Talk:Lightwater Valley

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 January 2020 and 20 April 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aleah H..

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:34, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

WikiProject class rating
This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 03:16, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Badly written
I don't have an account on here, and I'm not even sure if I'm doing this right, but this article is really badly written. There are exclamation marks on the end of almost every sentence. Can somebody edit it? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.102.126.81 (talk) 22:13, 2 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Replaced by full stops. Keith D (talk) 22:11, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

This article really reads like an advert. I've replaced some bits - but really need to be reviewed. PMBO (talk) 21:31, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

Redundant information
I'm removing a section on The Ultimate, as it has it's own page, so surely all information on it should go there. Correct me if I'm wrong :P Xtreme2000 (talk) 21:53, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
 * It may have its own article but per Summary style this article should contain a summary of that article, especially as there is a mention of it in the lead of this article. May be the section needs a trim but not removing all together. Keith D (talk) 23:17, 2 March 2013 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 22:00, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Upcoming Changes
I have noted that inappropriate information is frequently added to this page from various IP addresses instead of verified user accounts. During these next two weeks, I will be removing said information and reorganizing certain sections to make this page more appropriate for Wikipedia, in accordance with policies concerning neutral point of view and WP:NOT. These changes, as well as any deleted information, will exist in my sandbox at User:Aleah H./sandbox-lightwatervalley.


 * I had deleted the information regarding individual seasons in order to meet the WP:PROMO Requirements and maintain article objectivity. If you would like to discuss this or other changes, I would be happy to do so via this forum, but adding promotional material goes against Wikipedia guidelines as stated in WP:5P. Please refrain from adding inappropriate information in the future. As this may be the result of conflicting interests concerning promotional material, I have posted a notice to WP:COIN.


 * Aleah H. (talk) 22:06, 29 February 2020 (UTC)