Talk:Barack Obama/Archive 63

Joker Poster up for deletion
I nominated the image of the "Obama Joker Poster" (not the article on it) for deletion. If you are interested please check out Files for deletion/2009 October 4.Borock (talk) 15:54, 4 October 2009 (UTC)

Third president from Illinois . . .counting how?
The article says Obama is the third president from Illinois.

I embellished that a bit by mentioning that the first two were Lincoln and Reagan (interesting facts vis-a-vis Obama). Reagan was elected as a Californian, but was born in Illinois (Tampico). Lincoln was elected as an Illinoisan, but was born in Kentucky.

User DKqwerty removed my edit, explaining that since Lincoln wasn't born in Illinois, he shouldn't be considered as being a president from Illinois. Yeah, OK. Ahem - Obama was born in Hawaii - why is the article saying that HE is a president from Illinois then? Further - Lincoln, like Obama, was a US Senator from Illinois when he was elected!

Since there have been no presidents both born in Illinois and elected out of Illinois, maybe there has been NO president from Illinois!

Given that, what does 'third president from Illinois' mean?

Manburger 486 (talk) 22:10, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Generally, where a president is considered to be from is based on where he was elected from. Because of this, Lincoln and Obama are both considered to be from Illinois, but Reagan is actually considered to be from California. Not sure why it says that Obama is the third president from Illinois. He is generally considered to be the second. Tad Lincoln (talk) 23:49, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Ulysses S. Grant was elected from Illinois. He lived in Galena, Illinois following the civil war.  Deserted Cities (talk) 00:45, 5 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree completely with Deserted Cities, Your elected from the state in which you reside. Only Grant an Obama fit this description. --DemocraplypseNow (talk) 03:34, 5 October 2009 (UTC)


 * For the record, I said "by that logic", as in, "I'm following your logic to its natural conclusion" not "this is my opinion". If the criteria is where the President was born, then Lincoln fails this; If the criteria is where the President was elected from, then both Grant and Reagan fail. That was my only point.
 * For those interested: I agree that the criteria should be from what state a President was elected, not the state of their birth. DKqwerty (talk) 03:47, 5 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I took the "n'th President from Illinois" line out entirely. I suggest it not be put back.  It's not a big deal exactly, and leads to too many trivial squabbles.  PhGustaf (talk) 03:52, 5 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Um, Lincoln was not a Senator and, in fact, was never a Senator, at that time nor at any other time. Who then was a gentleman? (talk) 03:56, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

Can we get an agreement not to edit war over any claim about being from Illinois, and to leave it out until there is consensus? The article was fully protected due to this squabbling, which is not really tenable. Thanks. Wikidemon (talk) 03:55, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh no, where are the FARC clowns?  Grsz 11  04:00, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

By the way, Democraplypse, I'm not sure what you're talking about. Lincoln was living in Springfield, IL when he was elected. Tad Lincoln (talk) 03:59, 5 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Illinois is powerful. Else we wouldn't still have such awkward currency as Lincoln dollar notes and Lincoln pennies. Even the Canadians have gotten beyond that.  My suggestion is that it's not really important whether Obama is the second or fourth President to hail from Illinois, and that it's best to just let the matter be. PhGustaf (talk) 04:07, 5 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Tad, Im sorry I forget to account for your fathers state of residency, Nevermind then, Lincoln, Grant and Obama, My bad, sorry. --DemocraplypseNow (talk) 04:24, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Lol. Tad Lincoln (talk) 04:25, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

Travels to Pakistan
Curious. In his different books he mentions travel to Pakistan during his College years and that helped him understand that part of the world. Why no mention in Wiki article? Jrcrin001 (talk) 15:57, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
 * If you think it's important, add it and cite it. Say why it's relevant.  Be bold; it may stay, or it may end up being removed. Falconus p  t   c 00:42, 8 October 2009 (UTC)

So Fantastic Article
Soooo…… fantastic!!! A feature article from 2004!!! And Who in 2004 knowed that he would be a American President? A miracle!!! --TBG (talk) 11:58, 7 October 2009 (UTC)

Nobel Peace Prize winner
President Barack Obama just won the Nobel Peace Prize --Josecarlos1991 (talk) 09:18, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * It's now in the lead and has its own section - though reactions to it need to be added as they come to light. SGGH ping! 09:23, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * ...he'll be asleep at the moment, wont he? SGGH ping! 09:24, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * We will probably need an own article for reactions and other stuff related to his Nobel Peace Prize. Pantherskin (talk) 09:26, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, it should be in the lead because it is a major honor (though I am personally incredulous) and probably the fact and a couple of pro and con reactions from major figures once they wake up. And start its own article.  What about Public reaction to Barack Obama winning the Nobel Peace Prize?  And what are they Storting in Oslo?--Wehwalt (talk) 09:33, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Stortinget (the Norwegian Parliament) appoints the Norwegian Nobel Committee, which selects the Laureate for the Peace Prize. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.92.17.193 (talk) 09:41, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, I am making a pun on "snorting".--Wehwalt (talk) 09:49, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Why not disregard "public reaction" and have a main article that can contain much of the information, include the public reaction? SGGH ping! 09:37, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I think including public reaction is a good title. Steven Walling 09:38, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Do we have a similar example we can model the title after? If not, maybe Award of the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize to Barack Obama would be an idea if we don't want public reaction in the title.  Either way, no doubt the Birthers will be saying it is the first Kenyan to win it ...--Wehwalt (talk) 09:40, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Public reaction still makes more sense to me. People will naturally confuse the verb and noun use of award. I also think having it focus on the uproar which is bound to ensue due to all the controversy around him makes the article look less like a case of recentism and more like it's deserved because of his unique place in history. Steven Walling 09:46, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Why not just have a 2009 Nobel Peace Prize article that can also contain information about other potential candidates, besides the public reaction, prize citation, Obama's acceptance speech, future impact etc. ? Abecedare (talk) 11:10, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

{editprotectedarticle} The article says that he is only the second president to receive the Nobel Peace Prize. He is actually the fourth after: Theodore Roosevelt, Woodrow Wilson, and Jimmy Carter. {/editprotectedarticle} —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.242.204.101 (talk) 09:52, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I've tweaked the lede to "On October 9, 2009, Barack Obama became the fourth US president to win a Nobel Prize, winning the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts in international diplomacy." because I thought it flowed better. Hope that's alright with people. Ironholds (talk) 10:04, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The language is fine, but please don't add a fifth paragraph, this is a featured article and WP:LEAD SECTION limits it to four. Also, there is no need to add a reference after the statement as it is adequately covered in the body.--Wehwalt (talk) 10:38, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm well aware of the requirements for featured articles - I've written three of them. I did not add a reference to anything, nor did I add a fifth paragraph to the lede. Are you looking at the current version of the article? Ironholds (talk) 10:42, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I didn't mean you personally, but someone did. If you check the history, I merged the last two paragraphs and deleted the refs.--Wehwalt (talk) 10:47, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Might be good to mention that to the person who did, then. The way this conversation is structured makes it seem to a casual observer (and indeed, me) that the comments were directed at me. Rather than posting on a talkpage the editor might not even read, would it not be better to a) find out who did it specifically and b) talk to them? Ironholds (talk) 10:53, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * By that argument, your comment about tweaking the lede was directed at the IP who was talking about the number of presidents who have won the prize. I think more eyes are likely to see it here than on some editor's talk page.--Wehwalt (talk) 11:02, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Certainly not. My comment was started with a bullet point. Yours was a *: after my *, which is commonly used to denote a "thread" - see the format we're using right at this moment? Your intent, I assume, was to indicate to the editor that this sort of thing violates the MOS. If that's the case then "more eyes" isn't important since none of them belong to to the person who made the edit, and a talkpage post would be far more logical. Ironholds (talk) 12:24, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I disagree. Your personal feelings aside, "more eyes" is a good idea. Had Wehwalt's comment been hidden on an individual user's talk page, I (and others, I assume) would not have learned about WP:LEAD. For that matter, had you not taken offense, I wouldn't have learned about the convention (which I consider counter-intuitive, but I bow to your greater, duly cited experience) that a bullet indented under another bullet is taken as a direct reply, but a bullet indented under a non-bulleted paragraph is not. That's useful info. sharpner (talk) 14:14, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * The wording needs some tweaking, but I have gone ahead and reduced the Nobel sentence in the lead - having the exact date and all the info about other winners is really too much for a lead already filled with essential info. Joshdboz (talk) 12:34, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

"Most political experts agree that Obama is likely to win all the peace prizes for the years 2009-2017." are there any sources for this? it seems highly unlikely —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.227.89.35 (talk) 13:08, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Already removed as vandalism. Regards  So Why  13:32, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

2009 Nobel Peace Prize
I created this article a short while back and it is already seeing Obama related vandalism. Would help if more people added it to their watchlist and also helped edit/expand it. Cheers. Abecedare (talk) 12:37, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice succinct title compared to some other possibilities. Joshdboz (talk) 13:10, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * But do we need a separate article for it? We never had any for any other years, so it should rather be integrated into this article, shouldn't it? Regards  So Why  13:32, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * It may be brought to AfD, but there's much too much info to squeeze it all into this already packed article. Even the current section is likely too much (after all, we've still got 3-7 years of presidency to go, plus post-presidency). Joshdboz (talk) 13:35, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * How much more can be said other than "he won, 4th president to do so, here's why" ? This is a singular news event, which is why wikinews exists, IMO. Tarc (talk) 13:44, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

Victory from a crowded field
I'm going to be a bit nitpicky, but since it concerns the lead section of a featured article, I hope you'll forgive me. The lead contains the following sentence: "His victory from a crowded field in the March 2004 Democratic primary raised his visibility." What I'm wondering is, how exactly does "victory" come "from a crowded field"? Of course, he wasn't elected solely by the crowd in the field, so there goes one possible meaning. I assume the field had not been causing him some inconvenience from which he finally emerged victorious. So I'm not exactly sure what was intended by this phrase. The only source I found was a mirror of this article. My guess is that it's either his victory speech or his victory per se that raised his visibility. If it's the former beaing meant, then it's "his victory speech", not just "his victory", that came "from" (or, rather, occurred in) the field. If it's the latter, then the field seems irrelevant without some elaboration. Cosmic Latte (talk) 16:37, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I think it is referring to the fact that the there were a large number of candidates for the Democratic nomination for president, hence the "field of candidates" was rather large, and the statement is attempting to make a statement about his winning the nomination as a member of that large number of candidates. I agree that the word "field" may be somewhat ambiguous.  I will take a crack at rewording it.  -- Jayron  32  18:38, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

obama (a product of pavlov's experiment)
PAVLOV'S EXPERIMENT The original and most famous example of classical conditioning involved the salivary conditioning of Pavlov's dogs. During his research on the physiology of digestion in dogs, Pavlov noticed that, rather than simply salivating in the presence of meat powder (an innate response to food that he called the unconditioned response), the dogs began to salivate in the presence of the lab technician who normally fed them. Pavlov called these psychic secretions. From this observation he predicted that, if a particular stimulus in the dog’s surroundings were present when the dog was presented with meat powder, then this stimulus would become associated with food and cause salivation on its own. In his initial experiment, Pavlov used a metronome to call the dogs to their food and, after a few repetitions, the dogs started to salivate in response to the metronome. Thus, a neutral stimulus (metronome) became a conditioned stimulus (CS) as a result of consistent pairing with the unconditioned stimulus (US - meat powder in this example). Pavlov referred to this learned relationship as a conditional reflex (now called conditioned response).

Classical conditioning- A type of learning in which an organism comes to associate stimuli, neutral stimulus that signals an unconditional stimulus (US) begins to produce a response that anticipates and prepares for the unconditioned stimulus. It is also called Pavlovian or respondent conditioning.

