Talk:Betches

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I have chosen the Betches page as my project. I would like to add information that can contribute to a biography of the women. These three women are highly accomplished and their backgrounds deserve to be represented. I would also like to bring more recognition to their various pieces of work that include their social media accounts, website and books. I will also build a section that discusses some of the controversy that surrounds this social media platform.

History of the women:

https://moneyish.com/ish/the-women-behind-betches-on-growing-the-most-un-pc-of-multi-million-dollar-businesses/

http://www.nytimes.com/2013/06/27/fashion/laughing-all-the-way-to-the-bank.html

https://www.forbes.com/sites/tanyaklich/2018/02/01/the-betches-founders-rebrand-building-a-media-venture-beyond-instagram/#390b266293a4

Social Media/Websites

http://betches.com/

https://www.facebook.com/BetchesLoveThis/

https://www.facebook.com/betchessup/

https://www.instagram.com/betches/?hl=en

https://twitter.com/betchesluvthis?ref_src=twsrc%5Egoogle%7Ctwcamp%5Eserp%7Ctwgr%5Eauthor

Books

http://betches.com/books/

http://s3.amazonaws.com/betches/app/uploads/2018/01/31193208/Excerpt-from-%E2%80%9CI-Had-a-Nice-Time-and-Other-Lies%E2%80%9D.pdf

http://s3.amazonaws.com/betches/app/uploads/2018/01/31193208/Excerpt-from-_Nice-is-Just-a-Place-in-France_.pdf

Controversy:

http://www.digitalamerica.org/invasion-of-the-betches-repercussions-of-mean-girl-culture-morgan-gilbard/ Katiej2727! (talk) 15:26, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

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COI Edit
Specific text to be added or removed:

Remove "Kuperman" and replace with "Dreksler"

Remove "Fishbein" and replace with "Sage"

Remove "Nicole Pellegrino" and replace with "Fallon Carter"

Remove Aleen in "Diet Starts Tomorrow" and replace with "Emily Lubin" and "Remy Kassimir"

Reason for the change:

Kuperman is the maiden name and Dreksler is the married name

Fishbein is the maiden name and Sage is the married name

Nicole Pellegrino is no longer the host of Betchs Brides, Fallon Carter is the current host

Aleen is no longer the host of Diet Starts Tomorrow, Emily Lubin and Remy Kassimir are the current hosts

References supporting change:

https://weddingsalonofmanhasset.wordpress.com/2020/02/29/co-founder-of-betches-media-gets-married/

https://www.nytimes.com/2020/09/11/fashion/weddings/tie-dye-not-required.html

https://betches.com/podcast-channel/betches-brides/

https://betches.com/podcast-channel/diet-starts-tomorrow/ MC131313 (talk) 15:33, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

Reply 20-DEC-2023
Your edit request could not be reviewed because the request is not formatted correctly. In the collapsed section below titled Request edit examples, I have illustrated two: The first shows how the edit request was submitted; the second shows how requests should be submitted in the future.
 * 1) The citation style predominantly used by the Betches article appears to be Citation Style 1. The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.)
 * 2) Citation ref tags have not been placed within the requested text indicating which portions of the text the source is referencing. (See WP:INTEGRITY.)

INCORRECT The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.

In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Betches article. Additionally, ref tags have not been placed within the text at the exact positions where the information they reference resides. Using the correct style and the correct positioning of the ref tags, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:

CORRECT The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin. Which displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 1. ^ Harinath, Prisha. , Science, 51(78):46. 2020. ^ Uemura, Shū. . Academic Press, 2020, p. 2. 

In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc. Also, the ref tags are placed in the exact location where the text which they reference resides. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly write a new edit request, taking care to ensure that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to submit it as a new edit request below this reply post at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor.

Regards, Spintendo  22:51, 20 December 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you MC131313 (talk) 15:10, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

COI Edit V2
* Specific text to be added or removed:

Remove "Kuperman" and replace with "Dreksler"

Remove "Fishbein" and replace with "Sage"

Remove "Nicole Pellegrino" and replace with "Fallon Carter"

Remove Aleen in "Diet Starts Tomorrow" and replace with "Emily Lubin" and "Remy Kassimir"

* Reason for the change:

Kuperman is the maiden name and Dreksler is the married name

Fishbein is the maiden name and Sage is the married name

Nicole Pellegrino is no longer the host of Betchs Brides, Fallon Carter is the current host

Aleen is no longer the host of Diet Starts Tomorrow, Emily Lubin and Remy Kassimir are the current hosts

* References supporting change:

MC131313 (talk) 16:15, 27 December 2023 (UTC)