Talk:Eleusinian Mysteries

incoherent entheogenic section
I have just read this page for the first time, and I found the section about entheogenic theories extraordinarily incoherent. I believe this is due to the work of several authors in disagreement who inserted contradictory statements regardless of whether in context they would make sense for the reader. Therefore I am going to attempt to bring this section into some kind of order editorially without deleting anything of substance. I just wanted to explain what I am doing—I have no opinion on the subject and don't intend to take sides in the debate. Londonbroil (talk) 08:48, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

"sport, paedophilia and a dodgy ritual?"
...as well as one of the three mainstays of Greek classical culture, the Olympic Games and pederasty (in certain areas) being the other two.

Are you seriously suggesting that Classical Greek culture boiled down to sport, paedophilia and a dodgy ritual? adamsan 20:04, 13 Aug 2004 (UTC)

I, too, consider that part to be a little far fetched, if not a plain POV. The sentence should at least include a reference such as "according to ..." But I'm still sure that Greek classical culture has more to it than these three aspects. Robin des Bois &#9816; &#10163; &#9993; 01:29, 17 Aug 2004 (UTC)
 * Yoink! adamsan 17:58, 17 Aug 2004 (UTC)

While I agree with both of you I hardly think that the Eleusinian Mysteries are 'a dodgy ritual', unless you regard things like the Eucharist as 'a dodgy ritual' too. The Mysteries are at the heart of Greek worship! ThePeg 22:36, 25 March 2007 (UTC)

(An Other) I almost want to say that the "pederasty" associated with this ritual is really just the expressed 'impressions' of certain individuals who would rather individual, independent investigation of such rituals cease. For whatever reasons those may be. Actually, I do want to say that. And anyone who disagrees with me would be a Fool and a Communoterrorist. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.174.120.38 (talk) 03:15, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

Corn?
"Following this section of the Mysteries was the Pannychis, an all-night feast accompanied by dancing and merriment. The dances took place in the Rharian Field, rumored to be the first spot where corn grew."

Corn? I think you should make clear that corn back then was any staple food grain, and not the corn, maize.

—Preceding unsigned comment added by Adamsan (talk • contribs) 17:58, August 17, 2004

Thanks for that clarification, it sent me down a rabbit hole. There's another section, in, In Art, Literature and Culture:

"Vases and other works of relief sculpture, from the 4th, 5th and 6th centuries BC, depict Triptolemus holding an ear of corn, sitting on a winged throne or chariot, surrounded by Persephone and Demeter with pine torches."

Although this is more confusing because it says, 'ear of corn' does the same apply here? And if so are other grains called ears? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.4.4.60 (talk) 18:06, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

Iacchus and Dionysus
According to the article stub Iacchus, the identification of Iacchus with Dionysus is uncertain. However there seems to be long-standing identification of the two according to the quotes given at Greek Mythology: IACCHUS / IAKKHOS. From memory Jane Ellen Harrison discusses the prominence of Dionysus in the Greater Mysteries at some length in her Prolegomena to the Study of Greek Religion (but I don't have the book in front of me). Is there some reason that I'm unaware of for doubting either the identification of Iacchus with Dionysus, or Dionysus' prominence in the rites? I believe (again, I would need to track down sources) that Dionysus/Iacchus/Zagreus is of major importance in the Orphic Mysteries as well. Fuzzypeg 00:47, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Ethnicity Restrictions
Was it possible for anyone regardless of ethnicity to become an initiate in the Mysteries or was it restricted to Greeks? Obviously my question is mostly relevant for the Roman age. Could Romans become initiated> Lucius Domitius 13:03, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
 * The Eleusinian initiation was open to anyone who could afford it. Cicero, who was initiated there, writes "I don't mention the holy and august Eleusis, where people from the remotest shores are initiated." (De Natura Deorum, I.119, "Omitto Eleusinem sanctam illam et augustam, ubi initiantur gentes orarum ultimae"). L&#39;omo del batocio (talk) 16:50, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

Cleanup
I think this article needs to be divided into sections, to break up that huge mass of text. It's currently very hard to read, and hard to know where to put new text.