''conclusion: this means that if u ring bells in the ear of a dog, after making him listen to the bells before feeding him for about a month, he starts actually feeling hungry when he listens to the bells. first they made the people believe that osama is dangerous(producing fear that results in admitting superiority of the person due to his uncontrollable nature.) then dragged obama to the front for president, notice that obama and osama sound similar to the brain, lets consider obama and osama as ringing bells, its means obama also starts producing the same effects deep in the unconscious without letting the conscious realize, so he was elected & he is leading. plus keeping in view the same concept of classical conditioning it could also be derived that people deep inside believe that obama is going to save them from osama.'' —Preceding unsigned comment added by 119.154.71.60 (talk) 18:18, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

Question
Why was he awarded the Nobel peace prize? What did he do? I am very confused please tell me. - BennyK95 - Talk  17:36, October 9 2009 (UTC)
 * According to the Nobel Prize committee, the prize was awarded for "his extraordinary efforts to strengthen international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples. The Committee has attached special importance to Obama's vision of and work for a world without nuclear weapons." and "Thanks to Obama's initiative, the USA is now playing a more constructive role in meeting the great climatic challenges the world is confronting. Democracy and human rights are to be strengthened." according to the press release from the Nobel Prize committee themselves, see: .  -- Jayron  32  18:50, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Oh okay thanks. - BennyK95 - Talk  19:02, October 9 2009 (UTC)
 * According to Jonah Goldbert, a National Review Online reader hopes Kanye West will be invited to Obama's acceptance ceremony.↜ (‘ Just M &#8202;E  ’ here&#8202;,&#8202;now ) 19:42, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Please see WP:NOTFORUM. This talk page is not an appropriate location for general discussion, but rather for discussing improvements or changes to the article in question.  Such statements are not really germaine to this topic.  -- Jayron  32  19:48, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

Black & White photo
In the Family and personal life section of the article there is a black and white photo of the Barack Obama and his wife Michelle. That photo seems out of place with all of the color photos that are in the article. Is there a color version of that photo or can a similar color be put in its place? SMP0328. (talk) 22:01, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I took a better pic from the article Family of Barack Obama. This is more complete, and in color. How does this one look? -- Jayron  32  22:13, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Definitely an improvement. Thanks. SMP0328. (talk) 23:08, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

Criticism of Nobel Prize
This article is ridiculously white-washed; it is a real embarrassment for Wikipedia as a whole I think. It contains no mention of either Bill Ayers or Jeremiah Wright, nor does it contain anything about Obama failing to bring the Olympics to Chicago. Now, on top of that, there isn't a single thing in here about the fact that numerous commentators and political scientists on every end of the political spectrum are calling the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize he is supposed to be receiving "unwarranted." I think that mention of this should be placed in the article immediately. Chrismc1991 (talk) 21:10, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Wow, twenty-four words before confirmation you just don't like Obama and are trying to insert said bias. There is no mention of the "controversy" regarding Time's Man of the Year 1938, there should be no mention of the veiled partisanship/racism by the right-wing being, by their own definition, unpatriotic on trivial issues. Sceptre (talk) 22:49, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Actually, the article does discuss Jeremiah Wright, under the Family and personal life section. Bill Ayers is covered in several other articles about Obama, directly linked from this one, such as Barack Obama presidential campaign, 2008.  Also, Wikipedia is not an op-ed column.  Exhaustive partisan commentary, either praising or critical of Obama, does not really belong.  A dry reporting of uncontested facts about his life is more appropriate from a stylistic point of view, since this is an encyclopedia article, and there are expectations of how an encyclopedia article should be written and organized.  That others praise or criticise him doesn't really mean that reporting such praises or criticisms belongs at Wikipedia.  See also WP:NPOV and WP:UNDUE and WP:COATRACK for more relevent concepts related to this issue.  -- Jayron  32  22:51, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Even MSNBC and CNN are knocking Obama on this one. Who needs enemies when you have friends like this.--Jojhutton (talk) 00:02, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The media's response to his Nobel Peace Prize is already extensively covered in the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize article, it doesn't need redundant in-depth coverage here. -- Gordon Ecker (talk) 00:16, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, something always seems to be covered somewhere else while completely side stepping the question of the "White Washing" of this particular article. Friends, Romans, Countrymen, Lend me your ears. (For you will not need them when the truth is revealed.)--Jojhutton (talk) 01:25, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Please don't feed the trolls.--Sooo Kawaii!!! ^__^ (talk) 10:35, 10 October 2009 (UTC)

Numbers of template
I just notice that the Time Persons of the Year template is not showing. So, I sort of investigated and find that this page has too many templates. The preview page even says "Warning: Template include size is too large. Some templates will not be included." I think something should be done, like cut down the number of template used or merge some into one.— Chris! c / t 22:35, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I also noticed that and am confused. I'll try bringing it up somewhere, as that is really odd. He does have a lot of templates though. Oddly, when you only edit the last section, it looks perfect. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 03:32, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Proposed solution: merge "Public Image of Barack Obama" and "Family of Barack Obama" templates into the "Barack Obama" template as collapsible sub-sections; Basically, similar to the "Obama Administration personnel" template. Default setting would be to leave the main section open while "Family" and "Public Image" remained collapsed. This should reduce the number of overall base templates by two. Edit: "US Presidents to win the Nobel Peace Prize" should also be on its way out as it's proposed for deletion. DKqwerty (talk) 03:40, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I brought up the issue here: Administrators noticeboard. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 04:39, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I support DKqwerty's proposal. Also, is Template:Obama cabinet necessary? It is redundant to Template:Current U.S. Cabinet as far as I can see.— Chris! c / t 06:24, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I've merged them.— Chris! c / t 21:38, 10 October 2009 (UTC)

I repeat what I said at WP:AN: Looking for a technical fix for this is really asking for special dispensation to be made for bad articles. When it comes to navigation templates this article is bad. The same list of cabinet officers is given three times in three separate navigation templates, for example. And that's far from the only duplication. The succession boxes are duplicated, too. Fix the poor quality of the article, and the technical limitations won't be an issue. Uncle G (talk) 06:30, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I have boldly taken out the following templates per WP:IAR: Template:Lists of US Presidents and Vice Presidents (wasn't link to here), Template:Obama cabinet (redundant to Template:Obama Administration personnel) and Template:US Presidents to win Nobel Peace Prize (pending deletion)— Chris! c / t 06:33, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Likewise, I removed (redundant to ) and  (redundant to . Any other "strict subset" templates ought to be avoided given the issues with template limits. — Gavia immer (talk) 13:12, 10 October 2009 (UTC)

Obama failed his presentation for olympic games
http://edition.cnn.com/2009/WORLD/europe/10/02/olympics.2016/index.html —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.97.46.13 (talk) 20:07, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Yes, too bad for people who were hoping the Olympics would be in Chicago; good news for sports fans in Brazil! Although sourceable and noteworthy I don't think the President's unsuccessful stumping for the Olympics is a significant enough event to add to this article, which focuses on his entire life.  It might belong somewhere else in the encyclopedia though.  Wikidemon (talk) 20:10, 2 October 2009 (UTC)


 * At very least, I assume it should be/is mentioned in articles about the 2016 Olympics themselves. But indeed, per Wikidemon, this is not anything close to a major life event for Obama, and this isn't the article for it.  LotLE × talk  20:50, 2 October 2009 (UTC)


 * `Completely agree. Tvoz / talk 19:18, 3 October 2009 (UTC)
 * This article has been, very successfully I might add, been downsized to just the nuts and bolts. Bravo. Yet there seems to be a growing number of articles that seem to mention Obama, whenever possible. Even when the connection is not notable.--Jojhutton (talk) 00:48, 4 October 2009 (UTC)

Excellent our plan is working!!! muhahah, the world will only know of obamas political gains and not his losses. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.227.59.134 (talk) 16:35, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
 * No matter how you twist it, the Olympics is not a political loss.  Grsz 11  21:08, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
 * But, folks, I'd ask you to reconsider the notability quotient by answering the question of how many times before has a president traveled on Air Force One half way around the world to directly address the IOC immediately before the selection? Surely that helps to make this as notable as a speech regarding Islamic-American relations?  QueenofBattle (talk) 21:51, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Now lets remove the politics from this topic for a moment. If you remove the political implications, innuendos, and hyper-partisanship you will find that there is not much here other then he went to the IOC to make a bid for the games along with the national leaders of the other three bidding cities and the Chicago bid was not the one that won.  The best would be a mention in the page written for the Chicago bid or some related page, not in this summary style article.  Brothejr (talk) 21:59, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Wow you guys took my quote way to seriously... I was trying to illustrate how absurd you sound by trying to make out a right-wing conspiracy.

Not all people who agree with certain historical aspects of this vote R.....or even a D for that matter. hence some may not even be American. The IOC decision was a great conversation peace between my friend in Romania(who doesn't vote here) and myself(who protests voting R...and D)....

The point is if you only post political accomplishments, future anthropology will see a person flawless and almost of high stature. This is far from the truth. Its historical fact he lost the bid. Its also historical fact that this had a large political implications on the part of Chicago.... last I checked his profession is politics. So even if it makes you fell uncomfortable about his loss, It still happened. Because "you" feel its not relevant to history doesn't mean you erase form history. When an encyclopedia contains information not relevant to your research... you skip reading that part. its up to the user. It is data and information plan and simple, And like it or not its a topic of political debate, and that's part of his history. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.227.59.134 (talk) 14:28, 12 October 2009 (UTC)
 * It was Chicago's Olympics bid, not Obama's. If you follow the most recent sources it appears that the decision may have been made on other political grounds before Obama's trip so it was a foregone conclusion.  The President stumps for lots of things and rarely acts alone.  Some succeed, some don't.  Here, although the issue is of moderate importance (more important than some issues, far less important than the auto and bank bailouts, economic stimulus, health care, etc), Obama's connection to it is not especially strong.  Although the information belongs somewhere in the encyclopedia, and probably is here already, this summary article simply doesn't have the room to list every moderately important national issue that Obama has a relatively weak connection with.  I have no strong feeling about whether dealing with Arab/Muslim - US relations should be in the article or not, and it can be tricky to compare one issue to another.  That one is arguably a more prominent, longer-lasting issue that is more fully within the president's purview.  - Wikidemon (talk) 15:31, 12 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Obama went to Denmark, not Chicago. If the mayor had been the man on point and went all the way over to Denmark on tax payer dime then I would say this would belong under the mayors bio.
 * Yes, it's good to keep things balanced (although anthropology tends to make up for oversimplistic appraisals over time; consider the significant opposition to the original affluent society hypothesis), but this is a biographical article, and Obama's Olympics bid does not seem to be a particularly defining element of Obama as a biographical entity. Indeed, it is sort of predictable that a president from Chicago would be pleased if the Olympics were to occur there; and it is even more predictable (in fact, it is a statistical certainty) that, whenever there are more than two candidates, out of which only one will (fairly) win, the odds are against any individual candidate. Perhaps his interest in the Olympics deserves a blurb in Presidency of Barack Obama, but it's not even a particularly sensational aspect of his presidency, while it might have been so had his city overcome the odds and won the bid. Cosmic Latte (talk) 18:21, 12 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Your argument is flawed. obama did not only root for chicago...he went personally to denmark. Also he is the first president to do that... —Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikiappend (talk • contribs) 16:56, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

If you don't like the fact he went to lobby for it...and failed to get the award. then skip that part. let others read it. The fact that this is even an issue that's being discussed so much proves its a fact of some level of importance... the debate is not wiki worthy.. but the fact that he went is because there is a debate. a hundred years form now someone will say Obama lost his bid for Chicago... how would average Joe be able to prove or disprove him(or claiming to spread false right-wing FUD).... simple ..wiki and cite that Obama lobbied and lost the IOC nomination. showing only the facts that are relevant to your interests does not make a fare article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Wikiappend (talk • contribs) 17:35, 12 October 2009 (UTC)

Neutrality of the article
Today I've seen several times the neutrality warning at the top of the article. But it has been removed quickly all times. My question is why? I mean that without a clear discussion it is only an attack from the removers. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.0.91.203 (talk) 17:28, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Because we don't talk about Obama is a nazicommunoislamofascist liberal who wants to kill your grandma enough. Sceptre (talk) 18:02, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * It's clear those warnings were added contentiously as a reaction by editors who didn't like not getting their way. DKqwerty (talk) 18:15, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * This article is, and has been for some time, a Featured Article. That means it has been through a rigorous process, several times, that checks neutrality among many other criteria  It is one of the most heavily viewed articles on the encyclopedia with tens of thousands of web hits.  The new notices come from editors who are excited about Obama's surprise Nobel Prize announcement and think there is some trouble or controversy we should cover.  It is far too early to know if there is going to be a significant controversy, and at any rate, neutrality disputes have a normal process to go through on the talk page and possibly dispute resolution pages.  It's really bad form, and it makes the encyclopedia look silly, to attach them to the most important articles moments after an editor does not get their way on a single edit.  That would be like unfurling a giant "caution, wet floor" banner in front of the White House.  There are less alarmist ways of dealing with it.  Wikidemon (talk) 19:05, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Agree with Wikidemon. --LegitimateAndEvenCompelling (talk) 19:13, 9 October 2009 (UTC)


 * ? There already has been a controversy? You don't wait and see for controversy, if it happens it happened.  It was a bipartisan and world spanning controversy as well. Anyway, it think some of the commenters above need to watch what they say because it is offensive, and very insulated to say "kill your grandma" and "it's clear that they were added by editors not getting their way" when that is not clear, and if anyone is getting their way, it would be these commentators.  JohnHistory (talk) 02:06, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

Capitalization--being nitpicky again
Just a heads-up: Please remember that the word "president" should be capitilized when used as a person's title (e.g., "President Obama"), but not as a reference to the position that the person holds (e.g., "Obama is the president of the U.S."). I'm noting this only because it's so common to treat words like "president" as proper nouns no matter what, while a whole slew of university-level sources (e.g.,     ), and even Wikipedia's own Manual of Style, advise against this practice. Cosmic Latte (talk) 16:42, 12 October 2009 (UTC)

