Talk:Cambodia women's national football team/GA2

GA Reassessment
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I will be reassessing this article to determine whether it still meets the Good Article criteria. Any user is encouraged to assist in improving the article to keep it up to GA standards. Thanks. PCN02WPS ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 17:41, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * "and is governed by Football Federation of Cambodia" → "and is governed by the Football Federation of Cambodia"
 * "and Asian Football Confederation" → "and the Asian Football Confederation"
 * "has been slow with football not the most popular women's sport in the country" → "has been slow as football is not the most popular women's sport in the country"
 * "nation's first FIFA recognised women's" → add hyphen to "FIFA-recognised"
 * "when they played Laos" → link Laos women's national football team
 * Last two sentences reference "Festival of Football" and "Football Festival" - are these the same event?

History

 * Not entirely sure that the "Background and development" subheader is necessary given that there is no content elsewhere in the section
 * Link FIFA in this section since it's only linked in lead before
 * Give full name and link of ASEAN
 * Is the national association paid in US dollars or is that just a conversion?
 * In the second paragraph, "grassroots" is written three times: once as one word and lowercase, once as one word and uppercase, and once as two words and lowercase.
 * "Space to play sport is an issue facing all sports in the country" → repetition (emphasis is mine)

Team image

 * "Kits and crest" does not describe the crest at all
 * sexual exploitation of Nin and Vesna comes out of nowhere and is not expanded upon at all
 * "Kauw was a member of the Cambodia women's national under-14 football team in 2011" → who is "Kauw"?
 * "Some of the players who participated had never left the country before" → not sure if this is relevant to the topic
 * "The team is coached by Sam Schweingruber" → potential tense issue
 * Not sure if u13 field dimensions are relevant here

Players

 * "The following players were named on 9 September 2021 for the xxx tournament" → placeholder tournament name

Overall review conclusion
WP:GAR states that An individual assessment may be closed after seven days of no activity. As there has been no activity on the review for seven days (with the edits to the article in that period coming just as updates and adding results to fixtures), I am closing the review. My conclusion is that the article fails GA criteria 1a, 1b, 2a, 2c, and 3b at least, and therefore will be delisted. If improvements are made in the future, and the article is brought up to par, it can be renominated for GA. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 21:44, 9 July 2022 (UTC)