Wikipedia:WikiProject Egypt/Assessment

Welcome to the assessment department of the Egypt WikiProject! This department focuses on assessing the quality of Wikipedia's Egypt related articles. While much of the work is done in conjunction with the WP:1.0 program, the article ratings are also used within the project itself to aid in recognizing excellent contributions and identifying topics in need of further work.

The ratings are done in a distributed fashion through parameters in the WikiProject Egypt project banner; this causes the articles to be placed into the appropriate sub-categories of Category:Egypt articles by quality and Category:Egypt articles by importance, which serve as the foundations for an automatically generated worklist.

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 * How can I get my article rated? : Please list it in the requesting an assessment section below.
 * Who can assess articles? : Any member of the Egypt WikiProject is free to add or change the rating of an article.
 * Why didn't the reviewer leave any comments? : Unfortunately, due to the volume of articles that need to be assessed, we are unable to leave detailed comments in most cases. If you have particular questions, you might ask the person who assessed the article; they will usually be happy to provide you with their reasoning.
 * What if I don't agree with a rating? : You can list it in the requesting an assessment section below, and someone will take a look at it. Alternately, you can ask any member of the project to rate the article again.
 * Aren't the ratings subjective? : Yes, they are, but it's the best system we've been able to devise; if you have a better idea, please don't hesitate to let us know!

If you have any other questions not listed here, please feel free to ask them on the discussion page for this department.

Requesting an assessment
If you have made significant changes to an article and would like an outside opinion on a new rating for it, please feel free to list it below.

Assess Talent Management
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Removal of Mohamed Morsi from office
I have rewritten most of the article. Nominating it for Good Article status. Zakawer (talk) 12:02, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

Vodafone Egypt
The entire article was rewritten. The speechmark is also correctly used.It deserves reassessment. Many thanks.

Ambassador MK III Missile Boat
I have developed this article from a stub and added new refrences. I think it deserves reassessment. Thank you.

Badr al-Jamali
Wrote the article from scratch. Isn't much though. More is in the citations. Assess. Contribute. Thanks. :-)

Thanaweya Amma
I significantly expanded this article from a stub. Please reassess. It needs more Arabic sources. Thanks.

Eastern Desert
I have developed this article from a stub with new references. Please assess it, thank you Rmeares01 (talk) 00:18, 21 May 2021 (UTC)

Gihan Sami Soliman
Education in Egypt and reform by community leaders and educators. I have added external links and reference as evidence of notability ..Please note the corruption in the past regime that was suppressing reform attempts specially by community leaders and scarcity of information and research on the topic.. please check.. thank you

Malak Koura
Please lock at this article and give it a rats, i have created it fast so i dont know if it is good or not.

2011 Egyptian revolution
I have developed this article from a small stub. I think it deserves a new assessment. Thank you. The Egyptian Liberal (talk) 07:07, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

Hala Shiha
Please lock at this article and give it a rats, i have created it fast so i dont know if it is good or not.

Zena
Please lock at this article and give it a rats, i have created it fast so i dont know if it is good or not.

Rania Youssef
Please lock at this article and give it a rats, i have created it fast so i dont know if it is good or not.

Randa El Behery
Please lock at this article and give it a rats, i have created it fast so i dont know if it is good or not.

Basma (Egyptian actress)
Please lock at this article and give it a rats, i have created it fast so i dont know if it is good or not.

Niqāb in Egypt
Hi. Please take a look at my article "niqab in Egypt" I have made a lot of changes and it is nominated for good article status and would love your feedback. Noosaelgamoosa (talk) 05:10, 24 November 2010 (UTC)noosaelgamoosa

Minya
I have developed this article from a small stub. I think it deserves a new assessment. Thank you. MontyofEgypt 18:55, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

Egyptian parliamentary election, 2010
I have developed this article from a small stub. I think it deserves a new assessment. Thank you. The Egyptian Liberal (talk) 07:07, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

Egyptian presidential election, 2011
I have developed this article from a small stub. I think it deserves a new assessment. Thank you. The Egyptian Liberal (talk) 07:07, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

Egyptian Shura Council election, 2010
I have developed this article from a small stub. I think it deserves a new assessment. Thank you. The Egyptian Liberal (talk) 07:07, 21 December 2010 (UTC)

Khedivate of Egypt
I have expanded a small, stub article into a longer one. DCI2026 (talk) 19:04, 23 October 2010 (UTC)

