Talk:Ghulam Sarwar Khan

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Copy editing
The paragraphing in this article is very clumsy and repetitive, so I'm trying to correct and tighten it. I'll also copy edit. Best regards, George Custer&#39;s Sabre (talk) 04:47, 7 January 2018 (UTC)
 * You removed some essential information which I have restored. We need to explicitly mention the name of the house, the subject was elected to. --Saqib (talk) 05:48, 7 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Be at peace, my friend. We both want the article to be accurate, reliable and readable. Particularly with regard to readability, I've just got rid of needless repetition. Best regards, George Custer&#39;s Sabre (talk) 05:58, 7 January 2018 (UTC)