Talk:Murray Bowen

Page needs work
I respectfully suggest that this page needs work, at least out of respect for Bowen's extraordinary contibution.

Part of the problem is poor writing, including poor grammar. Proof reading seems to have been absent or negilible.

Also, there are inconsistencies in the narrative. An expert on Bowen needs to review the text with an eye to historical and theoretical accuracy.

Michael Bergman Masters in Counseling Therapy Program St. Martins University Lacey, WA 24.17.184.60 (talk) 21:23, 11 November 2008 (UTC)


 * We are all working together here. If you have some ideas, go ahead. -- Marcel Douwe Dekker (talk) 15:48, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Added tags "ref improve" and "cite check"
I noticed that most, if not all of the citations in the reference section are not up to Wikipedia's standards. Several refer to a page number and a date of publication, but have no additional information about the book. One is to a self-published blog, another to a home page of a website, and two seem to just be footnotes added by an editor. As such, this article needs a lot more references to support the content of the article. --Sennsationalist (talk) 20:29, 29 November 2014 (UTC)

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