Talk:Daniel Grieder

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Hello Jamiebuba, please have another look at the sources. Most of them cover Grieder significantly and discuss noteworthy aspects. Thus, I find the decline reason a bit hard to understand. Grieder is a very important person in the Swiss textile industry; source 3 (Handelszeitung) even argues that he is the “most important Swiss in the fashion industry”. Even though this claim is backed by a good source, I don’t want to write this in the article because I believe it would render the article’s style and tone too promotional. I have fixed some minor issues and removed claims backed by sources which one could argue don’t cover the subject significantly enough. I can also provide translations of foreign-language sources into English if that should be necessary. Kind regards, Emilnordpol (talk) 07:40, 4 October 2022 (UTC) Jamiebuba (talk) 09:08, 4 October 2022 (UTC)