Talk:Equinix

Competitors
Equinix competitors list reads like an industry overview:

Colocation Providers
AT&T, CenturyLink, COLT, CyrusOne, Level 3 Communications, NTT and Verizon Business.

Carrier-Neutral Colocation Providers
CoreSite, Digital Reality, Global Switch, Interxion and Telehouse.

Wholesale Data Center Providers
Digital Realty Trust, DuPont Fabros Technology, e-Shelter and Global Switch.

Managed Hosters
AT&T, CenturyLink, NaviSite, Rackspace, SunGard and Verizon Business.

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COI edit requests
Hi! I work for a communications firm that represents Equinix, and I'd like to request some updates to this article:

Lead

 * Updating ref for 2017 revenue in infobox:
 * Adding ref after :
 * In first sentence, replacing  with the more specific.
 * Updating the second sentence with a more current reference and updated data:
 * Updating second paragraph for grammar fixes and newer information (ref name already in use in article):
 * Deleting, which is redundant of infobox and outdated.

History

 * I recommend making the "Expansion" a subsection of the "History" section titled "Acquisitions and expansion".
 * To that end, I recommend deleting  from the end of the first paragraph. It fits better as part of the "Expansion" section, and the second sentence is sourced to a press release.
 * At the end of the second paragraph, replacing  with

Acquisitions and expansion

 * Add to beginning of section:
 * Deleting the stray  at the end of the second paragraph.
 * Combine the two paragraphs that both start with, and change the second   to.
 * Seems to me like the "The size of the deal..." paragraph should be part of the paragraph before it. I could also see removing it entirely; I'm not certain it's notable.
 * Condensing the "In September 2015" paragraph a bit, retaining the same ref:
 * Deleting, which is sourced to primary sources.
 * Updating the last paragraph with secondary sources and more recent news:
 * Current:
 * New:

Data centers

 * In first paragraph, updating  to   (This figure was recently updated in the live article without updating the source, which does not reflect the new number.)
 * Deleting, which I think is probably WP:UNDUE.
 * Adding to end of second paragraph:
 * Deleting, which is sourced to a primary source.

Data center (IBX) locations

 * I think this makes most sense as as a subsection of "Data centers".
 * I also don't know that this needs the full table treatment; a simple list of countries may work better. Notably, Portugal is missing from the list.

Due to my COI, I won't be editing the article directly. I tremendously appreciate any help or feedback. Thank you! Mary Gaulke (talk) 22:30, 11 February 2019 (UTC); request edit template added Mary Gaulke (talk) 17:18, 13 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Mary Gaulke - at first glance this all seems quite reasonable to me. However, your request requires a huge amount of work due to the number of edits involved. It might be easier for us to process if you simply sandboxed a version of the article with all of these edits incorporated so we could just copy/paste the whole thing en masse (while also preserving the point-by-point here for review purposes). Chetsford (talk) 08:07, 16 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Understood, and thanks for the feedback! I've created that mockup here. It includes all the article contents with the exception of the categories. Notably, in addition to the changes above I made one more change, removing from the top of the article, while retaining . At this point I think only the latter applies, but of course want to flag in case you disagree. Thanks for your time! Mary Gaulke (talk) 22:50, 18 February 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Thanks, I have no issue with any of these changes and - since there has been no discussion on this page indicative of any active disagreements and no substantive edits on the article in three months - have implemented them all. I have removed the advertisement and COI templates as neither are intended to be permanent and, in the absence of any actual discussion regarding them or objection by active editors, should not mark the page ad infinitum. Chetsford (talk) 23:09, 18 February 2019 (UTC)
 * Amazing, thanks so much. Mary Gaulke (talk) 16:55, 19 February 2019 (UTC)

COI edit request: Advert flag
Hi! As noted above, I work for a communications firm that represents Equinix.

A few months ago, added  to the top of this article, but did not note why. As said above, this template is usually meant to be temporary while a discussion about the article's tone is ongoing. So I'd love to start that discussion. I've done a review of the article's text and didn't spot any obvious issues. Does anyone else have thoughts on which areas of the article need to be fixed? If so, I'm happy to help with providing a first draft of proposed changes; if not, I'm requesting that be removed from this article.

Due to my COI, I won't be editing the article directly. Thank you for your help/feedback! Mary Gaulke (talk) 20:35, 23 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Thanks for abiding by the COI editing conventions. I don't have time today to review the text, but will try to do so in the next couple of days if no one else does first. - Dyork (talk) 01:47, 24 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Hi! Giving you a ping in case you'd still like to review; otherwise, I'll just add . Thank you! Mary Gaulke (talk) 14:02, 26 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Hi! These last couple of days have been a bit insane, so I've had no chance to review. I might over the weekend... but feel free to add that request to see if someone else has cycles before I do. - Dyork (talk) 02:09, 27 June 2020 (UTC)


 * - Hi there. I did get a chance to review. Unfortunately I do have to agree that the page is a bit more promotional than encyclopedic. It's also very LONG. Ideally a Wikipedia page should give people a concise overview of the company, its history, notable activities, etc. I do think a rewrite of some parts would be good. I think a shorter, leaner article would better serve readers. Some examples of parts I feel could be adjusted or removed:


 * "Over the next seven years, the company nearly tripled its data center portfolio, growth the company attributes to increased demand for interconnection services caused by the emergence of ..." - this last part could be removed.
 * Parts of the Acquisitions section feel like they could be condensed. Perhaps at the time some of the extra sentences might have been worthwhile, but years later they are no longer necessary.
 * Under "Data centers", "Equinix claims to have invested more than $25 billion since its founding to build its data center platform." is an example of the "tone" that seems off.
 * Under Data centers, Cloud, and Enterprise, there is a good bit that feels promotional about how Equinix is responding to various different changes. Another example, "Equinix says its appeal to the enterprise market is based on its network density, cloud expertise and what it says is a growing enterprise"
 * I'm not clear on why there is a separate small section about "US Government Clients" - I'm not sure that is notable enough to be included in an encyclopedia entry.
 * Similarly, the "SmartKey" section seems very random and more there to promote a product from Equinix. If this is notable, it may make more sense to be included in the earlier section about the services Equinix provides.


