Talk:Narendra Modi/Archive 8

Critique of Gujarat "miracle": Unnecessary addition of section
The subsection "Critique of Gujarat "miracle"" reflects a biased piece of writeup with a view to malign Narendra Modi. The article is about Modi and not for underachievement of his Government. If somebody has his/her view about the govt for being poor in HDI, it should not be part of the article, as the article is a BLP and not about Gujarat govt. The same logic has been given by an editor named Sitush for when a edit was made in Akhilesh Yadav's article. The same should be removed as it violates the BLP andNPOV policies of wikipedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 08:52, 12 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Not sure about this. The section directly above ("Development Projects") is also about the government. Should that also go? If not, then perhaps this section should be a sub-section (or a paragraph) of the Development Projects section. --regentspark (comment) 12:32, 12 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It is a criticism. Criticism will be against one person, finding his faults. So I don't feel there is any problem with the content under "Critique of Gujarat "miracle"" subsection. Irfannaseefp (talk) 17:14, 13 September 2013 (UTC)

"Cabinet issues": Title and content mismatch
In the subsection "Cabinet issues", the content describes some controversies due to a speech and other cases. Is the title to be changed to something else ? Irfannaseefp (talk) 17:19, 13 September 2013 (UTC)

Thank you!
I just wanted to thank everyone working on this page for doing such a good job on such a controversial topic! I came here expecting to find an article torn by edit warring and filled with maintenance tags. I've put in a couple of inline tags for problematic lines but by and large the article is well written and nicely sourced. If anyone is interested in pushing this towards GA (and later FA?), please let me know - I would be happy to chip in. I remember both the Barack Obama and Mitt Romney articles were brought up to FA status in the run up to last year's US presidential election. It would be great if we can get FA-class articles for all the major candidates before the 2014 parliamentary elections. S Pat  talk 20:10, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Good idea. The article is largely okay now but needs copy-editing (many references are just URLs, some sections are not balanced). But we can all work together to improve it and push this to GA and then maybe FA. Gmcssb (talk) 22:00, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Was it a pig that just flew past my window? - Sitush (talk) 07:44, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

Still do not understand this quote
We say "In 2003, when Narendra Modi was asked about the conflict of his dreams for Gujarat's future with international criticism of his past activities, Modi said,[50] "Yet, no one has asked this question to the USA after 9/11. Delhi is developing fast – no one has asked this question to Delhi after 1984. If it does not matter to Delhi and USA, why should it matter to Gujarat?"

I am sure that I or someone else has raised this before but I still do not understand it. We are reporting an answer to a query about conflict between his dreams after criticism of his activities. His response is clearly not addressing that. Sure, I get the point that he is suggesting that terror in those two places has not inhibited them and so why should it in Guajarat but he is actually ignoring the question. Since he has had no role in the government of the US or Delhi and the events that took place there did not (by and large) attract criticism of their respective governments for any alleged promotion or tacit acceptance of terror, his response makes him look a bit silly and it is a non sequitor. What happened in those places did not involve him nor did they involve a similar criticism of those in power to that which he endured. Do we really need to mention it? Have other people asked that question of him? Is it really quote-worthy given its irrationality? Was it widely reported? Is it due weight? - Sitush (talk) 21:34, 18 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It doesn't work in the article. A quote should be used to support something in the text of the article (e.g., so and so has expressed support for such and such "I support the activities of such and such" he said. But where the quote currently is the article is talking about the economy of Gujarat and the quote appears out of left field and makes no sense at all. It should go (and I'm taking it out). --regentspark (comment) 00:58, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

Biased lead
"He is a controversial figure ..." -> This is an opinion/view. Any opinions and views need to be ascribed. "He is described as a controversial figure by .... (media outlets/authors)" is more neutral statement. If strong words like "controversial figure" are used to present the view of his critics, why cannot "demonized by media" be used in the same line? The lead needs to be balanced, and not biased by giving undue weights to views critical of him. Gmcssb (talk) 07:16, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I have changed the statement to give equal weight to both positions. I have still not used "demonized" for now and am open to suggestions. Please discuss here. A view like "a person is controversial" is - has to be ascribed, and the contra-view needs to be presented and ascribed too. Gmcssb (talk) 07:21, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * This issue has been discussed to death. Quotes have to be specifically attributed but paraphrases merely have to be sourced. The statements were sourced and then you changed them into quotes but retained all of the sources event though most did not use the quote. Introducing the "demonised" word into the lead section was grossly undue. You might want to revisit WP:LEAD and review the copious discussions from only a few months ago - fiddling with this stuff has landed a fair few people in hot water. - Sitush (talk) 07:42, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Are you saying if I paraphrase a view, it is all right not to ascribe it? That does not sound right to me. Why is "controversial" not undue but "demonized" undue? Gmcssb (talk) 08:10, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * If you do not understand what I am saying then this is probably not the best article for you to be editing. It is difficult enough for those of us who do have a decent understanding of how Wikipedia works. - Sitush (talk) 10:11, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

I am sorry, the above is no argument. I can say the same for you. If you are not able to explain or clarify your arguments then you should not be making them in the first place. The question is simple - is a view, even if paraphrased, to be ascribed or not? Gmcssb (talk) 10:15, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Please read WP:V. - Sitush (talk) 10:19, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

