Talk:Interstate 95 in New Hampshire/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bneu2013 (talk · contribs) 06:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article, and will have comments soon. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC)


 * Update - sorry about the delay in reviewing, something came up, and I got busy with other things. I will have my first comments in a few hours. Bneu2013 (talk) 19:49, 17 May 2023 (UTC)

- comments have been posted. Bneu2013 (talk) 22:10, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
 * All comments have been addressed.  Sounder Bruce  00:14, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
 * New comments have been addressed.  Sounder Bruce  07:52, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * No major issues. I was caught by the statement that the turnpike begins "near" the Massachusetts state line, but I see that is where the tolling begins.

Route description

 * Confused about the liquor stores. Since this sentence says the Interstate crosses two state highways without interchanges, how are they accessed?
 * Split to avoid confusion. The liquor stores have exits, while the other highways do not (which is typical for a turnpike).
 * Is "Hampton outlet" a proper name? If this refers to something in the town of Hampton, move the link to the town here.
 * Not a proper name. Link moved.
 * Change second use of "NH 101" to "This highway" or something else.
 * Shifted things a bit to have all NH 101 information contained within one sentence.

History

 * In final sentence of first paragraph, change "was" to "were" and consider linking NH 1 to the history section of U.S. Route 1 in New Hampshire.
 * Done, but with some added filler to prevent confusion.
 * Change "was opposed" to "faced opposition" and comma after "beaches".
 * Done, with some reworking for better flow.
 * Does "limited exits" mean limited-access, or a limited number of exits?
 * The latter has been added.
 * State highway engineer Daniel Dickenson resigned from their positions - did someone else also resign? If not, change to "his position".
 * Fixed.
 * Morse was later fired from his position by Frank Merrill, the new state highway commissioner following the resignation of Frederic E. Everett. - how much later was this firing. Was Everett's resignation also a result of this scandal?
 * Removed Everett.
 * I've never heard of 24-ft wide lanes. Maybe 12 ft lanes?
 * The source is inconsistent, so I've opted to remove the measurement entirely.
 * Was the Massachusetts spur built at the same time?
 * Not clear in the sources.
 * Consider mentioning that the I-95 designation was applied to the turnpike when AASHO approved the numbering in August 1957.
 * The month is not as important here.
 * Was the US 1 Bypass ever designated as part of I-95, despite not meeting interstate standards?
 * Not clear from the sources I have on hand.
 * Change "constructed" to "reconstructed in the sentence about the 1968 widening projects. Also, was this a Massachusetts project?
 * Using "rebuilt", and unsure about jurisdiction here. If it's not in the newspapers, I'm in the dark.

Tolls
This certainly isn't a requirement, but a lot of articles about toll roads contain a history of the toll fares, and their inflation-adjusted price.
 * I consider that to be excessive, especially for a non-system article. The initial toll is already mentioned and it should be enough for a non-enthusiast.

Exit list

 * Is "All Maine Points" a proper name? Is this also what the signs say?
 * It matches the signage.

General comments

 * Images are properly licensed.
 * Passes the Earwig test.
 * No more issues. Passed.