Talk:Asamardhuni Jivayatra

Copy-editing : Plot
Hi Gog. Hope, You are well. I have added a plot-line of the novel in this article. It needs 'close-paraphrasing' as some sentences from it are very close to original source. Could you help me? Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 14:49, 5 July 2019 (UTC)

Hi Gazal world, good to hear from you. I have had a go. Difficult without seeing the source, so could you check that I have not inadvertently twisted any meanings. Gog the Mild (talk) 15:16, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Gog. So I have published this article. Can you have a look again. Feel free to trim any unnecessary content. Also want to nominate it for DYK. I have requested on GOCE for copy-editing. Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 21:29, 17 July 2019 (UTC)
 * How's that? Any bits you would like me to look at further? Gog the Mild (talk) 17:07, 18 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Thank you very much. --Gazal world (talk) 17:57, 18 July 2019 (UTC)