Gmcssb, this has been much discussed in the talk page. Controversial and divisive is the way Modi is described and this doesn't need any caveats or modifiers. Feel free to make your case here if you like but don't go around modifying the article without consensus. You might also want to get hold of a dictionary and check the meaning of controversial. When there are multiple views about a person, some favorable and some unfavorable, that person is controversial. There is no other side. --regentspark (comment) 12:47, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Second that. I think anyone who has a problem with this apparently controversial statement of Modi being "controversial" needs to check a dictionary for the meaning of the word. "Controversial" does not mean negative views about a person, it indicates presence of multiple, conflicting views, which clearly is the case here. - Aurorion (talk) 13:27, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * If there is discussion about whether it is controversial to call someone controversial then there is a beter than average chance that they are in fact controversial.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 14:23, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * There are multiple views about almost every political figure. All those talking about a dictionary - please keep in mind I neither contested nor removed the "controversial" description. I ascribed it, and added another statement which is a counterview - people who think the media has treated him unfairly. I do not see anything wrong with that. Reading A: "He is a controversial figure both within India and internationally." Reading B: "He is described as a controversial figure by some writers within India and internationally; some other writers say that political opponents and media are antagonistic towards him for several reasons." Reading B or a shortened version of it is much more NPOV that Reading A. Gmcssb (talk) 20:57, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * If he is controversial then by definition people disagree in their judgement of him. This makes "some other writers ..." a pointless statement because controversial means some agree and some others do not. Furthermore, imposing your "counterview" ran against a recently-established consensus and if you can see nothing wrong with ignoring consensus then Wikipedia is not the place for you. - Sitush (talk) 22:33, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Is there a consensus that a counterview should not be in the lead? Is there a consensus that nothing new will be added to the lead even if new information comes out? If you can talk like "Wikipedia is not the place for you" - it is you who are imposing and collaborative editing is not the place for you. Gmcssb (talk) 23:15, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The counterview is included in the statement that there is controversy. It is redundant and nonsensical to state that some people dont think he is controversial. Also it is not a label, it is a fact.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 00:39, 20 September 2013 (UTC)


 * This is a personal opinion that is being put upon the article. It is certainly not a fact that Modi is controversial, but a piece of opinion of certain individuals/media. Citing reasons like this to make the person controversial certainly pushing a biased POV through the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 10:11, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * See the 5 examples I have posted below, all of which are news articles in highly reputed international media sources. That Modi is "controversial" is considered a fact by all of them. (And many, many more - as you can verify yourself) Don't you realize that discussing more and more on this issue itself is proof of this fact? - Aurorion (talk) 13:30, 20 September 2013 (UTC)

Poll
We say that "Many businessmen from India, financial analysts and economists have a favourable view of Modi. In September 2013, Nielsen and The Economic Times published results of a poll of 100 Indian corporate leaders - 74 of them wanted Modi to be the next prime-minister, compared to 7 whose preference was Rahul Gandhi.[1]" It is factually correct, although the source is neither Nielsen nor The Economic Times. However, a poll of 100 people is unlikely to be statistically meaningful - you don't even need some training in stats in order to realise that. I think that this needs to be removed pending some more detail, ie: the small print of the poll analysis. And since the poll analysis is likely to be a primary source, the house of cards is in danger of collapsing. - Sitush (talk) 08:02, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I am trained in statistics, I am not sure about you. Can you please show (using t-stats or p-values assuming the appropriate distribution) that the result (74 out of 100) is statistically insignificant at 95% or 90% confidence level? Why do you not apply the same analysis on 10 media reports calling the subject "controversial"? Why remove anything that is favourable to the subject and retain everything (e.g. TOI "fake report") which is unfavourable? Gmcssb (talk) 08:08, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * All right, for the record - R says that even with two equally likely outcomes, 74 votes out of 100 is statistically "very significant" with a p-value of 8.337e-07 for one-sided test and a p-value of 1.667e-06 for a two-sided test. We do not go below the significance 1% (confidence interval of 99%) in most tests. The output if seen with more than two possible outcomes (obvious since 74 + 7 = 81 << 100), would be even more significant. :) Here is the code which you can try -


 * I am happy to address any other concerns. :) Gmcssb (talk) 09:22, 19 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Yes, I have some training but there is no need to go to this depth to make your point. A sample of 100 people out of a substantially larger population (probably numbering a few million) is not statistically meaningful. - Sitush (talk) 10:09, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * "Few million corporate leaders"? Where is this number from? Do you have a source to back up that there are few million corporate leaders in India? Gmcssb (talk) 10:12, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It is a guess and I said as much. Every business has a leader. There are many hundreds of thousands more than 100 businesses in India. The source is not good enough and we need to at least track back to the report as presented by Nielson/Economic Times. - Sitush (talk) 10:18, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

So now you come down from millions to hundred thousands? It is a survey of "corporate leaders" so you cannot take the number of businesses as population. Please furnish a source for hundreds of thousands of corporate leaders. Gmcssb (talk) 10:26, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I really could do without more pedantry - we had enough here before Yogesh got his three-month holiday. Use common sense. Or, for example, consider the sourced entries for just some of the companies in one municipality here. Find that report, please. - Sitush (talk) 10:34, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Apples and oranges. It is a survey of 100 top business and corporate leaders (CEOs) which the ET clearly states has nothing to do with number of companies. Gmcssb (talk) 10:56, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * When I said "report" I meant "report" as in "study" - not a link to some crappy puff piece that refers to them as "honchos" etc. Although since you now say that it apparently has nothing to do with number of companies it is most definitely undue weight because it has no statistical validity whatsoever. - Sitush (talk) 11:00, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

