User talk:Circuit Hider
Ocean Grove[edit]
I have no objection to rewording much of the article, which could certainly use some assistance. As to the issues you have raised: The details regarding the formation and legal status are relevant to many of the issues of how Ocean Grove is operated and the decisions it makes. More of these details belong in the lead section. While I understand that you may feel that the civil union issue is a minor one or one that belongs elsewhere, it could not be clearer that this issue is particularly notable at this time and directly relevant to the story of Ocean Grove today. While it would certainly be appropriate to mention the issues elsewhere, removing it in its entirety eliminates all awareness of the issue for anyone reading this article. There is no justification for its removal. I will re-read your comments and provide further responses as soon as I can. Alansohn (talk) 13:33, 28 April 2008 (UTC)