Ethnicity in first sentence
Per MOS:BIO, Obama's ethnicity does not belong in the introductory sentence. This has been discussed before, for instance here, where it was decided that discussing his ethnicity after the introductory sentence was better. The most recent FA version doesn't contain it in the first sentence.--Cúchullain t/ c 20:29, 16 September 2009 (UTC)




 * Read it again: "Ethnicity should generally not be emphasized in the opening unless it is relevant to the subject's notability." I think being the first ethnic-minority president is very notable. It would be the same if Hilary won the presidency (God help us). Sceptre (talk) 22:55, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I agree with your comment. However, I respectfully note that the parenthetical clause in your comment, "It would be the same if Hilary won the presidency (God help us).", does not add to the discussion of the article (i.e., WP:NOTAFORUM). Regards, and thanks, --4wajzkd02 (talk) 23:43, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I was jokingly referring to Hilary's reputation among comedians for henpecking her husband, not for any real reason. Sceptre (talk) 00:13, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I also agree (not about the Hilary thing), which is why I reverted the change the first time. Tad Lincoln (talk) 23:45, 16 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Obviously Obama's ethnicity is notable and should be included in the lede. It is currently in the very next sentence, (as it was from at least the time of the above-linked discussion last December until recently). But to be included in the very first sentence, as if being the "black President" was equally important as being president in the first place, is overreaching, and I would think somewhat patronizing. Almost no other article on a U.S. president says anything other than the fact that they were president and when they served. JFK is not listed as the "35 president of the United States, and the first Catholic elected to the office", though this was also very groundbreaking.--Cúchullain t/ c 13:54, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * JFK is not listed as the "...the first Catholic elected to the office". I agree that this is very important, and think that the article should be updated to note this. --4wajzkd02 (talk)
 * No, I removed the reference to Kennedy's religion (which is the same as mine) as being inappropriate for the lead; a subsequent editor restored it in a more subtle, more suitable way. This article should follow the example of the JFK article.  R ad io pa th y  •talk•   18:35, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * The JFK article lede says "Kennedy is the first and only Catholic president,". --4wajzkd02 (talk) 20:30, 17 September 2009 (UTC)

(outdent) This is what it said before I deleted it; even at that, it's not in the first paragraph of the lead, and I still don't believe it belongs in the lead at all.

In all fairness, if you go back a few months in this article, you'll see that some attempt was made to work in Obama's ethnicity without the blatant undue weigh in this version, for example. <font color="#006600">R <font color="#0D8147">ad <font color="#009966">io <font color="#009999">pa <font color="#1E99CC">th <font color="#67B2DE ">y  •talk•  20:45, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I don't view the placement of text within the lede (1st paragraph vs. a subsequent one) as being significant. The text in both articles seems fine to me. --4wajzkd02 (talk) 20:54, 17 September 2009 ( UTC)


 * 4wajzkd02, the issue here is not whether Obama's ethnicity belongs in the lede, the issue is whether it belongs in the first sentence. I think most everyone can agree it should be mentioned in the lede, but not everyone agrees it should go in the first sentence, so discussing it later in the lede is a good compromise.--Cúchullain t/ c 12:46, 18 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I understand the issue. I think the "the first sentence" of the lede versus "later in the lede" is a difference without a distinction, and a waste of time and resources. Discuss away, however. I've provided my point of view. Cheers, --4wajzkd02 (talk) 16:19, 18 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I disagree that his ethnicity belongs in the lead at all, because it's covered accurately in the body of the article. However, since it looks like it's going to stay, it should be moved down a bit in accordance with it's importance: name, birth, attainment of Presidency should all go in first paragraph; his ethnicity - a secondary, cultural characteristic - can be covered later in the lead, if at all.  <font color="#006600">R <font color="#0D8147">ad <font color="#009966">io <font color="#009999">pa <font color="#1E99CC">th <font color="#67B2DE ">y  •talk•   16:42, 18 September 2009 (UTC)
 * The sources tend to indicate that his being African-American, and the fact of his being the first, are of great (one could say monumental) importance in American politics. It's not really a question of whether one agrees or not.  In a perfect world it would not be a big deal, and people would see him simply as the President... or could mention race as an interesting cultural characteristic like being left-handed or a basketball fan.  But the world is not perfect, and his being the first black president of America represents a historical shift in race relations.  Perhaps ten years from now societal mores will change and it will not figure so prominently.  Wikipedia as an encyclopedia is a product of its times, and inasmuch as it draws on sources with cultural biases, it is a product of the various cultures that produce the sources it cites.  It's not practical to try to achieve objectivity through logical analysis - that's also a form of bias.  Wikidemon (talk) 20:19, 19 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Perhaps FAQ Q2 can be updated when this discussion is closed. --4wajzkd02 (talk) 17:58, 20 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Although I don't have a personal opinion exactly where in the lede Obama's race should first be mentioned, I suggest no major change to the FAQ or lede at this time. The FAQ reflects a stable consensus reached among dozens and probably hundreds of editors over the course of a couple years of editing.  Nothing has changed since the last few times we had that discussion, although I think it's entirely possible that his race will become a less prominent issue in current politics and in hindsight once people grow accustomed to the fact and as he generates a longer trail of actions and issues as president. - Wikidemon (talk) 18:17, 20 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Well, it' been moved to the end of the lede, which I'm okay with too. Either way is fine.  I cleaned it up a bit to remove extra wording - "the first president" doesn't need to be repeated, "hail from" is informal, "of African American descent" should simply be African American.  I've also taken the liberty of removing the true and important, but relatively less important, factoid, that he was the first major party AA nominee.  There were so many firsts that came so quickly - first viable candidate, first to win any primaries, etc., which are all overshadowed so quickly by the one that really matters, that he was elected and then inaugurated as president.  I think that one mention is enough.  Wikidemon (talk) 05:36, 28 September 2009 (UTC)

I am in no way disagreeing with anyone's input on this article about noting Obama's race in the first sentence. However, considering the history of the black race, the moment he was elected president was a huge stepping stone. Although at the same time, he is not fully "African American". He is mulatto (black and white). Therefore if he is going to be introduced as a certain race, it should be correct; just because he is half black, does not mean that he is our first African American president! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Browncc (talk • contribs) 01:18, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

Id like to re-open the discussion of refering to Obama as "African-American" in the first sentence. Its misleading to refer to Obama as African American. He should either be refered to as English-American, Kenyan-American or nothing at all. Its pretty common knowledge that African-American refers to blacks from slave times. By calling him African-American you are essientially saying descendents of slaves dont have a culture. Even if its used in a racial context, obama is biracial and the term ignores his white side. If anyone agrees please let me know.Impactplayer (talk) 21:34, 14 October 2009 (UTC)

Nobel Peace Prize Problem
The Nobel Peace Prize was granted to Obama

"...for a newer peace initiative on Obama's part than had been recognized by past Nobel Prize awards"

- Can anyone tell me what this "newer peace initiative" is please. Otherwise, I think it should be reworded. Even if you can think of something it should at least be explained because that is way way too vague. JohnHistory (talk) 05:01, 11 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * First of all, what "peace initiative" and second aren't all Noble Prizes for "newer" things then the last ones? That seems like a throwaway line. JohnHistory (talk) 05:03, 11 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * It is from one of the sources, and it should not be too hard to figure out. The statement means that most winners of the Nobel Prize were rewarded for peace-related initiatives of theirs that had been underway for some time, in an advanced stage of the process - e.g. they had achieved their goals, had spent decades trying, etc.  Obama was awarded several months into a presidential term when most of his agenda had not been enacted, let alone achieved results.  If you think the wording is unclear or misstates the source, feel free to propose something better.  We're trying to get to the heart about what is different about this, as opposed to prior peace prizes.  - Wikidemon (talk) 05:52, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I think we should lose that strangely worded line, even if some source also uses it. It seems to be about nuclear disarmament (although who really knows, with the vague phrasing), which is something the Nobel Committee emphasized in their statement.  However, Obama has worked on this issue prior to his presidency--this very article mentions his efforts in this regard as Senator, before his election as President.  On might well argue that a mere US Senator wouldn't be given the award, and so on; probably true but also certainly WP:OR (or WP:CRYSTALBALL).  So if this "initiative" is several years old, is that really the newest such effort among Nobelist? I dunno, but the waters seem to become very murky very quickly.  Obama didn't get the prize "as President" per se, and many non-Presidents have received it.  Obviously I don't think the matters are unconnected, but it's easy to have too much emphasis on the presidential service time (or especially the absurd trope going around that Obama was nominated only days into his term... as if the Nobel Committee had to be sequestered from the moment of nominations, and rule out all information about events happening thereafter).
 * Of all the things sources have said about the award, surely we can find something equally notable that isn't so torturous to parse and understand correctly. LotLE × talk  07:11, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I've been trying to rewrite that line for two days now and I can't come up with a concise way to say it. I agree it needs to be changed, but on this one I have little advice. DKqwerty (talk) 16:07, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The way MSNBC puts it is at least comprehensible: "... Obama's efforts are at far earlier stages than past winners'" . The wording of the entire paragraph could be improved.  I'd suggest:


 * Obama is the third sitting (fourth overall) U.S. president to be awarded the Nobel Peace Prize, and is the first to become a Nobel laureate during his first year in office.[220] Members of the selection committee acknowledged the award may be perceived as premature; one member said she hoped it would be seen as "support and a commitment for Obama. And I hope it will be an inspiration for all those that work with nuclear disarmament".[MSNBC ref] The award was a surprise to Obama[219], who said ...


 * It seems like if we're going to mention this at all we should include something about the committee's reasoning. -- Rick Block (talk) 17:38, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I found it suspicious that the criticism on the Nobel prize is not even mentioned in single word in the article. It's not that the criticim was negligible or came only from one dircetion. All discussions on this matter were deleted from the talk page under WP: Soap box on WP:Not a Forum. Again, very strange.--Gilisa (talk) 18:34, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Exactly what are you suspecting? That's a rhetorical question - if you'd like to help out please do so but as you can see many editors are working actively on this here and on other articles related to the prize.  The discussions closed as WP:SOAP were just that, soapboxing about Obama and the prize (and sometimes on other editors here) that was not aimed at specific things to consider about improving the article.  There is plenty of talk on how to do that, including things along the line of the award being premature, undeserved, and unexpected.  Many editors don't think it is helpful to highlight the criticism as such because people criticize everything involving the president and this is no exception.  It would also be a mistake to assume that just because someone says the award is undeserved they are criticizing Obama or the award.  Obama himself says it was undeserved but he accepted it anyway.  Undeserved awards can be calls to action, and people rise to the occasion.  That is a significant part of the public reaction as well.  It just happened a few days ago and it is too early to know what will happen.  The section is too long as it is, so it's best to stick with the facts, touch on the major issues briefly, then use the more specific articles to go into the details.  Later, with history as a guide, we will be in a better position to know the aftermath and importance of the award.  People's initial reactions are, in the long run, not always very important.  Wikidemon (talk) 19:10, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * This is all your commentary, not only yours-but others as well. I think that when it come to political issues, and this is one, not refering to the criticim, which unlike you wrote-was exceptionall as it crossed all parties and appeared on headlines around the world, could be seen as political itself. Also, crticism is unique in that it emphasize that their is no hard reason, not even disputed one, to give him the Nobel and in that never before such criticism was heard on any other American president who recived the Nobel and it's rare anyway. Obama said that he's undeserve (but pharsing seem to have double meaning), but of course that this statment of him wasn't voluntary, he had no other choice but to make the criticism look softer. It's a very well known theorem in crisis management: take the  responsibility and this way the microphone as well.--Gilisa (talk) 19:29, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Disagree. Again, it is a mistake (and probably classifiable as WP:SYNTH) to assume that all comments about the novelty or undeservedness of the award are criticism of either the committee or Obama.  Plenty of "hard" reasons have been advanced for the award, not the least of which is the Committee's own.  Lack of political bias is not a political thing - that's what we strive for here on Wikipedia by presenting the relevant opinions of due weight, if they can be reasonably sourced, each in their proper place.  Controversies, criticism, and scandals about the award itself are generally best detailed in a number of articles devoted to the subject - for example, there is an article about Nobel award controversies, another about this particular award.  There have been 40+ US presidents and 4 awards.  That is a small sample size.  To draw significant conclusions out of being the only one out of four, when the world keeps changing in the meanwhile, is unwarranted.  We simply have a situation where there seems to be a strong bipartisan opinion that the President did not deserve the award for accomplishments to date, that the Committee must have had other things in mind, and a bunch of variations on that.  This article section is about something that is only a few days old, as I said, and the initial reactions people have to a major event are likely not in the end going to be very important.  - Wikidemon (talk) 19:57, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I'm giving up. It's not hard to source the criticism and I think it's noteworthy in a line or two in the relevant section here for all the reasons I mentioned. --Gilisa (talk) 20:19, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I think the amount of bipartisan criticism does warrant mention, but more importantly the vague esoteric wording is the biggest problem. Again, there is no clear cut "peace initiative" that he was given the Nobel Peace Prize for, so saying "a newer peace initiative" is not acceptable. First of all, nobody can know what that means, and you never hear an unqualified phrase like "peace initiative" it's always qualified by "israeili - Palestinian" or this or that, not some generic "peace".