"No statistical authority" - this conclusion itself has no statistical grounding whatsoever. How can this conclusion follows from "no relation between top 100 business leaders and number of companies"? You do not talk about representative sampling, you do not talk about sampling error distribution, you do not talk about population and sample size, you do not talk about p-values, you do not talk about critical region, you do not talk about response variable assumption, and you act like a statistical expert to declare something has "no statistical authority"? This is like saying a mathematical formula is wrong without trying to derive it or disprove it! To say that something has "no statistical authority", you need to either prove that the sample is not representative or that statistic is not critical using all the above (sampling, error distribution, p-value) etc. If the sample size is representative and test statistic falls in critical region, even a sample size of 30 is sufficient to test for a null hypothesis. If I extend your argument, 55 MPs writing a letter to POTUS is UNDUE since there are thousands of legislators in India, so why is this in the argument? The survey is sourced, states clearly "100 top business leaders were surveyed", is from an established news source, I do not know what your problem with this is. We are not saying "majority of businessmen in India". Then how can one unilaterally decide whether something is UNDUE or not? And who are you or I to decide if a news report is "crappy" because of one word? "Honco" is a word used in headlines by Wall Street Journal, TIME, and many others. 222.167.246.119 (talk) 12:16, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * You seem to have forgotten to log in and, really, there is no need to outdent more or less every time you reply, Gmcssb. India has a population in excess of 1 bn and is home to a lot of large corporations. The opinions of 100 un-named people in response to unknown questions and without benefit of any explanation of methodology (including geographical distribution etc) are really not signficant. It is undue weight in the same way that the opinion of a named fringe theorist or an unnamed source might be undue. Let the electorate decide and report that in due course. - Sitush (talk) 12:34, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes I am on a different machine at home now and was not logged in. Fine with not outdenting. You keep changing grounds of discussion (sample size -> statistical authority -> unnamed sample -> fringe) and do not seem to have enough grounding in statistics and yet talk like a statistical expert. And don't bring in "electorate" - you and I know electorate decides who rules, electorate does not decide results of surveys. Results of surveys are decided by those surveyed. Most surveys in academia and statistics do not name those surveyed. The source is reliable (ET) and it is in no way a fringe theory - ET is more trustworthy than you, and if ET says "100 top business leaders in India" were surveyed, we have to believe it unless it is contested by some other source. We cannot disbelieve a reliable published source like ET because you disbelieve it. Gmcssb (talk) 12:43, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I am not disbelieving that the ET got those results. I am questioning the weight of relaying them in this article and the sheer style of their report, which is tabloid journalism of a type that we do not often rely upon. Statistically, 100 people is an irrelevance. - Sitush (talk) 12:47, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Dont use the word statistically - your knowledge of statistics is shallow - when I go into specifics you say we do not need to go deep and make sweeping statements about things you dont know anything about. You have changed your argument N times since beginning which shows you are on weak footing and not sure what the problem is. Gmcssb (talk) 23:19, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The poll itself should not be included per WP:WEIGHT unless it is referred to in other reliable sources. And if we post about the views of 100 random(?) businessmen then we should also include the opposite view of the many Indians to whom he is anathema.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 00:42, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It is referred to in other reliable sources already (DNA article). Opposite views are already present. Gmcssb (talk) 11:44, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Opposite views are not present, no.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 12:19, 21 September 2013 (UTC)

Whats wrong with his two year Sannyasa and Himalaya experience?
If you have to remove the caste, why do you remove everything else in the edit. Gmcssb (talk) 10:21, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The sannyasa thing was in there at one point but it was removed. There'll be a discussion about it somewhere in the archives but, off the top of my head, I think the reason for removal was because we only have his word for it and he has been notoriously silent about that particular period of his life. Tbh, I'm not unduly fussed either way but the caste stuff stays out. If you want to include the sannyasa stuff then get consensus here first. - Sitush (talk) 10:26, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

Unnecessary lead of word "controversial' in the article
The article starts with the word "Modi is controversial". This makes the article looks biased right from the start. While every politician including Digvijay, Akhilesh Yadav, N D Tiwari, Rajiv Gandhi, Abhishek Singhvi etc are mentioned by media as controversial for some or the other reason, only this particular article seems to be singled out by people with vested interest. For Modi, people like Sitush Sitush, Maunus User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw·, Aurorion cite dictionary, media reports, leftist intellectuals for mentionning him controversial. But while editing and mentioning controversy regarding Digvijay Singh, Akhilesh Yadav this same user Sitush deleted the controversy section claiming that " controversy should not be mentioned in the article to uphold NPOV" and that "it has become a fashion to label all politicians controversial" and also that "nowhere does it make substantive statements that these result from anything that Yadav's government has or has not done, let alone the man himself." But for Mr Modi, Sitush and similar thinktanks are hellbent to demonise Modi with their own biased point of view, creating doubt whether they are acting on someone's behest. This act of spitting venom on a leader in the Wikipedia needs to be seriously condemned and I request the editors that article need to be improved to make it non bias with NPOV. This is not some Congess/ Left mouthpiece, but an encyclopedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 04:30, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * In every section of Modi, some amount of criticism is deliberately added, be it Sadbhavna mission, speech regarding elections, Debate on Gujarat "miracle", Cabinet issues, Uttarakhand controversy(where none of top BJP leader claimed to have said what is mentioned in the section.
 * If Modi's views on reply to Sonia Gandhi's accusition of Mr Modi as merchant of death, has been taken into count, why no mention in Sonia Gandhi's profile where she accused Modi as merchant of death.
 * In Gujarat riots not a single court/ enquiry commission has found Modi guilty of 2002 riots, maximum convictions have happened in this case, still the article reflects as though Modi was responsible for the riots.
 * In section 'Second term (2002–2007)', it is mentioned that Modi's emphasis shifted from Hindutva to the economic development of Gujarat. From where is it proved that his initial emphasis was on Hindutva?