I suggest the Mysteries section be broken down in the following manner: begin with a brief description of what events were held and when; move on to a section describing what the events were known to symbolise, and giving a bit more detail about the proceedings; and continue on to a section dealing with theories and interpretations. Fuzzypeg 01:50, 15 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Sounds good, go for it. --Heah talk 03:00, 15 February 2006 (UTC)

This looks good to me now. However, I did have one comment: in the "Entheogenic" theories, last paragraph, Phalaris could be added next to Acacia. If no one minds, I will do this now.... fine, consider it done! Next I'd like to replace "entheogenic" (what ever that is supposed to mean) with something a bit more precise and perhaps even academic, after a respectful pause212.149.205.113 (talk) 20:26, 26 March 2009 (UTC)

Entheogenic is the precise academic term. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tesseractyler (talk • contribs) 18:11, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

Failed GA
A clean-up tag and no references are why I've failed this. Wiki-newbie 16:18, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

Shibboleth?
Yes, only Greek speakers were initiated, but how does that relate to shibboleth? The implication is that there was some trick question asked of postulants, a test of pronunciation or meaning that foreigners would unwittingly fail. Surely this is not the case? It was a simple matter of not allowing non-greek speakers? Fuzzypeg ☻ 20:21, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

GA Review

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In reviewing this article compared to the criteria listed at WP:WIAGA, I found the following issues:
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I am placing the nomination on hold for no more than seven days to allow time for improvements to be made. Let me know if you need any help or have any questions by either responding here or dropping a line on my talk page. Regards, Lara  ♥Love  05:22, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. I have listed the article at WP:GA. Thank you for your hard work. In improving the quality of this article, you have improved the quality of Wikipedia. Best regards, Lara  ♥Love  18:19, 31 July 2007 (UTC)

needs to be cleaned up some, I've never edited pages, so if someone can do it that would be great. Someone slandard the last sentence of the page. Thanks, -B —Preceding unsigned comment added by 150.135.66.26 (talk) 19:22, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
 * In my opinion the current article, while decent, is not GA material. The relevant scholarly debate isn't even sketched and marginal, controversial views are given undue weight. Perusing Burkert's book, which was added as a reference only a few days ago, may provide a starting point for substantial improvements. Just to give an example, Synesius' famous quote of Aristotle's views on the Mysteries isn't currently mentioned. The article should provide a context where such crucial information can be meaningfully inserted. L&#39;omo del batocio (talk) 10:45, 1 March 2008 (UTC)

summer or winter?
When they told me of Demetra and Persephone as a child, they taught me that Kore lived with Hades during the winter months. It seems logic. Why should ancient Greeks consider summer a dead period?

Matt —Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.19.93.38 (talk) 14:07, 24 January 2008 (UTC)


 * There's a lot of scholarship that debates the two different interpretations. It would be sensible for the article to note the controversy.  I recall running across one or two good refs pertaining to this topic on JSTOR. Robert K S (talk) 03:55, 25 January 2008 (UTC)


 * "/According to the prevailing version of the myth, Persephone had to remain with Hades for four months while staying above ground with her mother for a similar period. This left her the choice of where to spend the last four months of the year and since she opted to live with Demeter, the end result was eight months of growth and abundance to be followed by four months of no productivity./"


 * "/The Eleusinian Mysteries probably included a celebration of Persephone's return, for it was also the return of plants and of life to the earth. Persephone had gone into the underworld (underground, like seeds in the winter), then returned to the land of the living: her rebirth is symbolic of the rebirth of all plant life during Spring and, by extension, all life on earth./"
 * Is is clear that winter is the dead season? FenixEden (talk) 23:45, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

"This reading of the ritual, however, does not square with the central foundation document of the mystery, the Homeric Hymn to Demeter line 415, where Persephone is explicitly said to return in the spring of the year, not the fall: 'This was the day [of Persephone's return], at the very beginning of bountiful springtime.'" The Mediterranean climate may have been different 3000+ years ago and/or the myths are inherited from immigrants, eg, Dorians, from more northern Europe, eg, Balkans. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.3.34.135 (talk) 19:40, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

Taylor
Evidence on the Mysteries from Thomas Taylor is quite suspect, as he was a devoted Neo-Platonist interested primarily in the mystical aspects of Plato. His use of Plato as evidence of the actual mysteries likely conflates the two; it is far more likely that Plato transfigured the symbols and acts of the mysteries, mixing them with the symbols of other cults (e.g. Orphism), rather than reporting them. 134.117.196.196 (talk) 19:06, 16 February 2010 (UTC)tdal

The following is suspect: "However, one researcher writes that this Cista ("kiste") contained a golden mystical serpent, egg, a phallus and possibly also seeds sacred to Demeter.[11]" The source given is self-published; a better source must be out there somewhere. Oh, and the name of the publisher is misspelled: it's "Lightning Source" not "Lighting Source." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.19.115.61 (talk) 22:46, 11 October 2008 (UTC)