-Also, Wikidemon, aside from your not wanting to include any criticism which was noteworthy, I think you are wrong to say we should wait to see what happens to then explain why he got an award. That is a very strange idea. He got the award, not the future him but him now. He could drop a nuclear bomb on Mecca and still be a Nobel Peace Prize winner. He got it for something, or because of something (politics) waiting around to see if he does something "peaceful" in the future cannot be the reason for his being awarded something in the past anymore then it could be a reason for him not to be awarded it. I mean that's a kind of "fill in the blank" approach to this that really can't hold water. He got the award for something real or imaginary predicated on the here and now. Political pressure, sure, but not some intangible future accomplishment. JohnHistory (talk) 01:57, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * Waiting to see what he was given the award for is tantamount to saying he got the award for nothing, and that it was just a strategic move by the Nobel committee to build pressure, and play politics. I mean, that is the bottom line in terms of that sort of logic.  JohnHistory (talk) 02:01, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * Can we site and mention something to back up "promoting world wide diplomacy and cooperation" such as an initiative or something concrete? Probably not, right?  I think this may be related to the whole sit down with passed enemies concept that Obama said on the campaign trail (right before the nominations ended for the prize) that he later backed off of, but even that is not "world wide".  JohnHistory (talk) 02:12, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * The wide open nature of this award, and the whole notion of sit and wait to see, makes the criticism more needed because it helps to explain this murky area you get into trying to describe the question the big question of "why?". JohnHistory (talk) 02:14, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * I thought it was interesting that Jay Leno said that Obama's greatest accomplishment as President so far is winning the Nobel Peace Prize. I have reviewed many sources now, and find a large consensus on the left and right that this was not about anything Obama has done.  It seems Obama not being Bush was a major factor.  You even have SNL slamming it.  Here's an NBC piece, which is hardly conservative.  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZeMvXSFkBOM&feature=related

There was a link, now deleted, from this article to the article Black Nobel Prize laureates, a similar link appearing (in a "See also" section) in the articles of all other eleven black Nobel Prize laureates. Is there a justifiable reason why this link was removed?11:37, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I didn't remove that, but I'm not sure "black" would be the most accurate, when he is biracial, which is an official category, and a noteworthy one at that. Are we just going to choose one half over the other with all biracial people now?  That seems wrong to me.  JohnHistory (talk) 21:34, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * Based upon Obama's ethnicity, it would appear to be wrong to exclude him from the list of Black Nobel Prize laureates and, in fact, he appears in the list as the twelve such laureate. (Had the vast majority of Nobel laureates been black and there was an article listing White Nobel Prize laureates, I believe that there would be justification for including Obama in such "White" list.) However, in view of the scope of the Obama article and the fact that the Nobel Prize award is covered in depth in 2009 Nobel Peace Prize, such latter article appears to be the appropriate place for a link to the article on Black Nobel Prize laureates. Davshul (talk) 07:51, 14 October 2009 (UTC)

Nobel committee defends selection
I have added a brief bit about the Nobel selection committee's public defense of the award to Obama, which several news sources have reported as a "rare" move or an "extremely rare" event, which adds to its notability. Also, Obama's quote was a bit too much text for a summary presentation in a encyclopedia. OK for a journal, but any reader can easily access the Wikilink to the main article. So, in an attempt to keep the article length manageable, and to ensure free space for the remaining three years of his term and the rest of his life, I removed only the quote. It really doesn't add anything that isn't already there, namely that is was a surprise to him and many others. QueenofBattle (talk) 15:40, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
 * "Nobel Prize Committee highlighted efforts to promote nuclear nonproliferation (particularly in Iran),[217] " -How is obama's nuclear nonproliferation stance different from Bush, specifically in regards to Iran? JohnHistory (talk) 22:24, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * This is not a forum for that discussion.  Grsz 11  00:08, 14 October 2009 (UTC)

Suggesting a few more words about the Nobel in the lead
I added a few words about the Nobel to the lead, but was reverted because "the fuller details are below". This is true, but it's equally true in regards to the presidential primaries and the presidential election. The primaries and election are qualified in the lead; they're given meaning with brief notes that he won the primaries because he defeated Clinton (as opposed to an anonymous opponent to be mentioned later in the article) and won the election because he defeated McCain. So why not note that he won the Nobel because he has promoted "worldwide diplomacy and cooperation" (as opposed to some mysterious reason to be saved for later)? But the fact that "the fuller details are below" is the reason why I made that particular addition in the first place. Later, it is stated that he was recognized "for his extraordinary efforts to strengthen international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples". I tried to summarize this in the lead by saying he was honoured "for his promotion of worldwide diplomacy and cooperation." Without this sort of summary, and without prior knowledge of why he won, I would feel left in suspense, and the lead isn't really supposed to have that effect. But I think that the few words I inserted add considerably to the lead, because they provide the first glimpse of Obama-as-president. Up to that sentence, the lead has been about Obama's life up to his inauguration, and it leaves us with some uncertainty about his nature as president. And I strongly disagree that the addition damages the brevity of a lead that is so succinct (relative to other four-paragraph leads) in the first place. What do others think? Cosmic Latte (talk) 02:05, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Pardon, but you provide a lot of words to justify your eight word addition. In summary, I disagree with your addition. Below is my attempt to respond point by point:
 * "... why not note that he won the Nobel because he has promoted "worldwide diplomacy and cooperation"? This is a type of a Other stuff exists argument.
 * "...saying he was honoured "for his promotion of worldwide diplomacy and cooperation."" This is not what the citation states. Your version is WP:OR.
 * "... disagree that the addition damages the brevity of a lead that is so succinct (relative to other four-paragraph leads)". This is spot-on Other stuff exists.
 * --4wajzkd02 (talk) 02:56, 14 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I agree that the current Nobel Prize sentence, which also is the terminating sentence in the lede, is a little abrupt: "On October 9, 2009, Obama was awarded the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize."  I support adding "for his promotion of international diplomacy and cooperation".  (The edit mentioned above had "worldwide" but the original source had "international".)  It ends the lede better and matches stylistically with the rest of the lede, which has slightly more complex sentences than totally bare statements of fact. CouldOughta (talk) 03:03, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * "for his promotion of international diplomacy and cooperation". While I disagree (as I noted above) with the idea of adding to the lede, I must point out that your addition doesn't match the citation, either. It states "for his extraordinary efforts to strengthen international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples". But even that phrase doesn't do justice to the nuance of their entire statement - said detail is best provided later in the article. As for the abruptness of the ending of the sentence, suggest a rewrite that fits WP:Lede without WP:UNDUE or WP:SYNTHESIS. --4wajzkd02 (talk) 03:16, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * With all due respect, simply calling something an original synthesis or undue weight (Nobel Peace Prize = undue weight?!?) does not make it so. 4wajzkd02, would you please explain why you don't find my or CouldOughta's suggestions to be reasonable ways to paraphrase what the Nobel committee said? I didn't use the direct quotation, precisely because that probably would have been undue in the lead--whereas a succinct paraphrase would seem rather normal. On that note, pointing to the norm does not a case of WP:OSE make. OSE rebuttals work when a suggestion is both commonplace and bad, and while I would be curious to know your reasons (beyond a WP:VAGUEWAVE of WP:DUE, WP:SYN, and so on) why the norm is undesirable in this case, I already have set forth my argument (which you have not precisely challenged) that the change would benefit the lead by both removing suspense and adding an introduction to post-inaugural Obama. Cosmic Latte (talk) 04:01, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Cosmic Latte, here's my response.
 * 1. "simply calling something an original synthesis". I referred to your paraphrasing as synthesis. "promotion of worldwide diplomacy and cooperation." <> "extraordinary efforts to strengthen international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples". It is not just that "worldwide" is not the same as "international" (why substitute?). It is that "promotion" is not the same as "efforts to strengthen". Critically, the committee is noting that the President's award is not for an something achieved (e.g., "promotion of international diplomacy..."), but his "efforts" to achieve something (the strengthening of "international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples"). Why is this synthesis? I'll use an example from WP:Syn and substitute accordingly to, I hope, better illustrate my concern: A simple example of original synthesis:


 * On October 9, 2009, Obama was awarded the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize for his promotion of worldwide diplomacy and cooperation.


 * Although no conclusion is drawn and both facts are one fact is true, the sentence implies that the Peace Prize was awarded for promoting of diplomacy and cooperation throughout the world, vice the effort to strengthen international diplomacy and cooperation between peoples . If no reliable source has combined published the material in this way, it constitutes original research.
 * 2. "or undue weight (Nobel Peace Prize = undue weight?!?)". Pardon if I was unclear. I did not state that mentioning the award of the Peace Prize in the lede was WP:UNDUE in any way, as I specifically took no issue with "On October 9, 2009, Obama was awarded the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize." remaining in the lede. My suggestion, not to you, but to CouldOughta, was that "for the abruptness of the ending of the sentence, suggest a rewrite that fits WP:Lede without WP:UNDUE or WP:SYNTHESIS" [''emphasis added].
 * 3. "I didn't use the direct quotation, precisely because that probably would have been undue in the lead". I do not see how using the direct quote vice the (as I have described in my point 1., above, misleading) paraphrase is WP:Undue. I reiterate that I believe that using only the first sentence of the committee's statement "doesn't do justice to the nuance of their entire statement - said detail is best provided later in the article", as the addition of the detail here would overwhelm the lede.
 * 4. Regarding WP:OSE and your argument for inclusion of your addition based on the inclusion of "won the primaries because he defeated Clinton" and "won the election because he defeated McCain.", I'll quote from that essay, with the substitution of one word, included, for the word kept, for clarity:"Comparisons can be highly subjective, and so it is better to look at the debates in question and see what policies were cited and make an argument based on how they apply to the current debate than just say 'x was kept included so this should be too'. [emphasis added]]|undefined"
 * My point was (and remains) that including your suggested addition is not justifiable because of other additions alone. Rather, other considerations (which I have detailed) militate against its inclusion.
 * 5. Regarding WP:OSE and your argument "... disagree that the addition damages the brevity of a lead that is so succinct (relative to other four-paragraph leads)", I stand by my prior comment. Here, you very specifically state that "other" articles have "four-paragraph leads [sic]", so "damages [to] the brevity of a lead  [sic]" is a concern with which you "disagree". See the quotation, above. Just because other the lede of other articles are "four paragraphs" long does not, by itself, justify that the lede of this article should be longer than it is.
 * 6. "you have not precisely challenged". In each case I have parsed your lengthy commentary and extracted your points to respond to each of them. My intention was to precisely respond (but not challenge - we're here to improve the encyclopedia, not debate or push a point of view, yes?) to each of them - quoting your statements to provide context and precision to my response. Pardon me if I have missed something. It is not my intent to be so wordy, but I have done so (and am doing so) to satisfy your concern.
 * 7. "benefit the lead [sic] by both removing suspense". I have searched WP:Lede and cannot find the word "suspense". I respectfully state that it is unclear that "removing suspense" is an issue either discussed in that guideline or that has a common sense applicability in this case. The guideline does state: "The lead section should briefly summarize the most important points covered in an article in such a way that it can stand on its own as a concise version of the article." which the lede, as is, does do, and"notable material should neither be suppressed nor allowed to overwhelm : always pay scrupulous attention to reliable sources." As I noted in my point 3., directly quoting just the first sentence of the committee's citation leaves out important detail, while quoting the whole citation would "overwhelm".
 * 8. "adding an introduction to post-inaugural Obama". See the quote in my point 7., above. The lede, as written, does "briefly summarize" the notable "post-inaugural Obama" award of the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize, more detail of which is available both later in this article and in its own article.
 * Regards, --4wajzkd02 (talk) 14:21, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * That's odd-- an IP account undid the following comment a short time after it was added. ???
 * I looked for guidance at the ledes for other high officials who received the prize. Woodrow Wilson and Theodore Roosevelt also have short explanations of the reason for their prizes; Jimmy Carter, who received his award after his presidency, does not. Henry Kissinger and Mikhail Gorbachev do not, Martin Luther King Jr. does. Yasser Arafat, Yitzak Rabin and Shimon Perez received theirs together; Arafat and Perez have descriptions and Rabin does not. The descriptions tend to be half-sentences, often including the word "for".
 * These examples show there's no overall consensus that a description in the lede is WP:UNDUE, or that there's WP:SYNTHESIS in a short summary of the reason for a Nobel Peace Prize. (Side note: hey, Nobel Committee! Jimmy Wales and Larry Sanger, "for promotion of international understanding and universal knowledge.") CouldOughta (talk) 15:27, 14 October 2009 (UTC)