 * Please spend ome time reading the archives to this page from earlier this year (little box towards top right of this [page). All the stuff you mention was discussed at considerable length by obvious Modi supporters, obvious Modi opposers and obvious neutral-minded people. The outcome is what we have and it is all sourced, including the shift from Hindutva. Please also read the contents currently showing on this pager, which include (entirely unnecessary) discussion about the "controversy" word yet again. In addition, you should consider the spirit of WP:OSE - what happens on another article is not usually particularly relevant to what happens on this article. If after reading all of this it turns out that you still disagree with the consensus then you will probably need to provide arguments and/or sources that have not been raised previously. - Sitush (talk) 06:51, 20 September 2013 (UTC)


 * The article does not start with the word/phrase "Modi is controversial" - this is included only in the third paragraph in the current version of the article. Like Sitush says, this is an issue that has been discussed several times. There are plenty of reliable secondary sources (media as well as academic) that describe Modi as such. Especially international sources talking about Modi tend to use this descriptor a lot. For example, check out the coverage in international media sources about Modi's selection as BJP's PM nominee:
 * Washington Post article: this is titled Narendra Modi, controversial Hindu leader, is his party’s nominee for Indian prime minister. It repeats the "controversial" tag in the first sentence of the article.
 * BBC article: India's main opposition party has named controversial politician Narendra Modi as its prime ministerial candidate...
 * The Australian's article: Last weekend, the opposition Bharatiya Janata Party anointed controversial Gujarat Chief Minister Narendra Modi....
 * Financial Times article: Narendra Modi, the charismatic but controversial Indian politician, was named on Friday...
 * International Business Times article: Like WashPo, this refers to Modi as "controversial" in the article title: Narendra Modi: India’s Controversial Politician Named Opposition Party BJP’s Prime Ministerial Candidate For 2014 Parliamentary Elections.
 * As you can see, especially in international media, "controversial" is a very highly used term to describe Modi. Whenever international media sources (or even scholarly/academic ones) carry items about Modi, they almost always introduce him as controversial, often even in article titles. Wikipedia is based on reliable sources, so it is acceptable - arguably, it is even necessary - to reflect this in the article.
 * I am not an expert on the other personalities you mentioned: but I don't think there are too many international media/scholarly sources that call them "controversial". If you believe otherwise, if you think reputed media and scholarly sources describe any of them as such, please feel free to start discussions on the appropriate talk pages.
 * About the other issues: I believe all of them are based on reliable sources. The controversies such as the Uttarakhand controversy have had a lot of coverage in media sources. So it is not like anyone here is basing content on original research. - Aurorion (talk) 07:14, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Any politician who runs for national office after having had to defend themselves against accusations of being complicit in genocidal violence is by definition controversial.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 14:18, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Due to media calling a person controversial doesn't make him so. It is not a fact, but an opinion. It can be said that "he is considered controversial by some media/ authors internationally/nationally". Some user User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· has invented a new definition of being controversial. So going by his definition Akhilesh Yadav, Rajiv Gandhi, Tarun Gogoi, Omar Abdullah, etc, all are controversial. But somehow his scope is limited to Modi only. Uttarakhand related story was a piece of gossip printed by a newspaper with no authenticity and subsequent retract. So if someone wants to include the gossip, it should be " according to a newspaper TOI "; the title itself should not be 'Uttarakhand Controversy'. And when Sitush said that riots pertaining to Akhilesh Yadav belongs to his government and not him, then the same principal should also be applied here; hypocrisy should not be allowed.


 * Regarding the "Debate on Gujarat 'miracle'" some Leftist/partisan views have been given consideration regarding performance of Gujarat government in the BLP of Modi. Is it the same with every Indian CM? The citation of the Gujarat officials about relative growth of Gujarat in the 10 years of Modi vis-à-vis prior to his becoming CM, smells of malintention as the language "Gujarat official claims" denote that it is their opinion, where as it is a fact based on data.
 * The citing of a Leftist magazine "Frontline" (I'll provide sources to prove that soon) to put an opinion as fact (" Shifting of Modi from Hindutva to development") is highly distasteful. In the article the author has mentioned his/her opinion which has been included in the article as fact. This is blatant violation of NPOV and need to be removed asap. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 04:32, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The stance and reasoning of Sitush, User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw·, etc is strange to say the least. They claim to be "obviously neutral" but treat this one article specially. Akhilesh Yadav/Laloo are not controversial, Modi is. Others' caste can be mentioned, Modi's cannot. Anybody else's article can have contra-views, Modi's cannot. If anything contrary to their views is presented, it is "stupid" (e.g. User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· on inclusion of counterviews even in body) or problematic by selectively applying certain policies and ignoring a host of others. Sitush acts as a know all and cites "his own" page rather than Wiki's policies in arguments. Lot can be improved in this article to make it encyclopedic if only some of these editors were open to improvement. Gmcssb (talk) 11:57, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Gmcssb, it's not Sitush or Maunus who are calling Modi controversial. Reliable sources are doing that. We don't judge things here but let reliable sources do the judging. If reliable sources start using the word controversial to describe Yadav, Laloo, Obama, or anyone else, so will we. --regentspark (comment) 14:27, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Attacking people is not usually a helpful response. FWIW, I did not cite my own page - I said that there were links to be found there to various discussions conducted elsewhere relating to the BLP caste issue. There are. Read them. And read WP:CONSENSUS. - Sitush (talk) 12:31, 21 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Agreed that attacking people is not a helpful response, but then help let this article be emerge as neutral rather than indulging in making an article itself as controversial. The inclusion of an opinion of some author in an article in a leftist magazine "Frontline" as fact should be removed. It clearly violates BLP and NPOV. Author of any magazine is entitled to his/her opinion. Wikipedia is not a plateform to make it a general fact.


