Talk:Karl Bowman

Potential References
Hrt4Music 00:42, 7 July 2011 (UTC)

Changes made and suggestions for improving article
I correct some capitalization, punctuation, and grammar errors as well as linked pages.

Under the Psychiatric Work heading, I think this sentence "Bowman was also a board member of the American Board of Psychiatry and Neurology." would make more sense in the paragraph above where it talks about everything Bowman was involved in.

Under the Schizophrenia heading, this sentence "This was executed by inducing a fever within the patients using various methods, such as the malaria virus." does not make sense, specifically the placement of "such as the malaria virus."

The lead section could use a little more information/summary of the article. Summarize what Bowman was most known for in the lead section.

In the references section there is a double citation, they just have different accessed dates. Also, either add unused, but helpful sources to the External Links section or delete it.

JSchaef (talk) 23:44, 26 July 2011 (UTC)