Talk:Edward Cephas John Stevens

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I think that the "introducing people before explaining their connection to Stevens" is confusing: We get quite a bit about the Whitcombes before the connection (marrying the widow) is given 3 paragraphs later, and William Guise Britten has been introduced in the meantime. The background to the WHitcombes could easily be given in a paragraph starting "In 186whatever Stevens married Maria Whitcombe, widow of..." dramatic (talk) 06:22, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Fair comment. Do you want to have a go at improving it? I'd welcome that.  Schwede 66  09:55, 31 May 2010 (UTC)