Questions of Ethnicity and the One Drop Rule
I found it interesting that Obama is not listed as "biracial" or even "multi-racial" (it's two races which is 'Bi" right?) at the bottom, and instead listed as "African -American". I understand the "one drop rule", but are we going to propagate and perpetuate that here on wikipedia in the 21st century?  It seems that's exactly what we are doing.  Biracial, or whatever you want to call it is a clear designation in many places in our society, and a noteworthy group for it's relatively small numbers.  I think choosing one half over the other, has some serious pitfalls in its logic.  Furthermore, what does african american really mean, when Obama has not even a single blood relative of african american lineage.  Without getting into the cultural issues too much, lets remember Obama was raised by whites, and the amount of "black" people in hawaii is very small.  I recall when people early on were challenging, a persistent theme in his early career in Chicago as well, Obama's "blackness" on these very grounds. It seems that "blackness" in regards to Obama is some test you can pass, or you can fail as deemed by other black people. That can't be a real designation then, because ethnicity is not something you can fail at. Thus, I think listing Obama as "biracial" is the only way to honestly express both his genetics, and also his background. I would hate to think that Jim Crow like logic would be furthered on wikipedia, noting that even then Obama would not posses "one drop" of african american blood. JohnHistory (talk) 21:45, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * I agree. While I think "first African American president" is more than appropriate, the fact that this article never once references to him as "biracial" is a bit strange. Every time someone brings up this idea, there's usually a very immediate and reactionary response to such threads which boarders in an unintentional bias. Now, to be fair, most of these suggestions come after trying to change the lead of the article itself and are followed by complaints about the lead, which are understandably ignored or or directed to the FAQ. However, the idea that the article cannot address Obama as "biracial" is something that may need to be opened up again and the consensus reevaluated. Yes, perhaps a new consensus will be reached, and for some this seems to make them nervous; it can only strengthen the case for not using "biracial" if it's indeed still consensus, but if it's not the current consensus than we're holding onto tradition, bias, or otherwise. DKqwerty (talk) 22:08, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
 * That strikes me as odd, because first of all it would need to be open for awhile, or I for one, would probably miss the discussion. However, I'm not sure why a consensus would be needed when this is a well verified fact. I mean could we have a consensus that said that Thomas Edison wasn't white and then follow it?  All this designation does is to say that mixed-race, or biracial or multiracial people don't even exist.  It's literally denying their existence.  It cannot be permissible to choose one half over the other, and in this case it is even more confusing because as I said Obama has no african american blood at all, yet alone half.  This will confuse a lot of mixed race children, and is not healthy at all. JohnHistory (talk) 22:16, 13 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * Rather than discuss all this in the abstract (along these incorrect assumptions on editor intent), can you please propose a concrete change or addition to the article, along with the sources? --guyzero | talk 22:31, 13 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I'll reserve judgment until I see the proposal and the sourcing. One can say many things about Obama's background, history, race, ethnicity, and culture.  But alas, we have room in the article to say only a few things about race lest we give race too much attention at the expense of everything else there is to say.  He is indeed biracial / multi-racial (and "half white" as some people are apt to say - as most of the old terms for this are now obsolete and offensive to some people).  I would imagine this is very important to people who are concerned about multi-racial issues, and perhaps his presidency will raise awareness that not everyone can neatly be categorized in one race or another, perhaps nobody can.  But for now, most of the sources simply say he is black / African-American and leave it at that.  When they do mention his mixed race they specify that he has an African father and a white American mother, but for the most part sources of general interest (as opposed to those writing about race) do not get into labeling him or putting that in the context of other mixed-race individuals.  That's too bad, I think.  But if the question is whether we "propagate" old ways of thinking about race the answer I'm afraid may be "yes", in that we can just go by the weight of the written sources, not our own opinions.  Surely there are articles, perhaps books and scholarly papers, devoted to Obama being mixed race.  But if you pile all of them on one side of the scale, and pile all the references to simply "black" or "African-American" on the other, the weight is overwhelmingly on the side of the latter.  Nevertheless, I would hope for some mention in this article if it can be done appropriately, with rock solid sourcing.  - Wikidemon (talk) 22:42, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

Topic has been done to death in the past; most reliable sources identify Obama as African-American, and he self-identifies as such as well. This topic being dredged up for the umpteenth time...and by one of the primary agitators this spring during the wordnetdaily invasion...really serves little purpose. Tarc (talk) 23:42, 13 October 2009 (UTC)


 * The fact that Obama is biracial is implied pretty well in the very first sentence of the body of the article: "Barack Obama was born...to Stanley Ann Dunham, an American citizen of mainly English descent...and Barack Obama, Sr., a Luo from...Kenya Colony. Does the article really need to continue, "England is in Europe, and Kenya is in Africa. While Caucasoids predominate in Europe, the Negroid type is more common in sub-Saharan Africa. Therefore, we may induce--correctly, it turns out!--that Obama is biracial"? And it makes sense to emphasize "African American" in the article, because that has become (and perhaps always has been) part of his identity. He has been far more prominently touted as the first Black/African American president than as the first biracial one. Also, "African American" does not necessarily denote black skin or negroid race (race is more biologically complex than skin tone, so "black" and "negroid" have rather different connotations). It is an ethnic--not just a racial--identity, and it is one with which Obama, having had a native African father, can be quite reasonably associated. Cosmic Latte (talk) 02:28, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Tarc, please assume "good faith" and stick to the topic, and not cast useless distracting dispersions on others. What I said is totally reasonable, and whether or not more sources say he is "african american" is irrelevant when he is know to be Kenyan and White American. That goes well beyond having "weight" of sources.  My point is very simple, you and your logic are denying the existence of "biracial" or mixed-race" people.  Plain and simple, to you and in terms of describing them they simply don't exist. If you are half white and raised by white people, you are just "african american".  This not healthy nor reasonable and will confuse many mixed race children, and people. How can the article so explicitly demonstrate his mixed heritage, and lack of "african american" blood and then turn around link nothing to mixed race or biracial?  That makes no sense other then to deny the existence of said well defined and designated groups. JohnHistory (talk) 22:07, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * The entire FAQ only says that he "technically" could be considered "african american" because of african americans often have some caucasian blood, and just need ancestry from Africa, but that in no way shape or form rules out him being biracial or mixed race. That is quite simply obfuscation of his mixed race, and the fact is in those cases you are talking about a two parents with ancestry from Africa, not just one. Historically the children of a black and white relationship have always been considered of a different ethnic background then just one or the other.  "Implying and alluding" to his mixed race background is not enough.  Why only "allude" to it?  What exactly is the problem with citing it and linking it at the bottom?  This is a clearly defined category on wiki and the in the USA, so to not cite, and link the possibly most prominent example of a biracial person in the USA is to deny it as a category. Again, "alluding" to this is not enough. JohnHistory (talk) 22:14, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

Here is what the FAQ was referencing, the African American Article which clearly shows that he should be listed as both Mixed Race / Biracial and African American. Let's not play politics, or be prejudiced in this topic please. It has a way of creeping into this. "By the 1980s, parents of mixed-race children (and adults of mixed-race ancestry) began to organize and lobby for the ability to show more than one ethnic category on Census and other legal forms. They refused to be put into just one category. When the U.S. government proposed the addition of the category of "bi-racial" or "multiracial" in 1988, the response from the general public was mostly negative. Some African-American organizations and political leaders, such as Senator Diane Watson and Representative Augustus Hawkins, were particularly vocal in their rejection of the category. They feared a loss in political and economic power if African Americans abandoned their one category. This reaction is characterized as "historical irony" by Daniel (2002). The African-American self-designation had been a response to the one-drop rule, but then people resisted the chance to claim their multiple heritages. At the bottom was a desire not to lose political power of the larger group. Whereas before people resisted being characterized as one group regardless of ranges of ancestry, now some of their own were trying to keep them in the same group.[129] In recent decades, the multicultural aspect of the United States has continued to expand, in part due to new waves of immigration from Asia, Central and South America, and Africa. Although the terms mixed-race, biracial, and multiracial are increasingly used, it remains common for those who possess visible traits of black heritage to identify or be identified as blacks or African Americans. For example, 55% of European Americans classify President Barack Obama as biracial when they are told that he has a white mother, while 66% of African Americans consider him black.[130] Obama describes himself as black[131] and African American, using both terms interchangeably.[132] Because of that and general conventions, he is generally considered to be African American.[133] Obviously he is in fact both African-American and bi-racial; these are not exclusive categories." (African American) - JohnHistory


 * It looks like you are advocating adding a "multiethnic" category to this article..? I can't find any such category on wikipedia. From what I can tell, for multiethnic peoples, we typically link the categories of all of their ethnicitys. This has already been done for Barack Obama. Note that Obama himself is highlighted on the Multiracial American article. Have your needs been addressed? --guyzero | talk 22:39, 14 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Why a new post on this, I already had one above? Here's what the african american article actually says about this. Clearly Obama needs to be linked and cited as both "mixed race/biracial" and "african american". Not one or the other, and definitely not just african american.

"By the 1980s, parents of mixed-race children (and adults of mixed-race ancestry) began to organize and lobby for the ability to show more than one ethnic category on Census and other legal forms. They refused to be put into just one category. When the U.S. government proposed the addition of the category of "bi-racial" or "multiracial" in 1988, the response from the general public was mostly negative. Some African-American organizations and political leaders, such as Senator Diane Watson and Representative Augustus Hawkins, were particularly vocal in their rejection of the category. They feared a loss in political and economic power if African Americans abandoned their one category. This reaction is characterized as "historical irony" by Daniel (2002). The African-American self-designation had been a response to the one-drop rule, but then people resisted the chance to claim their multiple heritages. At the bottom was a desire not to lose political power of the larger group. Whereas before people resisted being characterized as one group regardless of ranges of ancestry, now some of their own were trying to keep them in the same group.[129] In recent decades, the multicultural aspect of the United States has continued to expand, in part due to new waves of immigration from Asia, Central and South America, and Africa. Although the terms mixed-race, biracial, and multiracial are increasingly used, it remains common for those who possess visible traits of black heritage to identify or be identified as blacks or African Americans. For example, 55% of European Americans classify President Barack Obama as biracial when they are told that he has a white mother, while 66% of African Americans consider him black.[130] Obama describes himself as black[131] and African American, using both terms interchangeably.[132] Because of that and general conventions, he is generally considered to be African American.[133] Obviously he is in fact both African-American and bi-racial; these are not exclusive categories." JohnHistory (talk) 22:34, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * So, clearly he is "both" and should be represented as such lest we turn something so simple as his mom and dad into a political and historical debate. Again, anything less would be to deny the existence of mixed race or biracial people by depriving them of the possibly most prominent member of said category.  That would be very confusing and unhealthy for mixed race children and people, and it would be deny this well established category on wikipedia and the USA/ world.  The earlier poster was simply saying that "technically" he could be thought of as both because they are not mutually exclusive, so then don't exclude one of them.  Get it?  Also, the children of a white and black have historically designated as of a different background and then either parent, and the idea of just having "ancestry from africa" was really the case of having two parents (possibly mixed) who both have ancestry from africa.  But, aside from that the main point is that the argument is that they are not mutually exclusive, so again then let's not exclude one of them which seems quite the absurdity in terms of the logic and argument presented here.  Don't you guys see that? Very obviousJohnHistory (talk) 22:34, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * At the end of the day it is not up to us what our ethnic backgrounds are, it is up to us what we self-identify as, though. So, I suggest changing a few things so as to not deny people of mixed race their right to exist, despite the self identifications of others, or media outlets, nor through the use the argument of these categories not being mutually exclusive to then turn around and completely exclude one with the best excuse being allusions, and implications to his mixed heritage. So for the intro it can say Obama is the first president of mixed race or african descent.  At the bottom a link to mixed race can be added.  That seems very reasonable and completely in line with the argument for his being called african american in the first place, and this way we are not denying the existence of mixed race people.  Also, something could be added to the effect of Obama is of mixed race descent, but self identifies as "african american", which I think would clear this up and be healthy for all people. JohnHistory (talk) 22:48, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * Again, the very article (African American) being referenced to call him just African American says this glaringly omitted statement from this discussion "Obviously he is in fact both African-American and bi-racial; these are not exclusive categories."