Expanded Lesser and (especially) Greater Mysteries section.
Dromena, deiknumena and legomena were central aspects to the ritual's climax. Ifnkovhg (talk) 07:22, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Beginnings of the Cult
There are two statements -- one in the intro and one in secton 2, "The Mysteries" -- that claim the Eleusinian Mysteries began in the Mycenean period ca. 1600 BC. The citations are to sources from 1915, 1947 and 1961. This is a controversial conclusion that has been extensively debated since the early 1980's. I'm not sure, but I think the consensus opinion today is that the cult originated in the 6th century BCE. If this is true (the fact needs to be checked) it's important to update this article to make it current with the last 25 years of scholarship.Yonderboy (talk) 04:58, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I added some reliable references. The Eleusinian Mysteries were influenced by the religious practices of the Mycenean period.Jestmoon(talk) 13:12, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Epopteia
In the "Participants" section, the Greek word epopteia is given an English translation of "contemplation". Does anyone have a source on this? If you consult the LSJ lexicon, epopteia must be epi (upon) + opteuein (to look/see), meaning "a look upon", i.e., a vision. I have not come across any other direct translations of the word, but "contemplation" seems very misleading and seems to read in philosophical appropriations of the Mysteries. 134.117.196.196 (talk) 19:34, 16 February 2010 (UTC)tdal

Entheogenic Hypothesis Number 3
As Barley/Wheat and Pomogranate are foods part of the ritual, it makes sense that the drink was made from them. I am guessing Beer or Mead is a possiblity here. If either beer or mead "go bad", do they form a fungus/bacterium that is mind-altering; any references? 2010-07-08 T01:45 Z-7 PDT 76.90.232.7 (talk) 08:45, 18 July 2010 (UTC)
 * The ergot fungus grows on grains such as rye and, I believe, wheat. It has been suggested as the entheogenic source elsewhere.  As an aside to this, I note that the article talks about the contents of the chest and the basket and suggests that there may have been mushrooms in one of them.  The article says in the chest, but I think it means in the basket.  In other words when it says:  However, one researcher writes that this Cista ("kiste") contained a golden mystical serpent, egg, a phallus and possibly also seeds sacred to Demeter.[14] The contents of the chest might have been similar to Central American mushrooms of the genus Psilocybe[verification needed].[15]  I believe it should read The contents of the basket might have been similar to Central American mushrooms of the genus Psilocybe  I read the source for the mushroom hypothesis, unsurprisingly Wasson, and he does suggest them as the source but does not specify whether it is the chest or the basket.  I could swear I had read before that the chest contained ritual objects and the basket what was passed around, which would make sense if mushrooms or morning glory seeds or something like that were being used.

As for the reference to drink, I do wonder what word was used for potion and if it always meant a liquid. This may be part of why we are having trouble divining this mystery. I'm fairly certain that nothing that happens to beer or mead after it is made can increase its entheogenic properties. It is possible that you could make a drink from ergot-infected grains and have some effect, as it is said that bread made from ergot-infected rye did have psychedelic effects Rifter0x0000 (talk) 21:47, 24 July 2010 (UTC)

origins-establishment
In my opinion the origins and the date of the establishment are not verified in the article and by the references.It is possible that the origin of similar mysteries was Egypt,but it is more propable that the Eleusinian mysteries combine a Creto-Pelasgian vegetetion cult with a cult of ressurected gods which came later from the East.(M.Renault:The four seasons of greek philosophy).R.Wunderlich (The secret of Creta) believes that the "mistress of the Labyrinth" became the Godess Demeter.Her title in the Eleusinian mysteries is kept by her daughter Persephone (ko-re).Persephone had also the surname Despoina (miss).(Despoina was the godess of the mysteries of Arcadian cult).This possibility must be included in the article.The double edged-axe labrys which propably gave the name to the Cretan labyrinth was the symbol of matriarchy (F.Schachermeyer:Die Minoische Kultur des alten Kreta) and the priests at Delphi were called "Labryades" (The men of the double axe). The Myceneans conquered Creta at 1450 B.C,therefore the date of the propable establishment of the mysteries in the article (1600B.C or 1800 B.C as in ref (1)) is not confirmed and must be revised.Creta had a strong connection with Egypt,but a complete diferrent relegion (Furumark).It is very difficult to believe that the mysteries came direct from Egypt during the Mycenean period (ref.(1)) and this must be verified by experts.94.65.192.182 (talk) 08:58, 3 August 2010 (UTC)

