Talk:Fasana-e-Azad

Copy-edit
Hi. Hope, you are doing well. Could you copy-edit the quote I have put in the 'Background' section. I have copied it directly from a PhD dissertation. So, it needs paraphrasing to avoid copyvio. Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 20:09, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Since your translation was excellent I thought by copy-edit you meant paraphrase, which is what I did. But if you want just a copy-edit, I'll erase what I did and re-examine your version. I must admit I was a little distracted, since I did this hurriedly during ad breaks in the film Last Vegas, which I liked because it was similar to incidents in my own life. Apologies if I misunderstood. No problem with time. Get back to me and I'll fix it anyway you wish.Nishidani (talk) 21:27, 29 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Hey Nishi, I think that this will work. What you say ?
 * I will correct the errors. Don't worry. And thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 17:29, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
 * On any article where you need some assistance, I'll be there (Covid permitting!). You nreally are doing important work. Now, if there's anything unsatisfactory just ping me. Stay safe.Nishidani (talk) 19:54, 30 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Hi . I know you are too busy. But could you help me in copy-editing of 'Publication history' section of this article? I am about to publish it with some minor addition. No any urgency. Do it as per your convenience. Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 18:52, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Removal of contents
Hi Although you have provided edit summary for this changes, I don't know why you removed the contents from the lead ? The fact is supported by citation in article body. Thanks. --Gazal world (talk) 13:53, 6 September 2020 (UTC)


 * My apologies. Whenever I see words such as "technically", "considered by ... some", and "thought by most scholars" I immediately look for a citation to back up the statement.  Apparently I didn't look closely enough :).  I will undo the change.  I would suggest that you revise the statement to be more specific.  You might want to refer readers to the section "Scholarship" with a link or something.  Or you could consider removing it from the lead entirely since it is discussed in detail in that section.  -- John (Johnnie Bob (talk) 14:12, 6 September 2020 (UTC))