Talk:Human Flesh/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheDoctorWho (talk · contribs) 06:55, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

Hello, I'll review this article:

Lead

 * Many things in the lead aren't mentioned later in the article. As the lead should summarize the things in the article, I'd expect to see a production section that might mention the writers and the directors, a casting section for the guest stars, or a release section for the air date and the broadcaster. On that note, none of that information is sourced.
 * The production code in the Infobox is also unsourced.
 * The image in the Infobox will need alt text.
 * The article needs a short description.

Plot

 * The plot section is too long. It's currently 551 words long, but should be 400 words or less per MOS:TVPLOT.

Reception

 * I'm concerned that the reception section largely relies on quotes. Some paraphrasing and additional reviews may help strengthen the section.
 * The Metacritic review is for the season overall, not the individual episode.

Background

 * This section may be better as part of a development subsection under a production header.

Overall
Hope these comments help! The Doctor Who (talk) 06:55, 16 February 2024 (UTC)


 * it's been five days with no response, I'll have to fail this in another two if I receive no response. I notice you've made a few edits to the article, is this something you've been working towards?  The Doctor Who  (talk) 04:48, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
 * @TheDoctorWho Oh no, I'm just a passer-by editor trying to facilitate the GAR process really, and did some occasional edits just to help out. Dcdiehardfan (talk) 04:54, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
 * With no response here from the nominator, nor the message left on their talk page I'm going to have to fail this article. If the issues are addressed, it can be re-nominated at a later date.  The Doctor Who  (talk) 10:00, 23 February 2024 (UTC)