Talk:Droungarios of the Watch

DYK feedback
I reviewed this article for DYK, and although it was adequate enough to pass there, I said that there were some formatting issues that better belonged discussing here. I've done some minor copy-edits already, but I recommend that you ask someone to do a more thorough copy-edit. I'll bring the few formatting issues here: That's all; let me know how I can be of assistance. Good luck! Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 22:00, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Well, one copy-edit question, from the "Judicial office" section: The middle of the paragraph, in the very long sentence, the phrase "also known as the ,..." Is missing a word after "the" and before the comma.
 * Ok, one more: why are some people red-linked in the tables and others are not? I know that redlinks encourage the creation of new articles, and that limited uses of them are appropriate in some cases, but if you're going to link some and not others, I encourage you to link none.
 * The Laiou & Simon source is formatted incorrectly. It seems that it's an article in the book that's edited by them.  I suggest that you add the article title and its author to the template in the "Sources" section.


 * Thanks for the—more than usual—thorough review and for your copyedits. I've fixed the first point you raised, on the second, the difference is that for some of the people mentioned here, sufficient information exists, and/or they played a role outside holding this office sufficiently important for articles to be possible in the fullness of time. Those I've left unlinked are mostly hapax cases mentioned in a single document, seal etc, where an article would scarcely have meaning. On the third, I know and intended to do it, but forgot it. Thanks for reminding. Cheers, Constantine  ✍  08:12, 29 July 2013 (UTC)