Talk:Bobbi Campbell

Garbled sentence?
In "The People With AIDS Movement" appears this sentence (fragment):

"When the activists stormed the stage of the closing session to present the Denver Principles, the 'Fighting for our lives' banner from the San Francisco march earlier that month, with the words becoming the slogan of the PWA Movement."

What about the banner? "When the activists stormed the stage, the banner, with the words becoming the slogan"? Did they carry the banner on stage? The verb in that clause is missing. I don't know the history to correct this myself. IAmNitpicking (talk) 14:30, 1 December 2016 (UTC)