Template:Did you know nominations/Baby bonds

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:37, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Baby bonds

5x expanded by Jkolli (talk). Self-nominated at 23:26, 12 November 2020 (UTC).

  • 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits.
  • The hook, however, is quite technical for our general readership. We also don't print names on the main page that are not linked to a Wikipedia article. Can you think of an easier to understand hook angle? The part about estimating reparations from slavery is quite interesting. Yoninah (talk) 21:54, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate the feedback -- here are some alternate hooks that may be better.

Jkolli (talk) 04:57, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

  • Thank you, those are good alts. Please add a cite to the first paragraph under "American Opportunity Accounts Act" per Rule D2, and we can finish this up. Yoninah (talk) 17:42, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
  • I added a citation to that paragraph. Thank you so much for all your help! Jkolli (talk) 17:49, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
  • You're welcome. I fixed the links in the hooks. Both ALT1 and ALT2 are verified and cited inline; I have a slight preference for ALT2. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 17:56, 1 December 2020 (UTC)