Talk:Human/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add alt text to every image in this article.
 * Alt text is not a GA requirement. I will work on them if you insist, but it might take a while. Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "In common usage the word" "In common usage, the word"
 * "2.8 million year old" "2.8 million-year-old"
 * Remove the comma after "branched progression".
 * "In the 5th century BCE history" "In the 5th century BCE, history"
 * "In Africa the Kingdom" "In Africa, the Kingdom"
 * "In West Asia the Achaemenid Empire" "In West Asia, the Achaemenid Empire"
 * Add a comma after "the fall of the Western Roman Empire in 476".
 * Add a comma after "this same time period".
 * "super powers" should be written as one word (see article).
 * "early 1800's" "early 1800s"
 * "enhancing exchange of resources" "enhancing the exchange of resources"
 * "Through invention humans" "Through invention, humans"
 * "overconsumption and combustion of fossil fuels has" "overconsumption and combustion of fossil fuels have"
 * Remove the comma after "in some individuals".
 * "Through history human populations" "Throughout history, human populations"
 * "body weight and body type is" "body weight and body type are"
 * Add a comma after "the 23 pairs of chromosomes".
 * "hundreds of thousand" "hundreds of thousands"
 * "harbour" and "labour" "harbor" and "labor" (consistency)
 * "which are private" "that are private"
 * Remove the comma after "development in the human".
 * Add a comma after "in developing countries".
 * "to a painful labor" "to painful labor"
 * Not sure about how this improves the sentence. Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "time periods".
 * Add commas after "for example" (both times).
 * "Central African Republic" "the Central African Republic"
 * Add a comma after "the developing world".
 * Remove the comma after "in human culture".
 * "and the way in which they are prepared" "and how they are prepared"
 * "more lower" "lower"
 * I feel more is needed here. Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a hyphen between "chromosome related".


 * "debate over what extent" "debate over to what extent"
 * "processing of the things in experience" - reword
 * Done Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "the mental processes'" "the mental processes"
 * "which can be defined" "that can be defined"
 * Add a comma after "in which case".
 * "behavioural" and "practised" "behavioral" and "practiced" (consistency)
 * "as of quality" - reword
 * Resolve the  tag.
 * That has been resolved Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "all the diverse human societies" "all diverse human societies"
 * Remove the comma after "locally occurring".
 * Is "auditively" a word?
 * It is . Changed to audibly as that is more common. Aircorn (talk)
 * "Art is a defining characteristics" "Art is a defining characteristic"
 * Is "musics" a word?
 * I think this is alright in this case. We are talking about multiple different ethnic musics, not a single type ethnic music. Aircorn (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "humans musical abilities" "humans' musical abilities"
 * "synchronised" "synchronized"
 * "30,000 year old" "30,000-year-old"
 * "humans capabilities" "humans' capabilities"
 * "species of animal" "species of animals"
 * "In many societies it is" "In many societies, it is"
 * "social organizing principle" "social organizing principles"
 * "who identify" "that identifies"
 * "Also there is no" "Also, there is no"
 * "on what" "of what"
 * "ethno-political" "ethnopolitical"
 * "obtaining power and ability" "obtaining power and the ability"
 * Optional for this article but try to archive references.
 * Thanks for the review. Will work through these. Aircorn (talk) 00:07, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry, life got in the way. Many of these were done by other editors while I was away. I have made the other changes or have left a comment above. Thanks for reading the article and your useful review. Air<b style="color: green;">corn</b> (talk) 08:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)