- So, why are we excluding it again? Isn't he "obviously" biracial? JohnHistory (talk) 22:54, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * Sorry it's confusing. This section of the talkpage is discussing a change to the FAQ. The section you started above is discussing changes to the article. Moving your additions here (and my reply) to that section would be helpful to that discussion.
 * To answer your question simply, just read the FAQ. Reliable sources overwhelmingly refer to him as AA. Per policy, we summarize the reliable sources. You are totally correct that he is multiethnic, but because RS's don't commonly refer to him as "The first multiethnic president", etc. then neither do we. We are told to follow policy and are expressly prohibited from trying to right wrongs (advocacy/activism). The details of his heritage, including links to multiracial are in the first labeled section of the article. --guyzero | talk 23:10, 14 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Okay, I moved them back here. I disagree, because there are a myriad of sources that describe him being of mixed race, and I can't find any (can you) that deny he is of mixed race.  This is about self identification, and again this essentially saying that the a whole category of people don't exist.  I agree to say that he is of african american descent, but it should also include his mixed race descent, with a link as well.  This is in line with what you are saying, and the entire logic behind his being just african american, was not represented accurately in the FAQ as i showed through the African American article that says they are not mutually exclusive and that he is "obviously biracial." Again, ones self identification is important but can't be used to exclude one's ethnic composition, and be default to deny a whole category people who have fought to be recognized as such.  This is not a contentious issue, you don't have to correct anything, you just have include the other side of the coin which has been well documented and is not disputed.  A lot of sources say he is both things, that's what should be added and if he is listed under the multiracial category here, then it should be represented in the article and linked. Right now it is glaringly omitted. JohnHistory (talk) 23:21, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * The reason a lot of the sources may say just african american is because Obama "self identifies" as that. If obama, conversely, self identified as biracial, then they would say he was biracial. Do you understand? It's about self identification, not genetics nor background. Thus that is the key, just as the african american article I cited says. However, as I said, self identity is not a trump for background.  There are plenty of examples of this.  Remember, I'm not suggesting to say he is not african american, I'm saying that the biracial fact of his background should simply be mentioned and cited and linked. That is all .Very very basic. JohnHistory (talk) 23:38, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * No, it isn't just because he self-identifies, it is for "all of the above" reasons, really. A lot of blacks who call themselves African-American are many, many generations removed from any tangible connection to Africa.  Not so with Obama; he has the actual, in-his-life connection, as well as a strong identification with the traditional American A-A community.  The "biracial" just simply is not an important descriptor of Obama, and as such has no place in the lead of the article.  Honestly, what else is there to discuss here? Tarc (talk) 23:53, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * For all of the above reason? For all of the above reasons he is both african american, and biracial, and if ethnicity is not important then take it out of of the intro all together, and every other persons article.  Why are you ignoring the previously used to justify this distinction African American article that backs up my point 100%.  He is both, and if you are to mention one you are to mention both.  Self identity is the key, because as you said he has no direct connection to african american history, only Kenyan and white american history.  EIther way, you are obfuscating this for some reason I cannot understand and trying to stufle debate by saying what else needs to be said when you have ignored a myriad of valid points, and the very original argument that they are not mutually exclusive.  Do you realize that you are denying an entire category people? Do you know how offensive that is Tarc?  JohnHistory (talk) 23:59, 14 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * I guess I just don't understand why, if the cited article of African Americans is used to justify his african american identity, it is then ignored that it actually said they are not mutually exclusive, and that he is "obviously biracial". I don't understand why the concept of it not being mutually exclusive is used to be exclusive, and why the "obviousness" of his biracial background is not included.  Please explain those two things to me, and why you are not relying on self identification and not pretending a whole group and segment of the USA does not exist through your logic.  JohnHistory (talk) 00:13, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * Oh please, don't play the "OMG its offensive to biracials!" card, you aren't terribly convincing on that angle. You can write these novellas for days, but all of it ignores a simple fact; this is an encyclopedia, not a creator of original thought or prose.  It reflects what reliable sources have to say on the matter.  Unless you can get around that (and you cannot), then this is matter is effectively settled. Tarc (talk) 00:19, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Excuse me? Please stop these dramatic antics.  Exactly, this is an encyclopedia, so why are you ignoring the african american section of it (previously used to justify your position) and not including encyclopedic content?  Listen, I don't care if i am "personally convincing to you" you have already said to not even listen to me, so to be honest that is a discredit to you.  I would like to know, and you have failed at this, to show how any of my points are not sound.  They are completely sound, and they are based on the original argument for his african american"ness".  Listen, you are really floundering on this now. Your logic denies a whole section of people their existence, and all you can say is "oh please"??? .   This is not professional conduct.  And, what do you mean by lacking sources?  There are a million sources that reference is biracial background, not to mention our own wiki article on this exact subject of african americans which says he is "obviously" biracial.  Please tarc deal with the issue and lessen on the useless conjecture. You seem to have a bone to pick here and it's not in the advancement of the article or this discussion as you have not addressed my or the african american articles points. JohnHistory (talk) 00:45, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * So, please address my many solid points and avoid refrains such as "oh please" and "'let's not listen to him" and "'is there anything more to say" when you have said absolutely nothing but "leave it alone" in essence.  Again, your own source here on wikipedia for african americans directly contradicts your conclusion and that is quite remarkable! JohnHistory (talk) 00:50, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * The bottom line, as put forth in the african american article that directly addresses Obama, is that self identification and ethnic makeup are not mutually exclusive. As the article states, "Obama is obviously biracial." Him identifying and being identified as African American (by some and not all) does not somehow erase his biracial heritage. In other words, he is both and anything less is to in essence deny the existence of people of mixed race backgrounds.JohnHistory (talk) 00:56, 15 October 2009 (UTC)Johnhistory
 * I understand that the number of people with mixed race heritage to the degree of Obama are very few, and thus not likely to have strong advocates, but the idea that you could have a consensus that would essentially erase them as category of people is something I find hard to consider correct, nor, given the myriad of sources, justifiable in an encyclopedia.  It is critical to understand the difference between self identification and ethnic background, and to not conflate the two to the point of erasing one.  The whole guideline for this was the idea of these two things not being mutually exclusive, and yet you have been using that inclusive logic to totally exclude this simple fact.  To me, that is a perversion of the facts and what the african american article really said i.e, they are not mutually exclusive and he is "obviously biracial."  Tarc, I'm really struggling with understand what exactly you disagree with about this, and why you are getting to personal and derogatory about them?  I noticed earlier you said "he self identifies" and then later you said that had nothing to do with it.  Pardon my frankness, but are all over the place.  The fact is that he is and can be both, but that is not one or the other as you would have it be. JohnHistory (talk) 01:11, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * :Also, saying most sources call him "african american" when it is well know that he is both biracial and african american (not mutually exclusive) is, in my view, a real perversion of the facts which are at this point "common knowledge" and which the article clearly proves to be true. Again, there are more then enough sources that clearly spotlight his mixed race background, and since african american is not an exclusive term (as the african american article states) then that is completely irrelevant to him also being of mixed or biracial descent.  Do you get that?  If it's not exclusive, then it does not in anyway exclude the fact that he is also "biracial".  I think this is 100% right on.  Think about it, he is "african american" because it is not an exclusive term, yet you are using its very inclusiveness to exclude his mixed race heritage.  Could you be more succinct and clear cut then that? JohnHistory (talk) 01:17, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * You have no "solid points", John. You didn't months ago when you disrupted the article and got blocked for it, and you don't now.  The Wikipedia reports what reliable sources say.  Period.  If you wish to wax poetic about race and terminology, that's what blogs are for. Tarc (talk) 01:16, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I agree with John. biracial is more appropriate and there are plent y of reliable sources to back that up.--Jojhutton (talk) 01:19, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * If my points weren't solid then you could point out there weaknesses, instead you are just obfuscating. Look at what I wrote above which completely undermines your whole argument, and I disagree (sidetracking much?) about my "disruption" I was then making a point about the photos and your conduct on this page which seem to be still prevalent as you are not addressing the real issue here and instead completely going off topic ,and using personal slights. Please your obfuscation only underscores your desire to not address the problems.  I will say it again.  You are using the inclusive nature of being african american, to exclude being biracial which is expressly not what is the intent of such inclusiveness is about.  Please tell me how I'm wrong about that?  And by attacking me in this way you are attacking the african american article on wiki, because that is where I am drawing my logic about this from.  So, please stop it because you're actually insulting a lot of people when you talk about "waxing philosophical" and otherwise demean our well thought out and 100% valid points. You are using inclusiveness to be exclusive, when the african american article clearly states that they are not mutually exclusive, and that he is "obviously biracial".  Tarc, I would really like to work with better then last time, but you seem to be uninterested in anything other then stifling this, and personally going after me when this is well represented and not 100% about me or feelings for me, and hopefully not about you either.JohnHistory (talk) 01:30, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * I'll put it this way, sources saying he is african american in no way undermine nor refute him also (as the Obama article proves) being of biracial or mixed race heritage. Do you not get that Tarc? You can be both as the African American source puts it, the two terms are not mutually exclusive, so it is irrelevant then how many sources (plenty cite his mixed heritage) call him african american because it is not an exclusive ethnicity.  The fact is that he is both things.  Using this inclusive term to be rigidly exclusive is a perversion of its true meaning.  JohnHistory (talk) 01:52, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * Since what I just wrote is completely grounded in the argument for him being african american in the FAQ, and is yet not refuted by anyone on its merits, and does away with the idea of weight of sources (which is not really proven anyway) because being african american in no way means you can't also be of mixed race(as Obama / African American article proves), and because I believe I have soundly demonstrated the inherent contradiction of inclusive exclusiveness in this article currently and past arguments, I look forward to working with you Tarc, since you have the best interests of the article in mind and not some personal stake in it or me, to remedying this in the near future together thus providing a good example of people coming together for the best of wikipedia and getting over past differences in the process.  Given that he would be the first person of said biracial makeup to be President and given the relatively small number of people who fit this category in the population, and the prevalence of his african american background in the article currently, it is without a doubt worth putting it into it and linking it.  Maybe you  could lead the charge on this, and show a real clear cut well intentioned wikipedia interest by doing so.  JohnHistory (talk) 02:09, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * I agree. Good addition to the main article.--Jojhutton (talk) 02:57, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, and I guess this really doesn't fall into the scope of the previous consensus nor FAQ, because no one is arguing about changing the "african american" part, but simply adding the fact of his multiracial heritage. JohnHistory (talk) 03:01, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * And you have been reverted, for disruptively editing against consensus on this issue, as noted in Talk:Barack Obama/FAQ. Please review General sanctions/Obama article probation before considering further editing on this tangent.  Thanks. Tarc (talk) 03:06, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I believe that consensus had been changed. Obviously you disagree, but what right do you have to remove a cited fact?--Jojhutton (talk) 03:08, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Where in the consensus did it say that he could not be listed, as per the African American definition of multiracial and african american not being not mutually exclusive, as both african american and multiracial? I never changed that he was african american, and thus it was not "disruptive".  I think we need another consensus this time about if he can or cannot be listed as african american and multiracial, and if so then the whole african american article (as well as common sense) is wrong about this. JohnHistory (talk) 03:14, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * This is kind of absurd because the very inclusiveness used to allow Obama to be african american, is now being used to exclude him from being of mixed race. Tarc chooses to ignore this for some reason and never backs it up with anything. Again, this does not related to him being african american, it relates to the fact that he is both african american and of mixed race and that as the wiki African American page, and past arguments for his being African American state, these two terms are not mutually exclusive.  Tarc, you got some explaining to do. Remember "weight" of sources doesn't apply because you can be both african american and of mixed race, and it that was also a kind of weak argument because there are a myriad of sources that discuss his multiracial heritage. JohnHistory (talk) 03:23, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * I would also add that if you can't be multiracial and african american, then that means Obama, by definition, can't be african american. However, as I have shown time and time again, as was in the FAQ "they are not mutually exclusive".  What part of this are you struggling with Tarc, I will gladly explain it all again for you but at this point I think you are being disruptive to this process and giving zero explanation for why. JohnHistory (talk) 03:42, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * The sources that call him, or describe him as of mixed race are not contending with the ones which describe him as black, they are augmenting them because the two terms are not mutually exclusive, they are not contending ethnicities, or else, by definition, Obama could not be african american. Also, I do think it is troubling that we have a whole segment on the white side of his family, which raised him, and yet we seem to not have the ability to say he is multiracial.  How is that not denying the existence of multiracial people who have fought hard and succeeded in being recognized as their own distinct group?  That is aside from my straight up analysis of the problems here and how the terms are not mutually exclusive, nor contending, but it is still something that we should all think about seeing how probably very few of us are of 50/50 different races and how we are essentially setting them back by doing this.  JohnHistory (talk) 04:02, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

I don't know what part of my "Wikipedia reflects what reliable sources have to say" response you find to be confusing, or what part of;


 * "A2: Obama himself and the media identify him, the vast majority of the time, as African American or black. Thus we use this term in the introduction. Keep in mind, many individuals who identify as black have varieties of ancestors from many countries who may identify with other racial or ethnic groups. See our article on race for more information on this concept. We could call him the first "biracial" candidate or the first "half black half white" candidate or the first candidate with a parent born in Africa, but Wikipedia is a tertiary source which reports what other reliable sources say, and most of those other sources say "first African American." Readers will learn more detail about his ethnic background in the article body."

you find confusing, or what part of guyzero's "You are totally correct that he is multiethnic, but because RS's don't commonly refer to him as "The first multiethnic president", etc. then neither do we." response you find confusing. I and other editors have answered your concern, and pointed to you to FAQ A2, which also addresses this question. Barack Obama actually being bi-racial or multi-racial has precisely zero bearing on the matter at hand, which is the phrase "first African-American president" in the lead.