 * Those are just some of what I see as areas I suggest need some work. Part of it is - if you were reading an encyclopedia entry about Equinix, do these sentences really merit being included? Do they inform the reader succinctly about Equinix?
 * If you do want to take a shot at a first draft in a sandbox page, I would certainly look at that. - Dyork (talk) 18:11, 27 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi! Thank you for this feedback. I've worked up an updated/shortened sandbox draft, here. I also created a version in which all changes to the current article are highlighted/struck through, to make it clear what I added and removed. Let me know what you think, if you have any questions, or if there's any other way I can be helpful in how I format this. Thanks again. Mary Gaulke (talk) 19:52, 21 July 2020 (UTC)


 * - Thanks for doing this! On a quick glance, it looks like a much improved article! I will have more of a chance to review later this week. Thanks! - Dyork (talk) 01:48, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi! Just a reminder in case you'd still like to take a look. If not no worries; I can open up a new edit request. Thanks for all your help so far! Mary Gaulke (talk) 16:32, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Too funny. I literally just opened up a Wikipedia window and went to this page to leave you a message saying I'm still intending to take a look later this week. I see a notification alert, and I assume that is probably your ping here. :-) Yes, I still have it in my queue. (That said, if any other editors see this and want to start making changes, please feel free to just go ahead!) - Dyork (talk) 21:45, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi! Just a heads up I'm adding the edit request template. Mary Gaulke (talk) 11:41, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi, sorry to pester but giving you one more ping just in case you have a chance to take a look. Mary Gaulke (talk) 13:53, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi . I've reviewed your changes and since they indeed constitute an improvement, I have gone ahead and ✅ them (diff). Apologies for the long waiting time, thanks for complying with our COI policies and best, Blablubbs (talk • contribs) 12:36, 7 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Addendum: I have also merged the sustainability section into the history section, since having an entire section on sustainability that is comprised of only a couple sentences strikes me as giving undue weight. Blablubbs (talk • contribs) 12:57, 7 November 2020 (UTC)

2021 COI edit requests
Hi, COI editor for Equinix here again, with some new requests:

Lead

 * In infobox, update
 * num_employees     = 8,700
 * num_employees_year = 2020
 * to
 * num_employees     = 10,013
 * num_employees_year = 2020


 * In first paragraph, update
 * The company is a leader in global colocation data center market share, with 210 data centers in 25 countries on five continents.
 * to
 * The company is a leader in global colocation data center market share, with 220 data centers in 26 countries on five continents.


 * In second paragraph, update
 * as of 2020, it had approximately 8,700 employees globally.
 * to
 * as of December 2020, it had approximately 10,000 employees globally.

History

 * Add to end of second paragraph:
 * In September 2020, the company shifted its branding to describe itself as a "digital infrastructure company".


 * Add to end of "Acquisitions and expansion":
 * The company expanded into India in August 2020 with the acquisition of GPX India, including a campus in Mumbai with two data centers. In October 2020, Equinix completed the acquisition of 13 Bell Canada data centers.  The company also invested heavily in hyperscale xScale data centers.

Data center (IBX) locations

 * One of the sources for this section is now a broken link. I think it makes sense to delete it and just keep the other source . If we want to replace it, we could use . There are other external listings, but they're not up-to-date.
 * Per the sources, add Mexico to the "Americas" list.

Environmental impact

 * I think it makes sense to make this a subsection of "History".
 * It could also make sense to move some information from the "Acquisitions and expansion" subsection of History to here. Specifically, this paragraph (updating "The same year" to "In 2015"):
 * The same year, the company made a long-term pledge to power its entire data center platform with clean and renewable energy. The pledge followed criticism in 2014 from the environmental group Greenpeace, which said in an annual report on the environmental practices of Internet companies that Equinix had an insufficient commitment to renewable energy and carbon emissions mitigation. The company signed deals with wind farms in Texas and Oklahoma to buy enough renewable energy to offset the energy consumption of its North American data center portfolio.
 * As well as the penultimate paragraph:
 * In 2019, the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency named Equinix one of 17 Green Power Partners leading the transition to renewable energy.


 * Add after the above but before the current section contents:
 * In September 2020, Equinix priced $1.35 billion in green bonds to finance new and existing green projects. At the same time, the company announced a Green Finance Framework to standardize transparency reporting for green debt disclosures. In November 2020, the EPA gave Equinix its 2020 Green Power Partner of the Year award.

Thank you for your time and your feedback. Mary Gaulke (talk) 15:24, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead & update it. Thank you! Loh Shi San 罗熙善 (talk) 06:44, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Marking this and implementing momentarily. Mary Gaulke (talk) 15:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)