Talk:Armenian illuminated manuscripts/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Prodrummer619 (talk · contribs) 18:35, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

Comment: Not the nominator or reviewer, but I agree that the use of images is excessive by a long way. There are blocks of 2, 4, or 6 images used when one would suffice to make the same point. The four images that appear in the lead are not identified; they need a much longer caption, and there doesn't need to be four images. The point of images should be to illustrate different styles and techniques that are mentioned in the text, not to take up as much of the screen as possible with images. MartinPoulter (talk) 23:50, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

Second opinion: This article may have many grammar mistakes. For example: Consider to fix what you can. The person who loves reading (talk) 15:04, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
 * "Very few fragments of illuminated manuscripts from the 6th and 7th centuries have survived."
 * " The a Art experienced a golden age in the 13th and 14th centuries, when the main schools and centers started to pop - up (fifteen hundred centers of writing and illumination)."


 * @دانيالوه as the nominator of this article. The person who loves reading (talk) 15:33, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
 * @Prodrummer619 as the first reviewer of this article. The person who loves reading (talk) 15:34, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Already fixed more than 40 grammar mistakes. Still a lot more!
 * @دانيالوه There are two tags in this article. Can you find reliable sources? The person who loves reading (talk) 18:38, 2 April 2023 (UTC)

Status query
دانيالوه, Prodrummer619, where does this review stand? I don't see that the issue of excessive images has been addressed, while the bulk of the review is yet to be completed. It would be great to get this nomination moving again. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:50, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

دانيالوه (talk) 21:46, 27 December 2022 (UTC) Done, BlueMoonset, I deleted plenty of images. I don't know if that helped with decreasing the sandwiching enough but I tried my best from a mobile view. دانيالوه (talk) 21:53, 27 December 2022 (UTC)