Talk:Michelle Lyons

conde nast citation
the new yorker article apparently autocited conde nast (the fashion brand) as an author. can someone please fix it? i'm not too familiar with fixing the citations. thanks. Bremps 09:48, 17 December 2022 (UTC)


 * fixed it Bremps  04:10, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Poorly written for a DYK article
I was going to edit the most obvious mistakes (see below), but the whole article needs rewriting. As it stands it reads like a badly sub-edited tabloid piece. I'd even suggest that there's a case to be made that the subject isn't notable enough to be in Wikipedia at all

> "she had saw" should be: "she had seen"

> "sexist discrimination" should be: "sex discrimination" (it may be sexist, but that isn't the usual phrase)

> "Lyons has changed her views surrounding the death penalty after she learned of her pregnancy" should read: "Lyons changed her views... etc" HieronymousCrowley (talk) 05:21, 3 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello, I'm Bremps, the primary author of the article. I'm quite new to writing articles. Do you have any advice for my future writing?  Bremps!  05:26, 4 January 2023 (UTC)