Talk:Leave Home/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 03:04, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

Nominator: Crowz  RSA

Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  03:04, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much!! Crowz  RSA  03:20, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

1: Well-written
 * a. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * b. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

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 * 5) ** Major Point 1: Conception "Songs on the album were written immediately after the band's first album's writing process, which demonstrated the band's progression. The album had a higher production value than their debut Ramones and featured faster tempos. The front photo was taken by Moshe Brakha and the back cover, which would become the band's logo, was designed by Arturo Vega." & "The song "Carbona Not Glue" was taken off the album because it violated the trademark of the stain-removal product Carbona. The track was replaced with "Sheena Is a Punk Rocker" in the United States and "Babysitter" in the United Kingdom; however, all three of these tracks were included on the 2001 expanded edition." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 6) ** Major Point 2: Promotion "The album was publicized with three singles, but only one succeeded in charting. It was also promoted with several tour dates in the United States and Europe." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 7) ** Major Point 3: Compositions "The songs in Leave Home concentrate on various themes, with the musical tones being diverse as well. Some tunes were more pop-oriented, while others, like "Gimme Gimme Shock Treatment" and "Pinhead" were loaded with distorted guitars and had a more punk rock sound." (summarised well in the lead)
 * 8) ** Major Point 4: Reception "It was released on January 10, 1977 through Sire Records, with the expanded CD being released through Rhino Entertainment on June 19, 2001." & "Critical reception for the album was generally favorable, with several reviewers pointing out the fact that it highly resembled the band's debut album. Critics also said the album was less groundbreaking than their debut, but had humorous and enjoyable pieces. The album peaked at 148 on the Billboard 200 despite its critical acclaim as well as the band members expecting more commercial success." (summarised well in the lead)
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 * 10) ** Major Point 1: Conception "Songs on the album were written immediately after the band's first album's writing process, which demonstrated the band's progression. The album had a higher production value than their debut Ramones and featured faster tempos. The front photo was taken by Moshe Brakha and the back cover, which would become the band's logo, was designed by Arturo Vega." & "The song "Carbona Not Glue" was taken off the album because it violated the trademark of the stain-removal product Carbona. The track was replaced with "Sheena Is a Punk Rocker" in the United States and "Babysitter" in the United Kingdom; however, all three of these tracks were included on the 2001 expanded edition." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 11) ** Major Point 2: Promotion "The album was publicized with three singles, but only one succeeded in charting. It was also promoted with several tour dates in the United States and Europe." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 12) ** Major Point 3: Compositions "The songs in Leave Home concentrate on various themes, with the musical tones being diverse as well. Some tunes were more pop-oriented, while others, like "Gimme Gimme Shock Treatment" and "Pinhead" were loaded with distorted guitars and had a more punk rock sound." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
 * 13) ** Major Point 4: Reception "It was released on January 10, 1977 through Sire Records, with the expanded CD being released through Rhino Entertainment on June 19, 2001." & "Critical reception for the album was generally favorable, with several reviewers pointing out the fact that it highly resembled the band's debut album. Critics also said the album was less groundbreaking than their debut, but had humorous and enjoyable pieces. The album peaked at 148 on the Billboard 200 despite its critical acclaim as well as the band members expecting more commercial success." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body)
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 * 16) *** "Leave Home is the second studio album by American punk rock band the Ramones."
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2: Verifiable with no original research
 * a. Has an appropriate reference section: Yes
 * b. Citation to reliable sources where necessary: excellent (Thorough check on Google. Cross-checked with FA – Reign in Blood)

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3: Broad in its coverage

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4: Neutral

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5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes

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I'm glad to see your work here. As per the above checklist there are no issues with the article and it’s a GA. However I’d recommend that:
 * The "Cite error" in the references be fixed.
 * Crowz RSA  19:25, 7 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks --  Seabuckthorn   ♥  19:36, 7 February 2014 (UTC)

Besides that, I think the article looks excellent. All the best, --  Seabuckthorn   ♥  09:05, 7 February 2014 (UTC)

Promoting the article to GA status. -- Seabuckthorn   ♥  19:36, 7 February 2014 (UTC)