Talk:A-1 Express Delivery Service

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Revised "gives opportunity" to "enables" - less commercial sounding. Run4health (talk) 21:36, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

I have just now revised about 1/2 of this page to not sound so much like an advertisement and removed one unnecessary link. I followed it through one more time. All the claims are facts and are cited well. I don't see any remaining commercial language, just facts. Suzannebowen (talk) 13:33, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

One claim in this Wiki article was linked to two sites, one a press release, the other an actual online newspaper. The claim did not need the link to the press release. I deleted it. Now, the claim is adequately and correctly cited. Javamen (talk) 17:02, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

I'm going to remove the Commercial Alert message because I think it sounds quite neutral now that I changed a heading to sound more factual and less commercial. Fahdi (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 20:05, 28 February 2013 (UTC)

Still not free of commercial tone
I respectfully disagree with Suzannebowen regarding commercial language. The mere existence of so much discussion of things that you might find in a press release for a company that is at best "barely notable" is in and of itself "promotional in tone." I have proposed the entire article for deletion, as it would be better to start over from scratch, provided of course that this company passes WP:Notability. davidwr/ (talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail)  03:19, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

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