Talk:Bahia Bakari

POV Issues

 * The Survival section is written in a tone that could only be used for some low-rate book.
 * Here's the first paragraph, as it currently is:

"In total moonless darkness, without a life jacket and barely able to swim, Bakari drifted alongside the wreckage for hours, lying atop a piece of broken fuselage to stay afloat in the heavy seas. At first she could hear voices of other passengers, but soon the voices stopped."
 * The second paragraph isn't much better. I was initially going to flag it as, but decided it was too general, therefore I used instead. I would attempt to rewrite it myself, but I just don't even know where to begin on it. Please help revise it?

KirkCliff2 (talk) 15:39, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

Why minister's picture?
Why putting the image of the minister? This is not the site for his political propaganda. Besides, I find it very very strange that they didnt send FAMILY and instead sent a politician. Typical (mis-) behaviour of French politician. --79.244.27.21 (talk) 20:54, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

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