Talk:Acsenda School of Management

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Some or all of the changes may be promotional in tone.

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Information to be added: Acsenda School of Management is a private, for-profit degree-granting institution based in Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada. With an emphasis on international thinking and individual focus, ^[1]. ^[2]

References supporting change:

1. https://acsenda.com/about-us/ 2. https://www.educationplannerbc.ca/institution/view/acsenda

Conleyedits (talk) 20:53, 2 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Conleyedits, and thank you for your suggestions. I am declining your edit request because the proposed draft is somewhat promotional. What does "international thinking and individual focus" mean? Those terms sound vaguely positive, but don't actually tell the reader anything specific. I'm not sure if you want the footnotes to be included, but they cannot be added as they are even more promotional, with phrases such as "most prestigious business buildings." I cannot accept promotionally worded requests, as Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View Policy requires all articles to avoid a promotional slant. Best, Altamel (talk) 02:48, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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^ Acsenda welcomes students from more than 43 different countries
^ Immersed in small classroom settings with business professionals, students are offered not only an education anchored in current best practices but are also given the opportunity to connect with the business community through professional designations clubs, associations and their faculty. The current campus is located at 666 Burrard Street, in one of the most prestigious business buildings in Vancouver. Formerly known as Sprott-Shaw Degree College, the name was changed to Acsenda School of Management in 2013.

[1] Acsenda welcomes students from more than 43 different countries

[2] Immersed in small classroom settings with business professionals, students are offered not only an education anchored in current best practices but are also given the opportunity to connect with the business community through professional designations clubs, associations and their faculty. The current campus is located at 666 Burrard Street, in one of the most prestigious business buildings in Vancouver. Formerly known as Sprott-Shaw Degree College, the name was changed to Acsenda School of Management in 2013.

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