Blood guilt
I don't think being free of "blood guilt" meant NEVER having committed a murder. Surely someone could be cleansed of blood guilt by bathing somewhere holy, Myrvin (talk) 14:39, 10 September 2010 (UTC)

Alcibiades
The article on Alcibiades contradicts the statement in the article that he was condemned for performing the Elusinian mysteries at home. This statement must be cited or it needs to be removed. Spiral5800 (talk) 12:46, 16 September 2010 (UTC)
 * That article states that he was condemned for profaning the mysteries. Do you object that it doesn't actually say how, whereas this article does? Myrvin (talk) 12:29, 17 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Pro tem I have changed the wording a bit and added a citation. Myrvin (talk) 12:52, 17 September 2010 (UTC)

Autumn?
"Finally, by consulting Zeus, Demeter reunites with her daughter and the earth returns to its former verdure and prosperity: the first autumn." Shouldn't this be 'spring'? Myrvin (talk) 12:25, 17 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Definitely so. TWx4eABO5y (talk) 17:39, 21 September 2013 (UTC)

"An ear of corn in silence reaped"
Under the Section "Mysteries", sub-section "Secrets"; the quote of "An ear of corn in silence reaped". Refers to grain; not actual corn or maize. Maize corn is native to North America, Europe never had it until European explorers took it back with them. "Corn" is one word for grain, until Columbus and Leif stumpted their keel into North America. So, in European English, corn = grain; maize = corn-on-the-cob. Similar to American English Buffalo is really a Bison, Buffalo are from India. 2010-09-29 T16:28 Z-7 PDsT 76.90.73.133 (talk) 23:28, 29 September 2010 (UTC)

Altered States
I added this category and the following while watching H2 just now... '''Altered consciousness was acheived by those practicing the Eleusinian Mysteries. Often, drugs were used for the initiates to experience different mental perceptions.'<ref]The Stoned Ages'', History Channel (H2)</ref] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brad Watson, Miami (talk • contribs) 17:02, 14 September 2012 (UTC)


 * If it was the History Channel, I'm surprised they didn't say the altered states were caused by aliens. However, it's certainly possible to find scholarly sources that suggest the use of psychotropic drugs at Eleusis and elsewhere, and the ecstatic trances associated with some mysteries would qualify as an "altered state." The article content should probably support inclusion in the category better, but only if such content has good-enough sources. Cynwolfe (talk) 17:36, 14 September 2012 (UTC)


 * this whole too long section here and in article is nothing but sheer speculation, ... the rites and others worldwide were about connecting to heaven in a real tangible way and that could include visions, not substance abue,,, etc. such rites bring this connection to initiates, later jesus bringing it to all via him and otherwise as masonic rites bringing the connection to their initiates today ...

arepo sator AO 24.186.53.181 (talk) 13:43, 17 April 2014 (UTC) ...

Vague statements
It is unclear what the sources for several of the statements in the first section may be.

Of all the mysteries celebrated in ancient times, these were held to be the ones of greatest importance. (By whom)

It is acknowledged that their basis was an old agrarian cult which probably goes back to the Mycenean period (who acknowledges this?)

The idea of immortality which appears in syncretistic religions of antiquity was introduced in late antiquity.[2] (Poorly worded and unclear)

216.184.15.172 (talk) 08:22, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I've had a go at this. Myrvin (talk) 14:16, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

etymology
Ελεούσα — милостивая — Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.30.66.73 (talk) 11:46, 26 September 2014 (UTC)

global expression
the eleusian mysteries (see 1st paragraph) and very very early, far older than expressed, e.g. the cucuteni pottery show the fully expressed symbols of the entire religion/mysteries circa 5,000-7,000 bc; so too, global not just Greece, with similar early before Greece existed, expression, in asia; we could use global proven artifacts e.g. to show Assyrian 2,000 bc immigration to peru, Bolivia and including via asia / asgard to show migration of the mysteries circa 2000 bc to asia and on to south America... but the even earlier expression fully blown in those cucuteni pottery and c 5000 bc in Egyptian namer palette, show all this 1000s of years before Greece expression... again, what is referred to is not drug/dope induced mindlessness or pederasty - all the babble of the article...but connection to heaven, making initiates be godlike ... via Riemannian wormholes, esp as the babble that is science, not following in the instantaneous nature of such connections to all, which brings back to you, (ahk) all power ...47.18.43.166 (talk) 04:13, 7 March 2015 (UTC)lil ma, sa ba ka, ma sr, AO
 * You need some references for that . . . nothing about it at the Cucuteni-Trypillian_culture article. Wormholes?! Raquel Baranow (talk) 14:19, 8 March 2015 (UTC)