Being the "first" African-American to accomplish a particular feat is something that our society tends think is an important milestone, whether it is Jackie Robinson breaking baseball's color barrier or Darine Stern providing fap material to minorities, that is how the media and society in general recognize it. If you have a beef with that, the Wikipedia is not the place to crusade from. Tarc (talk) 04:06, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Ched, you totally skipped all of my points. Aside from that, you insulting me.  I have said x1000 times that it is fine to include african american, you are the one being exclusive, not me.  You have failed to refute any of my well reasoned points and are just adding personal attack like conjecture.  Please tell me of one other mixed race president? Why do you think that that is okay to gloss over?  Is it because there are less mixed race people? So that makes it less noteworthy?  Why have you failed to understand that the terms are not mutually exclusive and that if they are then obama cannot be african american?  Why don't you read the african american article cited in the FAQ you keep bringing up?  It clearly says they are not mutually exclusive, and that obama is both biracial and african american. Why do you continue to try to exclude him being the first president of mixed race, not just african american??  Don't you realize that is something that distinguishes him from jackie Robbinson, or various other African Americans?  It has 100% everything to do with it.  It is noteworthy, and again the sources saying he is black are not competing with the ones citing his mixed raced heritage.  Typically people don't call someone a "mixer" or  something but to say it shouldn't be noted, or that is hasn't been extensively noted is just dead wrong. I want to celebrate both of these things, you just want to celebrate one and exclude the other.  I don't get that Tarc I really don't, and please stop accusing me of things, when you are the one trying to not note something, and I am not. JohnHistory (talk) 04:20, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * There are more then enough sources just in this article alone to augment his background with the addition of being the first president of mixed race, as well as of african american race, and hawaii. More then enough, and again it would augment it, and not compete with his being african american.  I think you are on shaky ground saying that such a thing is not noteworthy in itself, and that it would somehow be not used since it competed with him being african american, when that is not true as the african american article makes crystal clear.  Otherwise, there is no reason for you to fight it so hard.  You are assuming they are competing ideas, but if that were the case then Obama could not african american in the first place. Now, if I said he should be credited as the first Chinese american president, you would say well we have a 10000 sources that say he is of mixed race and african american dissent and you would be right because that would be competing with being black.  However, being mixed, as I have shown and you have not even tried to refute, is not competing thus the sources saying he is black are not contradicting him also being mixed.  Honestly, this is getting silly because you are not even debating my points, you are just saying I don't want to celebrate Jackie Robinson, or missing the ball completely by bringing up sources which are not in competition with what I am saying.  JohnHistory (talk) 04:31, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * I mean you might as well just get rid of the whole section, and its sources, on his multiracial background because all of the AP stories call him "black" and you can't be black and multiracial. Do you see how illogical that is?  I mean, can I challenge that his mom was white, because most stories don't call him a "mulatto" but instead  call him black? I think part of this is due to the word mulatto being derogatory there is no simple word to use in an AP story along with his own self identification.  But, should I take out all of the sources that describe his multiracial background because there are more that don't?  I mean, he can't have a multiracial background because a lot of sources refer to him as "black', right?  So that whole section needs to go, right?  And, again, these are not mutually exclusive terms. You Multiracial augments the description of him being African American, if you say it doesn't then you are either saying multiracial people don't exist, aren't noteworthy, or that Obama can't be black because he is multiracial. None of which are true, and some of which are appalling in nature. JohnHistory (talk) 04:41, 15 October 2009 (UTC)Johnhistory


 * I have answered you; that you do not like the answer is irrelevant. It is not noteworthy that Obama is bi-racial.  Reliable sources have taken little notice of the term, as Obama is primarily identified as "African-American".  It does not matter what Obama technically is in terms of precise ethnic heritage, it matters what the sources say.  The two terms are not incompetition; it is simply a case of one not being as relevant or as important as the other. WP:V's "verifiability, not truth" is perhaps one of the more abstract of the Wikipedia's policies to grasp, but it would do you a world of good to give it a shot.  And for christ's sake, stop making indented replies to yourself.  It is making this into a nightmare of edit conflicts. Tarc (talk) 04:33, 15 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Tarc, I'm afraid I find that highly offensive. Let me get this straight, noting he is the first president from hawaii is relevant, but not that he is the first president of mixed race? That is disgusting to me. And, there are more then enough sources, given that the terms are not mutually exclusive, to include his multiracial heritage.  What do you think is currently in the article?  Don't you realize that you are saying the very sources used now about his family can't be included?  Again, I find this level of, I don't know how else to say it but racism, to be shocking.  What gives you the right to deny people of mixed race any relevance?  JohnHistory (talk)JohnHistory
 * My girlfriend is half French, and half Samoan, and she identifies as being of mixed race, and she is, and I'm sure a lot of others would be, deeply troubled that you think they are not "relevant" and that you are exercising such a prejudiced view here on an encyclopedia. JohnHistory (talk) 04:53, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

Not only does his multiracial background take up a large portion of the article, but it was the major theme in at least one if not both of his books, and discussed so widely everyone knows it. I'm deeply troubled over your assessment and think you need to rethink this. JohnHistory (talk) 04:58, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory Remember, this is an officially recognized group of people, who fought to be recognized as such, that you are saying are not important, or relevant. That's a shocking belief to have Tarc. Mind blowing. They should be recognized, and they are important! JohnHistory (talk) 05:06, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

You are in essence refuting an entire section of the article, and in his "early years" it explicitly states that he is multiracial. Thus, your only real argument is your fallback being multiracial is not "important" or "relevant", which I hope you might change your mind about given the relatively small number of people who fit such a category, and the various struggles both culturally and legally that they have and do endure. JohnHistory (talk) 05:26, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

TL;DR. WP:RS applies, WP:BLP applies - Obama self-defines as Black/African-American, reliable sources in wide preponderance say he's Black/African-American. See the FAQ. Until you can change consensus on Wikipedia policies, we'll run with what we have now, which is far more closely, if not perfectly, aligned with some decent fact based writing. We don't change world policy here, we write big term papers by consensus. Term papers, Reports, not Thesis Papers, in which a new Idea can be evinced using facts and Original Research and Synthesis. As such, we rely on what others say, and they say Black. Go change Obama's mind, go change the media's mind, America's mind, the Media's mind, and then we can change the article. This has been covered more often than is really necessary. And please read WP:SOAPBOX and WP:FORUM. ... we really need a WP:SCREED as well. ThuranX (talk) 05:51, 15 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Exactly, you are relying on self identification, a racial mindset, not on the facts which are in the article. You clearly didn't read my comments, he is black, but he is also multiracial they are not exclusive at all.  Don't you understand?  I have read the FAQ, and it's source of the African American article supports the view I have put forth.  He is both, and the article states that he is multiracial that is not the issue.  The issue is whether being multiracial is relevant or important.  That's it.  Again, you can be both otherwise obama could not be african american.  Don't you understand?  Again, this is not a new redo of whether he is african american, okay? This about the inclusion of him being multiracial (which is in the article currently) too.  Again, don't mention the "weight of sources" because these are not competing ideas, they augment each other.  He is black and multiracial, and being multiracial is noteworthy, and is already noted in the article.  he is the first multiracial president!  That's noteworthy, so please see my points before just saying "most sources say he is black" because that is irrelevant to what I am saying.  As I checked this is already stated, so now it is a debate about whether mixed race people are important enough for it to be noted in the intro.  I think they are, and anything less is very problematic to argue. JohnHistory (talk) 06:09, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * And, on top of that Obama has been shaped by his multiracial upbringing, and wrote about it extensively. There is a reason everyone knows he is multiracial, its because it was covered exhaustively.  Being black and being multiracial are not contending forces, and with the multitude of sources that discuss his multiracial background it is more then enough to add it, along with him also being "black".  Otherwise, you should take out the entire "early years" segment which details his multiracial background, and even uses the word multiracial.  The article already contains this.  And, I don't think it is a soapbox to tell someone else that they are being very offensive being by saying being of mixed race is not relevant, or important.  Clearly it has been to Obama and millions of other people. he is both things, and it in the article, and to say it is not relevant or important enough to be noted that he is the first ever to be president I think is incorrect.  This is not about him the old discussion, this is augmenting and it is through the logic of the African American article and the media, and Obama himself and the what's already in the wiki article on him.  JohnHistory (talk) 06:20, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * Did you read WP:SOAPBOX before you started talking about world policy? I'm talking about what's already in the article, his own books, using an inclusive term to be exclusive, and the media's wide coverage of his multiracial background.  you are talking about thesis papers, and someone's mindset.  Again, being multiracial, which he is by this own articles description and sources in the 'early years", does not mean he can't also be black.  Please try to analyze this before responding.  Again, the world "multiracial" is already being used in the article, it's a question of how "important" it is and how relevant it is, which to Obama it is and has been very relevant, and to millions of other americans who do identify as such it is, and is the first such president so it is to the intro along with african american and hawaii.  JohnHistory (talk) 06:27, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory
 * If Obama is not multiracial, then who is? If Obama can choose to be African American and not multiracial, then is african american simply a mindset that one can either choose to be, or reject at will?  If we are going to use the inclusive definition of african american, then is it okay to make it exclusive by rejecting the maternal side of his family that he has credited with so much?  Is there such a thing as people of mixed race background, or do you have to choose one or the other?  If african americans cannot be people of mixed race, then how can obama be african american?  Are we doing a disservice to people of mixed race by not mentioning him being the first one to be President?  Since being multiracial and being african american are not self excluding, why does it matter if many sources call him "black"?  Since the article already refers to his mixed heritage, are these sources and segment invalid?  Since the article already refers to him as being multiracial, is this not noteworthy in terms of him being the first one to become president, and in terms of his heritage?JohnHistory (talk) 06:48, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

How short our memories can become. This article by Time calls Obama biracial numerous times, and even cites african americans challenging his blackness and then swishes and swashes and shows how this not what we are for to debate or decide.. let's just state, as is already in the article, the facts and include him being african american and multiracial. We can't blow in the collective wind on an encyclopedia as this article shows many people were at the time, precisely due to the fact that he was just multiracial guy then and not the great Obama. JohnHistory (talk) 07:31, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory http://www.time.com/time/nation/article/0,8599,1584736,00.html

You are violating SOAPBOX/FORUM. You are expounding on a personal opinion of American society's issues with race here. You have to reply to yourself to make the conversation keep going. You admit already that 'biracial' is used in the article with regard to Obama, invalidating your claim that we don't use it and we should. This is nothing but someone bloviating endlessly about their views on why the world sucks. We get it, we just don't care to hear your lectures on why people suck for not agreeing with you. Your complaints about the article are by your own admission not problems. You like to read your own words. Please get a blog at blogspot, or livejournal, friendster, facebook, myspace, or buy a domain name for yourself. This isnt' the place for you to do what you're doing. ThuranX (talk) 07:37, 15 October 2009 (UTC)


 * excuse me? I'm not sure that made any sense in terms of this discussion.  I am adding things here to discuss with anyone who want to later, or possibly tomorrow.  Your logic before was totally flawed, and now you are coming back to spite.

Here I think this is a good article on the subject that even relates to the media and is post Obama winning the presidency. Or should I just not try to have a well informed and sourced discussion to look at over the next days and debate. It's not like I'm editing the article, or not trying to make good points despite Thuranx somewhat angry response, that responded to nothing. Thoranx, I was talking about the intro. Here read this, and tell me if you think it is reasonable. JohnHistory (talk) 07:45, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory http://www.post-gazette.com/pg/09034/946461-44.stm

I really think that the above article makes so many totally logical and valid points, and I hope all interested will read it. The media shaping obama as black is part of it, as well as Obama's embracement of being biracial (not just black) on a personal level and various people of mixed background and how important they are to keep in mind when we make such sweeping generalizations about race. Remember Obama does not think he is not multiracial, he just has felt like people perceive him as being only black. That is a big difference. I look forward to coming here tomorrow so that we can hash this out some more. JohnHistory (talk) 07:52, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory -And, ThuranX, what you said is the problem. he is already cited as dealing with being multiracial, and having a multiracial background, yet it is not allowed in the intro, that's the problem. Maybe you could do a little more reading before commenting next time. All the best. JohnHistory (talk) 07:54, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * If I can perhaps help, I don't think it's useful to think of this in terms of Wikipedia's "soapbox" issue. We have a valid concern about the conception of race in America.  Obama is, plainly, biracial.  In the long run that is probably the way things will go even if such description is forward-thinking at the moment.  He is also AA per America's current conception of race.  And then we have a body of reliable sources that are relatively conservative about the issue (conservative not in the sense of Republican / Democrat, but simply adopting the old language and conceptions of race rather than embracing the more current ones).  I think that's worth noting, although it's probably a losing argument at this point that we make a significant attribution that Obama is biracial.  It's arguable that this should be mentioned somehow in the article, and discussion of the substance behind that is reasonable background, not soapboxing.  It's best if all sides can focus on how this affects article quality, and how Wikipedia can best reflect the current state of knowledge in the world regarding race.  Hope this hels.  - Wikidemon (talk) 08:08, 15 October 2009 (UTC)

