Youngest manager[edit]

Should it be clarified that he was the youngest manager at the time of his appointment and younger managers had been appointed before? Dja1979 (talk) 08:41, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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