 * As for regentspark, reliable sources also call Digvijay Singh as controversy king. Kindly help to get this tag (controversy king) included in his introduction too.
 * Also all editors should help in getting various development indexes figures linked with every present Chief Minister of Indian states in their BLPs along with comments made by various authors/ intellectuals regarding the development/ development model/ performance based upon various development indexes. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 03:02, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I request all editors to please contribute to make this article encylopedic which currently looks like an article printed in Congress mouthpiece.
 * Instead of making such "requests", why don't you yourself take the initiative to improve such articles? But please make sure that you make your edits based on reliable sources. In this particular case, there are hundreds of high quality sources who call Modi controversial. If you can find similar high quality sources for other politicians you mentioned, please go ahead. The same for development indexes. If you want to improve other articles in a constructive manner as per Wikipedia policies, it is always welcome. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 168.187.214.218 (talk) 05:49, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Also, I don't agree with your opinion that this article "currently looks like an article printed in Congress mouthpiece". I think it's far from it, it looks like an article from Modi's or BJP's website. Look at the "personality and image" section for example. Just one statement to reflect the fact that Modi is a divisive figure. There are a lot of high quality sources with much more information that can be added here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 168.187.214.218 (talk) 05:54, 23 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Users Sitush, Ugog Nizdast may kindly refer to the WP:CRIT. "When presenting negative material, it is often best to name the source of the criticism within the paragraph or sentence, so that the criticism is not presented in the encyclopedia's voice". But consider the introduction of this article "Modi is a controversial figure" without naming any source of criticism, while the sources are media reports/ views of some authors. It should be changed to follow the wikipedia rules or I would have unnecessary quoted the above rule in case some different guidelines are being followed for this article.2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 03:02, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It may be "often best" to name the source of the "criticism": but in this case, if we try to list the sources that call Modi "controversial", it will be long enough to warrant a page of its own. Moreover, calling someone controversial is not a criticism. - Aurorion (talk) 06:22, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Editors/ Users including Sitush, Ugog Nizdast have constantly desist from including a section "controversy" or label any leader as controversial, citing WP:CRIT and BLP policies.Eg in case of Digvijay Singh, Akhilesh Yadav, it has been argued that controversy should not be a part of BLP and it violates NPOV, immaterial of the news reports. Further I don't think labelling any leader as controversial is glorifing him, rather it is equivalent to criticising. Whatever be the case, uniform policy should be followed rather than selected approach and being hypocritic. Either the labelling or Narendra Modi as controversial should be removed/ not presented as wikipedia voice, or if calling controversial is not criticism, then other leaders who have been frequently cited in media reports/ news reports for creating controversy should also have such term used with them.2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 09:06, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Let me make myself clear: when I quoted WP:CRIT, I meant it only for subjects like Akhilesh Yadav who are not referred to as controversial repeatedly by reliable sources. Modi on the other hand, has sources like NY times, BBC, CNN etc who never forget to tag him as 'controversial' besides national news like TOI and The Hindu; hardly any other Indian politician gets such treatment. What are we to do then? We simply can't in the name of NPOV remove it from the lead. We can't pretend to not see the elephant in the room. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 10:33, 24 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It seems that for some people foreign media sources are reliable and Indian media sources are not. Also not all articles mention this ToI, Pioneer, Hindustan Times, Economic TImes, zee news etc etc don't refer to him as controversial while covering the news articles related to Modi, who by the way is in constant media glare. This is grossly unfortunate to treat media sources of foreign origin as " gospel truth ". Even if so insistent to include it, why not add the line, "internation media cited him as" or "as per media". However, Indian media's treating Digvijay Singh as controversial does not matter because foreign media is not saying so? This is laughable and deeply partisan view. In the articles about Akhilesh Yadav, Digvijay Singh even the events that triggered controversy are not termed as "controversial", and here the politician himself is termed so, that too as a wikipedia voice. You will get tons of sources which says Modi has been unduly vilified.   . I can only hope for neutrality to prevail as wikipedia is a window of information to the world. The way the biased approach is being roadrolled, can seriously undermine its credibilty.2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 03:07, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Even if a few cherrypicked media sources don't call Modi "controversial", that doesn't change the fact that most academic and media sources do. Plus, your cherry-picked media sources do also call Modi "controversial":
 * ToI example: "The advisory stems from the assessment of the party's sparring with the controversial chief minister since he emerged as the top saffron leader for 2014 elections."
 * ET example: "...instead asked whether the controversial Chief Minister has got visa from the US."
 * HT example: "The UK's unexpected policy move to cozy up with controversial chief minister was criticized..."
 * Pioneer example: "Clearly, the controversial Chief Minister, who is seen as the BJP's ..."
 * Zee News example: "...winning a record third term as chief minister of Gujarat last December has put the controversial politician straight in the national league..."
 * Again, Narendra Modi is described as "controversial" overwhelmingly by reliable sources around the world, including India. I don't think any of your examples are even remotely that controversial. If you can prove that any of them are in fact considered controversial by a similarly large number of diverse reliable sources, please discuss on the corresponding Talk page. - Aurorion (talk) 14:51, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Aurorion, quoting such poor sources divelge the mindset you have. The Pioneer source quoted by you is actually a letter to the editor; the source in ToI and ET are infact statement made by a leader of Congress which has been reproduced verbatim. I am surprised at the perseverance and impatience you are showing to put forward a biased view, even mentioning a letter sent to the editor!! Moreover all the sources quoted by you consist of media articles/ opinions, which are not infact a "fact". This opinion of any media outlet cannot become voice of Wikipedia, if wikipedia policies are followed sincerely; lest it is hijacked by someone with ulterior motive. I wonder such users can be banned for citing such "controversial" sources.2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 03:24, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
 * My bad about the Pioneer example: but the others are not statements made by Congress leaders. The sentences I have copied above are not from any quotes attributed to anyone; they are part of the articles themselves. In case you didn't know, media sources do not reproduce verbatim statements from political parties or people without indicating that clearly, often in quotes. If you want, I can find and give here more sources from ToI or ET which describe Modi as "controversial".
 * The opinion of any single media outlet may not be important, but what is obviously considered true by just about all reputed media and academic sources around the world is definitely important. And no, users are not banned here for citing news articles from reputed media sources. - Aurorion (talk) 05:25, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The ET source says "party spokesperson Renuka Chowdhary sidestepped questions on the "clean chit" given to Modi by the European Union and instead asked whether the controversial Chief Minister has got visa from the US."