(EC)That article is of no relevance to Obama, it's about others who do self-identify as biracial, and their identity ideas, couched in the candidacy of Obama. Big deal. It's good for the biracial attitudes in america article, nto this one. His biracial nature's not in the intro because it's not that important - it's in the article because it's true, but we aren't giving it the WP:UNDUE weight you insist it's worth. Consensus doesn't seem to have changed on that, despite your obnoxious wall of text behavior, because editors and arguments, not output, is what forms consensus. Simply put, we give the matter a fair coverage in the article - numerous reliable sources call him the first black president, so we call him that, in the intro, where the weight of sources backs up our inclusion. Some articles discuss his biracial heritage, and our article covers that. This is simple stuff, seen with the eye of someone writing an article. But if you're going to look at it with the eyes of a political correctness warrior, you're not ever going to understand the policy matters going on here relative to writing a wikipedia article. ThuranX (talk) 08:10, 15 October 2009 (UTC)

I really have little else to say on this, as as far as I am concerned it is a settled matter. But to our esteemed JohnHistory, it would be in your best interests to rethink the places where you call other editors racists. i.e. "Again, I find this level of, I don't know how else to say it but racism, to be shocking. What gives you the right to deny people of mixed race any relevance?" Tarc (talk) 12:01, 15 October 2009 (UTC)

I'll be back in many hours, but Trac I stand by 100% my statements to you, and you should be the one rethinking comment like being "multiracial" is not "important" or "relevant", not me. As far as ThuranX, can someone please tell me what he is saying exactly? It seems to be very confusing, other then that biracial people do not deserve to be noted, which you Tarc, to my great offense, seem to agree with. Perhaps the lack of mixed race people in this country are the reason you can get away with saying such racist comments about them, and then turn around and accuse me of some wrong doing when I simply want to acknowledge their existence, Tarc. I mean, is not the denial of a whole minority of people based on them not being "important" enough to use your own words Tarc, a sort of philosophical genocide to society? JohnHistory (talk) 13:05, 15 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory


 * Reading through this rather long circular debate first off let me state that it is what the over all preponderance of references that refer to him as the first African American president that has the most weight in this article. Anything other then following the references would be considered Original Research and/or Synthesis.  Personal opinions on this subject do not factor in, nor what various groups of people think of the subject. I also want to comment that while some people refer to themselves as mixed race, not all those who are of mixed race think of themselves as mixed race and thus we should respect how they themselves and the references refer to them. I remind JohnHistory to read: WP:BLP, WP:RS, WP:UNDUE, WP:OR, and WP:SYNTH.  Brothejr (talk) 13:29, 15 October 2009 (UTC)


 * It is just one gargantuan WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT from this user, and not only a refusal to retract the racism allegations but he dives in and reinforces them to boot. "Philosophical genocide" ?  My fucking god.  Wondering if this is worth a trip to WP:WQA. Tarc (talk) 14:38, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Tarc, It might be best if you didn't pull a Jesse Jackson or Al Sharpton and start yelling racism. It's not helping to advance your argument or counter anyone else's, in my humble opinion.  QueenofBattle (talk) 14:59, 15 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Either people somehow ignore, or don't get that the weight of sources is irrelevant because you can be both multiracial and african american. Again, there are plenty of sources to augment his being black with, many in this article alone. This article already says he is "multiracial", so it has already been included.  Thus, it is just a question of if it is relevant, or important enough.  Since he would be the first multiracial person to become president it has to be noteworthy, and because he has discussed it and written books about it is important to him.  Here is the major thing the people against this are missing, Obama does not deny his multiracial background when self identifies as african american or black. He is not way denying he is multicultural he has said a 1000 times how diverse his family is, and he says it with pride when he describes the different colors and ethnicities of his family, thus we need to stop being so exclusive about this.  Using inclusiveness to be exclusive is not logical.  JohnHistory (talk) 02:05, 16 October 2009 (UTC)JohnHistory

Nationality
Should also include Kenyan as a former nationality in the infobox, as he was a dual-citizen up until his 23rd birthday. Just sayin'. --71.13.223.188 (talk) 00:12, 15 October 2009 (UTC)the end
 * Don't Forget British too.--Jojhutton (talk) 00:42, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Don't forget Wookie too!  Grsz 11  00:44, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure that we can find a reliable source for Wookie, but Rush Limbaugh may be able to.--Jojhutton (talk) 01:00, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * He's only half Wookie. Anyone else want to crack some jokes before this thread gets archived?  - Wikidemon (talk) 03:40, 15 October 2009 (UTC)
 * No. He is not a Wookie at all. I think he shelved Star Wars. Dr.K. logos 03:52, 15 October 2009 (UTC)

224 References?
If u look at the Barack Obama article u will see a very long scroll bar. Once u scroll down to about the middle of the scroll bar the article ends, and then u hav a list of over 200 references. im just suggesting, y not add one of those "show/hide" menu options? it would make it seem less cluttered at the bottom with all of those references. --Mark0528 (talk) 21:03, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Though not eloquently stated, I'm inclined to agree with the premise. Though I think it's be inappropriate to "Hide" the references (I'm even sure what would happen when clicking a ref's superscript if they're hidden), I think a would be more than appropriate. If no one has some serious objections to this method, I'll just go ahead and add it. Unless of course a template already exists to do it for me without XHTML markup&hellip; DKqwerty (talk) 21:15, 11 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I object strongly to this single-purpose ad-hoc fix to a highly prominent article. I can see many potential problems with the   idea suggested.  Off the top of my head:
 * Will it change the readability of a printout of the article (on any major browser/OS combination)?
 * Will it make it more difficult for readers of the article using hand-held devices?
 * Will it interfere with expectations of downstream syndicators of the article who do not know how to process that unusual tagging?
 * Will it make the article footnotes more difficult to access for readers using disability assistive devices.
 * Unless or until ALL of these questions can be answered with a definitive "NO", it is highly inappropriate to introduce this novelty. LotLE × talk  21:27, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
 * P.S. These questions apply at least equally much to putting a hat in the main article, which is simply not done in article space anywhere else I know of. LotLE × talk  21:28, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

I would add that if some well-tested template exists for dealing with the situation of articles with many footnotes, I would be happy to use it. I am not aware of one, but there are many MediaWiki corners that I do not know. We should not innovate wildly on what has been the most read article on Wikipedia (dunno if it is right now, but I'm sure it's near the top). The place to test an experimental feature is on some comparatively less active (and less actively modified) article... which might well have happened, I'd be happy to learn about the knowledge gained there. LotLE × talk 21:33, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

well first of all, any person reading this article that has any intelligence would know that if they were to print it out, and wanted the footnotes to show up, they would know that all they had to do was click the "show" button. For the second thing, again, all u would hav to do is click "show". Third, do u want to rephrase that? in more simpler terms? and lastly, again, its as simple as clicking a button, which im estimating would add an estimated 2 seconds to reach the footnotes? i have an example, which while it isnt used for footnotes, i dont see y it cant be used for them. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uncharted_2#Reception Ignore the content thats it being used on. My point is to show an example of the "show/hide" button that u would hav to click to be shown the content. It's on the right where it says "Reception"--Mark0528 (talk) 21:43, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

quoting this guy (who is on this talk page under the Nobel Peace Prize section towards the bottom) "It may be brought to AfD, but there's much too much info to squeeze it all into this already packed article. Even the current section is likely too much (after all, we've still got 3-7 years of presidency to go, plus post-presidency). Joshdboz (talk) 13:35, 9 October 2009 (UTC)" the part im referring to is when he says "after all we've still got 3-7 years of presidency to go, plus post presidency". meaning we could afford the space seeing as how HALF THE ARTICLE is references. and just because you havent seen it done on other major articles, doesnt mean we shouldnt start it with this one, although i admit i havent seen it done on any other articles either. this one it seems to be kind of essential though, because imagine an article possibly 4-5 times this long? just based on his next 3-7 years as president. --Mark0528 (talk) 22:10, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I see Mark's point (dude, whole words) and I've lamented the exceedingly long list of refs. However, I do get and support LotLE's points.  To Mark for some explanation, the "Reception" section is a box table.  Like Contents and those career discography boxes, we sometimes allow for collapsable boxes and tables, but references aren't boxed or tabled.  So from that technical standpoint alone, it's apples and oranges.  To your point about affording the space, Wikipedia only considers article text in their size constraints; infoboxes, photo captions, and references are not included when determining article size.  (See FAQ10.)  You can determine an article's actual length by copy-pasting it into a WP:Sandbox, deleting all the refs, infoboxes, photo captions, etc., and previewing.  Nobody's expected to read the reference section start to finish, but it's important that it be there.  Downstream means there are sites that WP:Mirror Wiki articles automatically, but do not duplicate its functionality with reference to collapsibility/interactivity of boxes and tables, they merely duplicate the linking.  Abrazame (talk) 22:28, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

ah ok. i understand your reasoning now. but hey, theres no harm done in tossing out an idea? --Mark0528 (talk) 22:37, 11 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Absolutely no harm done! Your criticism is welcomed as well-intentioned and productive, and my explanation was in the spirit of being friendly, not combative.  Best, Abrazame (talk) 02:47, 17 October 2009 (UTC)

Duplicative footnotes
While I definitely strongly oppose some experimental and fragile technical "fix", I think the regular work of editing is very relevant. In particular, without having carefully reviewed it myself, I strongly suspect that we have a large number of mostly redundant references. A source we use in one section might be perfectly adequate to support a fact we state in a different section. As often as that is the case, we can remove one of the references, and just refer to it in both places. This takes some real editorial work, but I would not be at all surprised if such work could eliminate 1/3 or even 1/2 of the references as redundant, while still keeping the article well compliant with WP:RS and WP:CITE. This cleanup can, of course, be done incrementally by as many editors who want to help. LotLE × talk 23:32, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

Change in the the lead, Nobel Peace Price Laureate is more notable than the senator time...?
Barack Hussein Obama II (born August 4, 1961) is the 44th and current president of the United States. He is the first African American to hold the office, as well as the first president born in Hawaii. Obama is the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize laureate. Obama previously served as the junior United States Senator from Illinois from January 2005 until he resigned after his election to the presidency in November 2008. Obama is a graduate of Columbia University and Harvard Law School, where he was the president of the Harvard Law Review. He was a community organizer in Chicago before earning his law degree. He worked as a civil rights attorney in Chicago and taught constitutional law at the University of Chicago Law School from 1992 to 2004.

Obama served three terms in the Illinois Senate from 1997 to 2004. Following an unsuccessful bid for a seat in the U.S. House of Representatives in 2000, Obama ran for United States Senate in 2004. His victory in the March 2004 Democratic primary election for the United States Senator from Illinois brought him to national attention. His prime-time televised keynote address at the Democratic National Convention in July 2004 made him a rising star nationally in the Democratic Party. He comfortably won election to the U.S. Senate in November 2004.

He began his run for the presidency in February 2007. After a close campaign in the 2008 Democratic Party presidential primaries against Hillary Clinton, he won his party's nomination. In the 2008 general election, he defeated Republican nominee John McCain and was inaugurated as president on January 20, 2009.


 * Is this change OK? I also think som information from the Presidency of Barack Obama should replace the third section and a short of the third section should be integrated into a shorter second section! Hogne (talk) 12:24, 16 October 2009 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure, it depends on how much importance to give to the award. Is it as noteworthy as being the first African-American president, or his Senate career? Tarc (talk) 14:22, 16 October 2009 (UTC)


 * If the Nobel had been given for his past achievements, it might well be more relevant. But since it was given for symbolic reasons and/or future hopes, I think the other things are more noteworthy.  Wasted Time R (talk) 14:26, 16 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Agreed with Wasted Time R. The current version, with mention of the Prize as the last phrase of the lead, is better. Receiving the Prize isn't really as significant a part of his biography as his senate career, winning the presidency, etc. --guyzero | talk 15:30, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
 * I tend to think the Peace Prize should come before Senator. There have been a couple of thousand Senators, and what, just over a hundred individuals who have won the Peace Prize?--Wehwalt (talk) 15:56, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The peace prize is the only thing in the lede that occurred after he actually became president. For that reason, it should come last, both to set it off somewhat, and to make the final three paragraphs flow generally in chronological order.  So the current lede should remain, except that it should end with 'for promotion of international diplomacy and cooperation' to give the Prize some context. CouldOughta (talk) 19:05, 17 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Re Wasted Time R, it's not up to us to judge how legit the Peace Prize was; a Peace Prize is a Peace Prize. However, I'd agree that it should not be mentionned right at the top; note that Woodrow Wilson and Theodore Roosevelt list it (with context given) around the middle or towards the end of the intro, and Nelson Mandela lists it right at the end of the intro (as Obama's does presently). Note that none of these are FAs; if there is a Peace Prize-winning FA then we might be able to use that as a better precedent. -M.Nelson (talk) 19:11, 17 October 2009 (UTC)