Operation Badr (1973)
Operation Badr (1973) - complete re-write of the article after moving it (previously called: The Crossing); you can see the difference between the present article and the old one here. With a proper ending I think this article can reach GA-class. Sherif9282 (talk) 18:27, 21 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments by --Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 10:28, 23 April 2009 (UTC) Generally our assessment is for a maximum of B-class. Please do a peer review before nominating for GA
 * You have multiple grammar and spelling problems:


 * In general numbers from one to ten should be spelled out. This can be seen in "October 7" and other such spellings
 * Plot:


 * "Operation Badr was the code name for the Egyptian military operation (October 6, 1973) to cross the Suez Canal and seize the Bar-Lev Line at the start of the Yom Kippur War." should be "Operation Badr was the code name for the Egyptian military operation to cross the Suez Canal and seize the Bar-Lev Line on October 6, 1973 starting the Yom Kippur War."
 * "It is also known in as The Crossing (العبور)" should be "It is also known in Egypt as The Crossing (العبور)"
 * "Combat engineers constructed bridges and this allowed reinforcements to cross." should be "Combat engineers constructed bridges, which allowed reinforcements to cross."
 * Prologue:


 * A map of the occupied territory after the six day war would be useful
 * Strategies for War


 * "Egypt rejected the plan because Israeli forces the war would be carried out essentially on one front" between "forces" and "war" there is something missing
 * Please read through the article one more time to check for other grammar errors. You could use http://www.spellchecker.net/spellcheck/ which sometimes is right and sometimes wrong.
 * References:


 * References like "A Critical Review of the 1973 Arab-Israeli War" and "AT-3 SAGGER Anti-Tank Guided Missile" should all have publisher, date, author and accessdate
 * Use cite web when citing a website with the paramters |publisher= |date= |accessdate= and |author= filled in. Read the documentation of the template to understand this more.
 * External links

Ask for a peer review at Peer review to get a review of more then one user.
 * Please add some general information external links to read about the event.


 * Done most of your recommendations (but I will keep the dates as they are). I will add external links soon. What do you think now? Sherif9282 (talk) 18:26, 23 April 2009 (UTC)
 * You have to add international measurements like meters and kilograms alongside the US measurements in brackets. Example: 16 kilometers (10 mi) For more information go to Manual_of_Style_(dates_and_numbers)
 * Add Non-breaking spaces between numbers and words which is documented in Manual_of_Style_(dates_and_numbers)
 * Reference 85 You wrote "hazly" instead of "Shazly"
 * Many references are repeated:
 * Shazly p.229
 * Shazly p.236
 * Gawrych p.36
 * Gawrych p.11
 * Shazly p.211
 * Gawrych p.26
 * Shazly p.226
 * Gawrych, p.28
 * and many more. use instead ref name="Anything", for more info go to Footnotes
 * Please say which time you're using throughout the article. (Local time (Egypt, Israel) or UTC time). If u use local time of Egypt then state it and add the UTC time in brackets. --Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 18:55, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Done. I corrected a few refs that I spotted myself. I don't suppose there are any more mistakes. Note: I assumed it was Cairo Local Time (since Shazly and Gamasy give the time, and they are Egyptians), but I will check it soon. Anything else with the article? --Sherif9282 (talk) 21:02, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Tamara Siuda
Tamara Siuda -- Significant changes have been made in the past month or so, including layout, content, and the addition of a variety of references. Was rated "Start", I believe now to be "GA". IanCheesman (talk) 20:31, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 08:43, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) You need to add citation templates cite web and there are some missing citations.
 * 2) Expansion of the article is necessary.
 * 3) Lead is too short.
 * 4) Your prose is great.
 * 5) The artice needs an Infobox Biography and a picture
 * 6) It's still short but techincals are ok.

Kemetic Orthodoxy
Kemetic Orthodoxy -- Complete re-write took place over the past few months, including layout, content, and references. Article is now more than four times the original size, and layout is largely based on that of other religion pages. Was rated "Start", I believe now to be "GA". IanCheesman (talk) 20:31, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

It's better but:
 * 1) You need to add citation templates cite web and there are some missing citations
 * 2) The article is resourceful
 * 3) Lead is too short.
 * 4) Your prose is great.
 * 5) The artice needs an Infobox Biography and more pictures

--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 08:43, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

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