Now it must be clear; anyways Aurorion is right in saying that media outlets (some reputed as per Aurorion ) are important, but definitely what is not important is the opinion of the media. Based on one news article, several other articles are triggered(so called controversy around Uttarakhand rescue triggered several reports) and though wikipedia policies NPOV and BLP discourage them, some users make them part of BLP. Hence thats why it has been mentioned specifically by wikipedia policies "When presenting negative material, it is often best to name the source of the criticism within the paragraph or sentence, so that the criticism is not presented in the encyclopedia's voice". But so called "reputed media" sources are being cited to make it encyclopedia's voice. Is there any such policy that based on so-so " reputed media " sources, wikipedia will give its own voice to the BLP.2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 05:42, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Agree. Every day there are thousands of news reports in English media in India on Modi - I am not sure how can one cherry-pick a few headlines and make a conclusion that "Modi is described as controversial overwhelmingly by reliable sources around the world including India" as Aurorion has done. These days many reports and headlines focus on his "charisma", "show stealing", "oratory skills" and "crowd drawing capacity" See here (Hindustan Times from yesterday), here (New Indian Express, yesterday) here (few days ago, Pioneer), etc. Shall we by the same logic include statements like "Modi is a charismatic orator and a crowd-puller" right in the lead? I would not, as these are still strong views which need attribution (e.g. Modi is described as a .... by ...). The Indian media has had a love-hate relationship with Modi and independent authors have written that he is targeted by the media (references to which were removed by some editors, from even the body of the article). A statement like "Modi is/has been described as a controversial person by some Indian and international authors" is much more balanced than the present reading "Modi is a controversial person in India and internationally". Gmcssb (talk) 08:20, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It is clear to me that some people need a lesson in logic and also a dictionary. You can keep posting your comments here until the cows come home but the wording is not going to change. There is not a lot that people can do to convince those who seem to lack an appreciation of the English language, sorry, but this is English Wikipedia and so you'll have to live with it. - Sitush (talk) 08:30, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The more you indulge in argumentum-ad-hominem, the more you display your superficial knowledge and lack of understanding. Your arguments are nothing more than personal attacks. Gmcssb (talk) 08:41, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * And yeah Sitush, let me remind you that your ignorance has been thoroughly exposed in the discussion on "statistical significance". You talk with supreme confidence about things you have absolutely no idea about. Editors like you are reason why Wikipedia is not a reliable source. Gmcssb (talk) 08:44, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * What you are not seeing is that loads of experienced contributors are telling you the same thing. Please read WP:IDHT because if you persist with this then I am going to take your behaviour to WP:ANI: people can only take so much tendentious crap before their eyes start to bleed. - Sitush (talk) 08:51, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Its clearly evident from these comments that user Sitush is pursuing his own agenda; rather than improving the article, he is very much intend to malign Narendra Modi. Further consensus of 3-4 editors/users do not and should not become Wikipedia's voice. If Sitush is so fond of citing dictionary again and again, he should cite the meaning of word "controversial" in the article itself along with the word, so that other benighted beings can easily refer to it and do not make any arguement with the learned holy folks. Please put forward your reasoning about how foreign media sources are so "holy reliable" that wikipedia easily make their opnion its own voice, bypassing Wikipedia policies; or it is also something that is mentioned in the dictionary? 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 10:56, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Instead of nationalist-style maligning of foreign media sources, why not consider what has already been said, ie: (a) it is domestic sources also and (b) foreign sources have a less vested interest. Instead of maligning consensus, which was arrived at through involvement of far more than "3-4 editors", either accept it or go to WP:VPP and propose a change to WP:CONSENSUS. Good luck with that, by the way. - Sitush (talk) 12:00, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I can't believe you two are still not happy with this. Also please stop all this allegations against each other, this discussion is not going anywhere at this rate (how long I had to scroll to reach the end). Complaining that no one was replying to the post and then hurling allegations against users who spare their time to reply is not recommended. If what you both claim is true, (that some experienced users here are biased and you don't agree with the consensus or there hasn't been one), then why don't you all start an WP:RFC? If it rules in your favour then there is still no excuse for not assuming good faith and if it doesn't, everyone will be relieved if you finally let the matter rest. If you all go about saying even after that, entire Wikipedia is biased with all its experienced editors who silence a few who try to show the truth (or better WP:THE TRUTH), then what can we say then? -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 13:19, 27 September 2013 (UTC)
 * After going through all this marathon discussion, and wikipedia policies, one thing is very clear. The introduction in the article itself saying that he is controversial, and then that he is also credited........ speaks of biases and prejudices. Media trial cannot be termed as a general fact about any person, be it wikipedia or any other neutral encyclopedia. When the court has cleared Modi of any wrongdoing, why is he still controversial? Is it because of the basis of foreign media reports, which were actually taking cue from Indian media reports ever since the riots took place, or rather set off by Indian media reports which in the aftermath of 2002 riots wrote of series of articles vilifying Modi(although nothing proved yet). I am surprised by the amount of dedication and efforts by some users to make Modi controversial. Or if CONSENSUS is the Supreme Court of Wikipedia, then ofcourse nothing can be done about it. Readers would have to cope up with it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 117.199.28.214 (talk) 15:29, 27 September 2013 (UTC)

