Talk:Rory Delap/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Hi, I'll be reviewing this. Before even starting to review the prose and other criteria, there are some obvious concerns that should be adressed.

  • The lead is not long enough, and does not summarize the article
  • The first block of text under "Career" is unsourced
  • Almonst nothing is written about half his career, namely from 1994 to 2001. This is the most serious concern.
  • Many statements are unsourced, including the claimed length of his throws
  • The "International career" section is thin
  • The career statistics are somewhat dated (from December 2008)
  • Most of the section "Personal life" is unsourced

This is not enough to quick-fail the article, but the article has a long way to go before it can be considered as a Good Article candidate. Nonetheless, it will be put on hold for a week. Punkmorten (talk) 11:42, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No improvements. Failed. Punkmorten (talk) 09:03, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]


Seems Wenger's opinions have changed: http://www.espnstar.com/football/premier-league/news/detail/item404284/Wenger:-Rory-Delap-is-dangerous/ —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.254.86.183 (talk) 18:07, 27 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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