Talk:Abu Mena

Mini peer review
This is a nice start. A few suggestions for improvement:
 * Consider supplying the name in Arabic in addition to English
 * The introduction should briefly mention the history of the site and the legend of its formation
 * "Abu Mena was destroyed by the Muslim conquest of the mid-7th century." needs expansion and mention in the lead
 * The history section should start off mentioning who founded it and when in the very first sentence, and then talk about the martyr story, to put things into context.
 * Needs a better description of the city, a map would be very helpful.
 * Should provide basic information about how big the city was and where the revenue came from (pilgrims, right?)
 * Mention the leaders, power structure, governor or mayor if there was one, whoever was in charge.
 * How about a modern translation instead of Budge?
 * The lead should mention that it takes its name from the martyr buried at the spot where the town was established. Jeff Dahl (Talk • contribs) 01:17, 23 October 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback! Dppowell 12:45, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 06:32, 29 April 2016 (UTC)