Talk:Ganghwa County

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''Ganghwa has been recognized as preserved most important history of peninsula from the prehistoric age to modern times (Non-sensical, how can something been historically important in prehistoric times? Most important history would also imply this area takes precedent over the Seoul area and any other area in Korea). Relics and remains of prehistoric age, old stone age and new stone age were found of their various vestiges in Jangjeongni, Sagiri, Dongmangni and others respectively in the symbolic huge stone relics of Bronze Age, more than 80 dolmens were discovered in the vicinity of Bugeunni and neighbouring area, of which giant tombs revealed the existence of inhabitant there.''

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Ganghwa has been historically significant since the stone age. Relics and remains dating from the Stone Age to the Bronze Age were found in Jangjeongni, Sagiri and Dongmangni. More than 80 dolmens were discovered in giant tombs in the vicinity of Bugeunni and the neighbouring area, indicating that a complex and ancient society once existed there.

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