He is controversial because reliable sources call him controversial. Dragging court cases and allegations of biases or media trials here is making this discussion tendentious.--regentspark (comment) 15:44, 27 September 2013 (UTC)

Edit required: Biased mention of Rhetoric campaign
In the section "First Term", subsection "2002 election", the last sentence says " Modi used extreme anti-Muslim rhetoric during the campaign ", which is grossly unfair, biased and violation of NPOV. It is opinion of some authors which has been mentioned as Wikipedia voice. The sentence should be removed as it is not an established fact and put the person whom biography is mentioned in poor light. 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B20 (talk) 03:07, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Read NPOV, to not mention it would violate that policy, not the other way around. Darkness Shines (talk) 20:11, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Dear 2001:4490 (it would be a lot easier if you logged in) ... You are yet again raising something that has been discussed to death only very recently. You are not going to get the statement changed any time soon. - Sitush (talk) 20:24, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
 * I coudn't come across any discussion where this particular sentence has been discussed. Darkness Shines should go through NPOV and BLP in detail. It says that any criticism mentioned in BLP should be avoided being mention as Wikipedia's voice, but instead should be as per the source, eg, Source 'A' says that.., or as per media.. Sitush is so keen to delete any reference to controversy around Digvijay Singh, and exactly opposite in case of Narendra Modi for he is openly declaring that "this is not going to change soon". One do not need any further proof for if these users are actually being paid by any party/ individual to carry on with the propoganda. Hope some neutral users can really save Wikipedia articles from these propoganda machines. 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B99 (talk) 03:14, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Interesting! §§ Dharmadhyaksha §§ {T/C} 04:05, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
 * What is interesting about that rant? If you or the anon think that I am a propagandist for Modi, paid or otherwise, then ask for a topic ban at WP:ANI. Otherwise, shut it. See, for example, here and here. - Sitush (talk) 06:25, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
 * First of all it should be propagandist "against Modi", not "for Modi". And in the discussion link provided by you, the whole discussion centres around Darkness Shines, Maunus, RegentsPark and Yogesh Khandke, where all except the last user have been continuously raising anti Modi bogey which is very much evident from their talk and opinions. Mind you this is not CONSENSUS. When Sitush says that controversy, criticism should not be part of BLP, I agree for the same(remember Akhilesh Yadav, Digvijay Singh), when Wikipedia says that any negative opinion should not be treated as Wikipedia's voice, these users do not seem to agree(even though these are opinion only, not fact and as per Wikipedia, opinions should not be part of BLP). When it comes to Narendra Modi, the whole propagandist team get hellbent om demonising him, twisting Wikipedia rules, agreeing between themselves and then term it as CONSENSUS, while at the same time, allowing no controversy for other politicians belonging to other polotical parties. How can this be wikipedia's voice that " Modi used anti-Muslim rhetoric?". What were his words that prove this? Any case on him for so called anti-Muslim rhetoric? This is really unfortunate to have such opinions mentioned as fact in the article. This single line gives the impression that this is some Congress/Leftist mouthpiece and not a neutral encyclopedia2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B99 (talk) 03:06, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
 * It is cited to an academic publisher, get off your soapbox and stop with the accusations, be aware this article falls under discretionary sanctions. See WP:ARBIP and consider yourself notified. Darkness Shines (talk) 03:17, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Interesting to see that if unable to bear the heat, users resort to intimidation of blocking/notified. Come on; it is for every one to see that an academic source is cited. But that doesn't become a established derivation. It is alleged by the authors. Consider some points: No case on Modi for any hate speech/ anti Muslim rhetoric. No video/ speech text available to prove so. What exact words were used by Mr Modi to be termed with as strong words as "anti Muslim rhetoric"? You may be a senior user Darkness Shines, along with a bunch of mentioned above; but don't treat this article as your personal property for that sake. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 117.207.196.109 (talk) 15:54, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
 * It is hardly "alleged" "baby breeding centers" ring any bells? There are three academic sources which state categorically that Modi used anti Muslim rhetoric in the election campaign, the newspapers reported on it and his own party asked him to tone it down. Conversation over. Darkness Shines (talk) 14:41, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
 * One has not asked your theories and opinions regarding the topic. It is the violation pertaining to the wikipedia policies. The rhetoric is only alleged. Academic papers are also authored by some scholar. It's not a gospel truth but merely there opinion.You may be a paid agent but this is not suppose to be your mouthpiece. The first source says""the successful anti-Muslim campaign run in Gujarat in December 2002 by its provincial chief minister Narendra Modi – a hardline Hindu nationalist preacher turned politician – has ominous implicitions." Succesful campaign in which the author has added his opinion as anti-Muslim campaign. No sentence spoken by Modi is cited which can amount to so called "rhetoric". The third source says ""In the campaign, Modi fused religion and politics and, as a spur to anti-Muslim sentiment, made Islamic terrorism and its ties to Pakistan a central plank in the BJP platform" etc". Tell me, in this source what it is that amount to "anti-Muslim rhetoric". These are merly opinions of the authors. What was spoken or sny specific action by Modi that amounts to "anti-Muslim rhetoric" is not cited anywhere. For any neutral person, this clearly do not amount to the use of strong words like "anti-Muslim rhetoric". But for some paid agents these sentences can be adjusted, twisted, treated as gospel truth so as to run their propaganda to malign a national leader.2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B99 (talk) 02:29, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