Mythology of Demeter and Phersephone
If we suppose that Persephone stayed with Hades for four months and Demeter eight months

?? Did people divide the year into twelve months in those days? I thought that the number of months that were considered to be in each year changed in Roman times from ten to twelve.Createangelos (talk) 22:10, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Myth was written 650BC, calendar was changed 713BC, I suppose the writer didn't want to confuse people. Raquel Baranow (talk) 22:31, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Entheogenic theories section (revisited)
I corrected the ergot alkaloids reference. Ergot primarily contains ergotamine as well as ergonovine. It does not contain ergine (LSA). As described by the ergot article, ergotamine is '"a complex molecule consisting of a tripeptide-derived cyclol-lactam ring connected via amide linkage to a lysergic acid (ergoline) moiety"'. So while the ergotamine molecule contains an ergine molecule, ergot does not contain ergine any more than you could say that salty food contains chlorine. Note that ergotamine can be hydrolyzed into ergine through a simple chemical process that would have been available at the time -- the use of lye made from adding ashes to water, and this is also theorized in The Road to Eleusis. Perhaps this should be clarified in this section. --Thoric (talk) 18:58, 23 February 2017 (UTC)


 * On the subject of this section, it feels like it needs a substantial rewrite. Parts of it seem to suggest there's a consensus around a psychotropic element to the Mysteries, and aside from a reference to "pointed scepticism" it's hard to tell that this is a fringe theory that mainstream classicists mostly reject. 79.79.254.66 (talk) 22:17, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Mainstream classicists only insist that it was and remains a 'mystery', they do not claim that it did not involve a hallucinogen. --Thoric (talk) 22:31, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

Famous participants
There is no historical evidence that Socrates or Plato participated in the Eleusinian Mysteries. Socrates, in fact, was famous for never leaving Athens except as a solider during war. Plato *might* have participated, but that is only speculation; never in his extensive writings does he mention having participated; neither do his ancient biographers. In any case, the source cited (an online article that's full of inaccuracies and unsubstantiated opinions, and has not undergone peer review) is a non-reliable source. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Practical321 (talk • contribs) 11:49, May 25, 2019 (UTC)
 * , I removed the sentence in question as speculative. The statement fails verification since the source quotes these authors as only mentioning mysteries in passing as part of making other philosophical points.  This fails for two reasons: it doesn't confirm that they themselves were initiates into the mysteries and it doesn't confirm they were speaking about the Eleusinian mysteries specifically. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 15:42, 17 February 2020 (UTC)

skirts an issue
Skirting this issue is a good thing. Apparently there have been assumptions that animal sacrifices were performed inside the buildings dedicated to the Mysteries. This article argues against that as late as 2002. https://www.jstor.org/stable/pdf/3270542.pdf?refreqid=excelsior%3A55229e53df8ac1f81d461a83bfa39e49 100.15.127.199 (talk) 23:49, 11 July 2020 (UTC)

Cited source says opposite of what is listed here
The information on this page appears to have been presented so as to indicate an interpretation of the Mysteries that opposes the source cited as support.

Under the 'Priesthood' section of the article, we find the following:

You can see that all of the citations here are to reference #45, which is Sarah B. Pomeroy's book Goddesses, Whores, Wives, and Slaves: Women in Classical Antiquity.

However, if you actually check Pomeroy's book, she says exactly the opposite:

As you see, Pomeroy does not identify the priesthood as men serving only minor roles. Indeed, she explicitly says that the two major roles, hierophantes and torchbearer, were men who were assisted by female priestesses, which is the opposite of what is state in the wikipedia article, despite citing Pomeroy to support that contention.

