Talk:Feminism in Chinese communism

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2021 and 22 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Vivianzheng1. Peer reviewers: Nish0912, Kat975.

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How has feminism in Chinese government and society improved in the 2000's?
As more females become involved in governments across the world, how has Chinese representation for gender improved? Vivianzheng1 (talk) 06:04, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
This article “Feminism in Chinese Communism” is rated as a C Class, an intermediate article with room for improvement with a completeness score of 41, a rating that I agree with. This article currently holds a rudimentary foundation for explaining the basics of feminism in Communist China, but has significant room for improvement. Strengths of this article include the outline and structure in which it will be easy to add to the different sections and bring them together as a cohesive piece. Some improvements this article can undergo is significant addition to each sections and the adding of new sections, such as possibly a "current” section which talks of what feminism currently looks like in Chinese Communism and what is being done. The lead specifically should undergo much improvement to substantially introduce the article’s topic and outline the major sections. The article, currently, lacks flow which make it very hard to read and gain an adequate understanding about the topic. It would be helpful to add logical transitions and deliberately place topics in a manner where it makes it easy for the reader to understand. Overall, I would classify this article as one that is currently underdeveloped with room for improvement but has potential to be great. Hope this was helpful & Good luck!

Nish0912 (talk) 00:13, 9 December 2021 (UTC)