Talk:Kashifu Inuwa Abdullahi

Content written like an advertisement
Seeking the help of my fellow Wikipedia editor on the subject of this talk on Kashifu Inuwa Abdullahi's page. Thank you as you help Zarah Abdurrahman (talk) 14:09, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
 * When you have two entire sections on "Key achievements" and "Awards and recognitions", with citations to things as trivial as Twitter, then you're clearly trying to promote the subject. And I removed His past roles have honed his capabilities and amassed valuable experiences that have thoroughly equipped him for his present position., which could be said to apply to almost any person in existence. * Pppery * it has begun... 21:02, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for this helpful comment Zarah Abdurrahman (talk) 08:41, 8 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @Pppery
 * Could you please indicate the areas where this wikipedia page still reads like an advert even after making the necessary edits? Zarah Abdurrahman (talk) 10:05, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
 * What necessary edits? You've not addressed either of my concerns above. * Pppery * it has begun... 14:19, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Your comment is not helping. Kindly indicate where your think there are concerns on this page Zarah Abdurrahman (talk) 14:45, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I did exactly that above. This is clearly not going anywhere. * Pppery * it has begun... 00:32, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
 * @Pppery Have you reviewed Zarah's edits before | this diff? Do your concerns still exist? NotAGenious (talk) 11:47, 17 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes. I still think having two entire sections listing "Awards" and "Key contributions" is inherently promotional writing, and there's pretty much nothing left other than that. * Pppery * it has begun... 16:05, 17 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Yeah, using Like resume and copyedit instead of advert works for me. * Pppery * it has begun... 22:28, 18 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi everyone. I haven't looked at the sources in depth, just working on the tone for now. I've started on the lead and career section. Haven't finished. Please take a look and make any necessary changes and/or discuss here. It is too promotional but nothing major that can't be fixed with good old fashion editing. And yes, I agree with Rublamb. People from different parts of the world use the English language differently.Tamsier (talk) 05:00, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
 * This section is promotional, so I'm copying and pasting it here but removing it from the article. I've already summarised in the article's career section.
 * === Technical Assistant to the DG of NITDA ===
 * Abdullahi worked as the Technical Assistant between 2017 and 2019 to his Content development predecessor, Isa Pantami, where he played a key advisory role in areas such as IT regulation, local content development, and digital inclusion.
 * He played a key role in the coordination of local content initiatives in 2017, which increased the ICT local production.
 * His efforts led to significant cost reductions in procurement processes, ensuring efficient project delivery and achieving over 5% reduction in the budgets of major projects.
 * Tamsier (talk) 05:08, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Hello Everyone, I have observed that this particular page is currently restricted from any form of editing. Isn't there an alternative means through which proficient Wikipedia editors could be granted access to amend this page appropriately, thus addressing the issue of persistent promotional content? From my observations, I suggest that some parts should be written. I can drop the written parts on the talk page if you would like? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tsubey (talk • contribs) 10:10, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
 * This page is not protected. Anyone except Zarah Abdurrahman is free to edit it. * Pppery * it has begun... 14:44, 10 May 2024 (UTC)