Talk:Daniel Cavanagh

Untitled
This article DEFINITELY needs a better photo. -- 16th April 2009 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.72.7.231 (talk) 19:53, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

POV
This article is written in the style of a promotional press release, and is full of unsourced personal opinions. Can someone please edit this piece, using Verifiability, and Neutral point of view as starting points. Thanks,

Derek R Bullamore (talk) 13:32, 15 February 2011 (UTC)

Rewrite
I'm rewriting this article. Please note that at the moment I'm mostly paraphrasing the original content into a more encyclopedic language, and this does not resolve most of this article's citation problems. I shall try to find adequate sources to verify these statements. Feel free to revert, or otherwise modify this edit. Several of my changes: Removed an excessive list of a dozen his favourite bands which seemed of no direct influence on his career, and the refrence to Thatcherism which might have been interpreted in a negative tone. MammonI.Dumah (talk) 20:45, 22 August 2012 (UTC) Generally, I just edited all the fan-like phrases out, trying my best to keep the original content. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MammonI.Dumah (talk • contribs) 20:34, 22 August 2012 (UTC)