Talk:Cedar Point Shores

Expand
Please expand this page as much as possible. A picture would be nice along with more information on each attraction and history information.TPOLMike (talk) 20:04, 5 January 2008 (UTC)

NPV problems
The whole article reads like promotional material. Phrases like "for all to enjoy" do not belong in an encyclopedia. This needs a pretty thorough re-write, but I don't think it should be nominated for speedy deletion since Soak City is notable. Beggarsbanquet (talk) 21:56, 14 December 2010 (UTC)


 * I have ripped out a lot of the WP:NPOV and advertising in the article. Things like the admission prices and cabana rentals should never have been included. I have also condensed the other sections into one, and added the park's logo. What do you think now? Themeparkgc   Talk  23:37, 14 December 2010 (UTC)


 * NPOV-wise, it looks great. Now it's just more of an issue of expanding it beyond stub-length, and finding sources.  But great job- I didn't even know where to start with this! Beggarsbanquet (talk) 00:14, 15 December 2010 (UTC)

Plagiarism
A good portion of the "History" section appears to have been copied and pasted directly from this source that I found (look at the year 1988): https://web.archive.org/web/20110717095315/http://www.cedarpoint.com/public/news/history/index.cfm. I added the source as a reference, but the section will have to be rewritten. User3901 (talk) 04:16, 31 March 2024 (UTC)

I've added a couple of references to help with some of the plagiarism issues, but I was only able to find a few articles or sources that verified some of the years listed for when attractions opened or closed. User3901 (talk) 03:16, 1 April 2024 (UTC)