Talk:1950 Australian National Airways Douglas DC-4 crash

Expansion and rewrite of this article
I am presently working on a comprehensive expansion and re-write of the article about the Amana. Please peruse my work at User:Dolphin51/Sandbox2. Any comments or suggestions will be gratefully received.

The present title: "ANA Skymaster Amana crash" is not consistent with the guidelines for aircraft accident articles provided by the folk at WikiProject Aviation – see WP:AVINAME. After the new version goes live it is my intention to change the title to "1950 Australian National Airways DC-4 crash". This will be consistent with the Style Guide and also with the titles for the following articles:
 * 1945 Australian National Airways Stinson crash
 * 1946 Australian National Airways DC-3 crash

(The article 1948 Lutana crash also needs its title refreshed to “1948 Australian National Airways DC-3 crash”, but that can wait until after it has been expanded and re-written.)

When all that has been done, it is my intention to nominate the ‘’Amana’’ story for Good article. All comments and suggestions are welcome. Dolphin ( t ) 12:49, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Attention to grammar and styling as well as expansion of the inveestigation section would quickly elevate this to B-class or beyond.Petebutt (talk) 15:42, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I have pasted the revised version into the article, and moved it to the new title 1950 Australian National Airways Douglas DC-4 crash. Dolphin  ( t ) 23:03, 23 September 2012 (UTC)

Sykmaster
Just a minor point but VH-ANA was never a Skymaster it was post-war civil DC-4-1009 which didnt use the name, which applied to the military variant. MilborneOne (talk) 16:01, 2 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Presumably you have no objection to my proposed change of the article name to "1950 Australian National Airways DC-4 crash". See thread above. Dolphin  ( t ) 06:23, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem although 1950 Australian National Airways Douglas DC-4 crash would be slightly better. MilborneOne (talk) 12:08, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree. Douglas DC-4 it will be. Dolphin  ( t ) 12:18, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I have pasted the revised version into the article, and moved it to the new title 1950 Australian National Airways Douglas DC-4 crash. Dolphin  ( t ) 23:03, 23 September 2012 (UTC)