Can we correct this? I don't want to do so on my own without at least opening it for discussion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kaw71 (talk • contribs)
 * , you are correct in what the source says, please feel free to correct the inaccuracies in that section. It might also be appropriate to mention that the dating of the events used the name of the High Priestess (The priestess was eponymous--that is, at Eluesis events were dated by the name of the priestess and her successive years in office.) Schazjmd   (talk)  22:05, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

No evidence or dates cited for "two millennia" claim
Twice in the article, the claim is made that the Mysteries were practiced as "a consistent set of rites, ceremonies and experiences that spanned two millennia." No evidence is provided for this claim and there is not even any indication anywhere in the article of what dates that two thousand year span of consistent practices is alleged to cover. Helen P. Foley, in her background essay to the Homeric Hymn to Demeter says one thousand years: https://www.degruyter.com/princetonup/view/book/9781400849086/10.1515/9781400849086-005.xml — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kaw71 (talk • contribs) 21:54, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Relationship with other mystery rites
This sentence, which was added by an IP editor in 2010, has problems:

"'Comparative study shows parallels between these Greek rituals and similar systems in the Near East. Such cults include the mysteries of Isis and Osiris in Egypt, the Adoniac of Syrian cults, the Persian mysteries, and the Phrygian Cabeirian mysteries. '"

The original source for this claim was The Builders by Joseph Fort Newton, a history of Freemasory that is more than a century old. I recently removed the sentence on the grounds that it wasn't a reliable source, and I was reverted by User:Charles Bélanger Nzakimuena, who added the Leeming source. Since then, I removed the phrase "some of which are older" from the sentence, and User:Ermenrich then removed the citation to Newton and added the verification tag.

These recent actions are an outgrowth of a dispute at Talk:Mysteries of Isis. While I don't have access to the Leeming source, Charles Bélanger Nzakimuena quoted some passages from it, two of which could be read as at least partially supporting the sentence above: "In Greece the most popular initiatic group was the Eleusinian mysteries, into which Plato was admitted. The rites of Dionysos, Orpheus and others flourished as well as mystery religions from Egypt (Isis), Syria (Cybele and Attis)." (from the entry on initiation on page 874) and "mystery religions in Egypt (Isis) and the Levant (Cybele and Attis) came to be very influential in Roman times" (from the entry on mystery religions on page 1240). These passages are pretty vague, but not significantly more so than the passage in this article that they're being used to support.

The fundamental problem here is lack of clarity and context. This sentence doesn't say what these "parallels" are, and in its vagueness it glosses over a lot of details about the relationships between mystery cults. The rituals surrounding the Cabeiri may have some kind of connection to the cultures of Anatolia, but like the Eleusinian mysteries, they were practiced in Greece itself and their origins lie somewhere in the murky Greek Dark Ages or the Archaic Period. The idea that there were mysteries dedicated to Adonis is apparently a long-standing conjecture in the scholarly world, but without much evidence to back it up. The mysteries of Isis, as I've substantiated with multiple authoritative sources on the talk page of that article, were produced when the cult of Isis spread into the Greek cultural sphere and the Eleusinian model of mystery rites was applied to it; apparently something similar happened with the cult of Cybele from Anatolia, although the above sentence doesn't mention Cybele. And the "Persian mysteries" mentioned above are those of Mithraism, whose connection with actual Persian religion is tenuous and hotly debated, but which only emerged in the first century AD.

The sentence in dispute doesn't do justice to those complexities. It implies that the mysteries all originated independently; ignores that the Cabeiri were almost as venerable and almost as thoroughly Greek as the Eleusinian mysteries themselves; asserts the existence of Adonis's mysteries as fact; ignores the bitter contention surrounding the origins of Mithraism; and fails to mention that the mysteries of Isis and Cybele owe a great deal to those of Eleusis, a point that is surely worth mentioning in this article. A. Parrot (talk) 03:46, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
 * On that basis I think that the sentence should simply be removed as not doing justice to the complexities of the situation.--Ermenrich (talk) 13:24, 28 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Agreed. I mostly just wanted to lay out the problems with it in detail, given that I was reverted the last time I deleted this sentence. I've removed it again. A. Parrot (talk) 14:32, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

"Revival"
This is an event that occurred at Elefsina this year, certainly. Is it really a "revival" of ancient religious practice? Furius (talk) 16:58, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
 * From what I can access of the article, characterising the event as a "revival" seems wrong; "multi-media installations and dance displays to a conference of scholars" doesn't equate with "revival of the Eleusinian Mysteries". I'm sceptical it deserves mention here at all, and I would be in favour of removing the section. – Michael Aurel (talk) 23:35, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
 * As no objections have been raised to this suggestion, I have removed the section. – Michael Aurel (talk) 20:47, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I think that was the right call Furius (talk) 21:26, 4 December 2023 (UTC)