Talk:Christmas Scandal/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 18:37, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article and became hung up on this in the plot: "Soon after, Ann is horrified to discover that a news crew secretly followed Dexhart to her home and took a photograph of the meeting, resulting in speculation that Ann is Leslie's lesbian lover." Isn't Dexhart a guy? Why was Dexhart at Ann's home, and why does that show that Ann is Leslies's lesbian lover? (Sorry for being so dense.) Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:06, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Not dense at all, I didn't explain it clearly enough. Is it better now? —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "who revised his recurring role as Dave Sanderson" - do you mean reprised his recurring role?
 * Yep. I fixed it. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "Commentators said NBC may have been received a boost in the ratings due to repeats on ABC on December 10" - how do repeats increase ratings?
 * I tried to clarify. —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
 * "but was kept together by a number of strong comedic moments and subplot, including the parks department splitting Leslie's work, the April and Andy subplot and the scenes between Leslie and Dave" - could you clarify this?
 * Better? —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Thanks, you clarified everything. Nice work. Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:51, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 19:54, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
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 * 1) Is it stable?
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 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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 * Pass or Fail: Pass!