Talk:Internet anomalies in mainland China in 2014

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Hi,

Overall really good job! I think the main thing you should focus is fixing official names for translations, for example the Great Firewall as those can be kind of tricky. I also suggest streamlining the information by fixing the headings, for example, editing the definition section to be more like a Lead, and probably taking out the Comments section. I don't believe that I've seen that on English Wikipedia so I would try integrating it's information into the body. The whole article was very easy to follow, I would take some time to clean up the investigation section though since it has the most information. Another small thing is in the Process section, there's a parenthesis that looks like it's supposed to be a Chinese translation, but it's just the English repeated. Start adding in internal links for some specific people and companies that are referenced throughout to help the reader understand what's going on. Otherwise, very well done :) Coffeeluvr (talk)

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Uhh this is not good.
 * 金山毒霸 the antivirus by Kingsoft is unfortunately translated into Jinshan Drug Lord.
 * Citation titles should NOT be translated. If you must, use |trans-title=.
 * Some mistranslations due to poor writing on the zh side, such as "writing stuff on a Baidu domain". It's not written on the domain if you are visiting thru HTTP!
 * Nobody removes the Great Firewall, they only circumvent it. Not that the whole blame-the-DIT thing isn't a sham intended to not tell people about the GFW existing.

Welp. Artoria2e5 🌉 10:35, 29 January 2023 (UTC)