Talk:Dokkyo University

Weird first paragraph
The first paragraph sounds like a poorly written advertising pamphlet. Also, it would be nice to remove some of the names, or else to situate them in a meaningful context. Most readers are not familiar with any of the names in that paragraph, I would imagine. --Douglaspperkins (talk) 05:17, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

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Added cites / trying to improve general quality of article
Hello everyone,

I have started improving the article, adding cites and removed the no-cites template in the partnering / exchange section just now, as I deem the citations sufficient at this point.

Hoping that you agree, all the best, Jörg--Ruhri Jörg (talk) 15:48, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
 * I have now also removed the remaining templates at the beginning of the article, hoping that its overall quality has lifted enough to justify that :)
 * All the best, --Ruhri Jörg (talk) 12:55, 12 July 2018 (UTC)