Talk:Angus Lewis Macdonald

Assessment
I have assessed this as a Stub, as it only contains the basic information on the topic, and of low importance, as I do not feel that many people outside of Canada would be familiar with the subject of the article. Cheers, CP 14:58, 15 September 2007 (UTC)

Since the above assessment, I have added substantial information to this entry. I am in the process of adding more on Macdonald's years in Ottawa and his last terms as premier of Nova Scotia. Bwark (talk) 14:34, 10 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Upgraded to B without hesitation, which is the highest class one can give without a formal review. I suggest taking it to WP:GA, as a quick glance indicates that it's fairly solid and you might get some good tips for improvement there. Cheers, CP 17:09, 5 March 2008 (UTC)

So,hang on, this guy proposed that taxes be distributed among the poor and then 'died suddenly in office'. Am I the only one to smell a rat?Tgyuid (talk) 02:01, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

FAC
Dates are linked in the lead, but not elsewhere; need to be consistent. Either unlink them all or link them all
 * Thanks for your suggestions. I've unlinked dates in the lead.

I found errors of logical punctuation, see WP:PUNC.

I also found WP:LAYOUT and WP:ITALICS errors, so I suggest asking User:Epbr123 to do a MoS check.
 * I've asked User:Epbr123 for the MoS check.

Also, if the blue box is a direct quote, it should be cited.
 * I've provided the citation for the direct quote in the blue box. Thanks again. Bwark (talk) 14:41, 15 June 2008 (UTC)

Sandy Georgia (Talk) 21:21, 14 June 2008 (UTC)

Addition of questionable paragraphs
In the section "Building the navy" several paragraphs and a photo have been added that were taken from the entry John Moreau Grant. I question whether all of this information and the photo is needed in this entry since it already appears in another entry. Furthermore, it is out of chronological order and its citations do not follow the formatting of the rest of this feature article. (No page numbers for example.) I'm proposing to shorten this passage considerably, move it to a more appropriate place in this section and eliminate the unnecessary photo. Bwark (talk) 14:28, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I have eliminated the photo and text pasted from the entry John Moreau Grant. It might be appropriate to include a brief mention of Royal Roads Military College but there would need to be a proper citation to support it. Bwark (talk) 23:11, 27 November 2008 (UTC)