Talk:Association for Ocular Pharmacology and Therapeutics

Dear all, I'm opening this talk in order to improve the page: Association for Ocular Pharmacology and Therapeutics. There are still open issues about the article.

However I've carried some editing of the original text, and I think that the following issues are solved:

-The neutrality of this article is disputed: I've modified some sentences and now the article should be neutral.

-This article appears to be written like an advertisement: the inserted external links are strictly related to the Association for Ocular Pharmacology and Therapeutics, and in particular to ocular pharmacology which is the main object of the association.

- The lead section of this article may need to be rewritten: the article was edited in order to overcome this issue.

This article uses bare URLs for citations, which may be threatened by link rot: most of citations were edited as in line citations.

About the issue: -The topic of this article may not meet Wikipedia's notability guidelines for companies and organizations: please let me know how I can overcome this issue.
 * I don't understand what it is that makes the subject notable, or why it deserves an article in an encyclopedia. A lot of the content is simply copied or closely paraphrased from the website, and a great deal of information is unsourced puffery. See WP:CORP, WP:PUFF. ''' Flat Out    let's discuss it   13:35, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

External links modified
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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20131021200616/http://www.aopt.org/meetings/past/?Past-Meetings to http://www.aopt.org/meetings/past/?Past-Meetings
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20131016223104/http://www.arvo.org:80/Annual_Meeting/ to http://www.arvo.org/Annual_Meeting/
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20130815012518/http://ever.be/news.php to http://www.ever.be/news.php

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