report by the Raghuram Rajan panel
Why is it missing from the article? It should appear right in the introductory section after the sentence "...he has been praised for his economic policies...". The Raghuram Rajan report, as far as I know, is the only independent and formal study that has been made about the development of Gujarat, and it essentially contradicts every claim made by the Modi government.

Refs: Related: - Subh83 (talk &#124; contribs) 22:45, 31 October 2013 (UTC)
 * http://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/india/Gujarat-fails-to-make-top-grade-in-development-index-by-Raghuram-Rajan-led-panel/articleshow/23118691.cms?intenttarget=no
 * http://www.firstpost.com/economy/raghuram-rajan-has-called-modis-gujarat-model-of-growth-a-bluff-1135537.html
 * http://in.finance.yahoo.com/news/why-raghuram-rajan-ranked-gujarat-184000503.html
 * http://www.dailymail.co.uk/indiahome/indianews/article-2120215/US-wary-Narendra-Modi-s-pitchman-powerful-American-firm.html


 * There are not many people who would consider the UK Daily Mail as a reliable source for domestic news, let alone foreign stuff. Whatever happens here, please let's not cite that one. - Sitush (talk) 01:31, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Gujarat HDI
I would like to point out that zeeyanwiki has reverted the same sentence in the lead more than five times now, after being told to desist by multiple users, and after the sources had been repeatedly modified to suit his demands. I cannot keep undoing his edits because that would be edit warring; but I would appreciate some help here. Sitush, Darkness Shines, what have you to say about this? The multiple sources were removed by Sitush for the reason that they were too many; now Zeeyanwiki removes the content for somewhat unclear reasons. We need some consensus here. The criticism of lack of progress in Human development is well documented. How many sources are required to prove this, and which ones should they be?Vanamonde93 (talk) 20:18, 3 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I have mentioned reason every time but you are not able to tolerate that your edits are removed.You are hell bent on adding it.You said that you have sources then show me the pages.Much needed for the lead section and must if there is any dispute.You should be grateful if you will do it. ---zeeyanwiki discutez 20:30, 3 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Is the disputed source available at JSTOR? I have access to that. - Sitush (talk) 20:35, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes. What is the disputed source in question? If it is the dalit studies paper, then that is primary and can't be used. If there is some other source, then I'm sure I can dig it up. Please provide the exact source and the exact statement being cited for verification. In the meantime, I agree that it should not be in the lead until verified. --regentspark (comment) 21:29, 3 November 2013 (UTC)

The source in question is a paper by Christophe Jaffrelot, titled,"Gujarat Elections: The Sub-Text of Modi’s ‘Hattrick’—High Tech Populism and the ‘Neo-middle Class’" in "studies in Indian Politics" published in June 2013. The statements in question are the various instances where Jaffrelot says that development under Modi has been "polarized", that the development agenda has been exclusionary towards adivasis, that many human development indices, especially malnutrition, have not improved significantly, etc. I would also like to point out that this source has already been in the article for a while, just not in the lead. Vanamonde93 (talk) 22:56, 4 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I could agree but your statement has not verified yet and you should do this.You have demanded consensus here but never fulfill the main point of dispute.Calling someone's views senseless at first instance is abusive too.Atleast we should know that it is reality or your hidden agenda only. ---zeeyanwiki discutez 02:56, 5 November 2013 (UTC)


 * You reverted Jaffrelot out five times, without even checking it, that is disruptive and is indeed senseless. Darkness Shines (talk) 13:09, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Just pointing out that I did not use the adjective "senseless" at any point. I said something about unclear reasons.Vanamonde93 (talk) 19:10, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Here is what the source says: ''Modi’s policy, over the last 10 years, has benefited urban middle class more than anybody else. Gujarat ranks only tenth out of 21 states in terms of Human Development Index because some groups of rural Gujarat continue to lag behind (India, Human Development Report 2011: Towards Social Inclusion, 2011, p. 24). Indeed, Gujarat is a case of social polarization with new rich in the cities and most of the groups which are at the receiving end concentrated in the villages. The number of families below the poverty line has jumped from 23.39 lakhs in 2000 to 30.49 lakhs in July 2012 according to the Rural Development Commissioner (The Times of India, November 19, 2012c). Unsurprisingly, 9 of the 11 lakh houses without electricity according to the Gujarat 2011 census are in rural areas. In terms of education, the excellent report of Pratham shows that rural Gujarat was lagging behind states like Haryana.9 and Dalits and Adivasis (respectively 11.3 and 16.5 per cent of the state population) are even more specifi- cally affected. For instance, the percentage of tribal underweight children (0 to 5 years old) is much higher in Gujarat than the tribal average at the national level (64.5 per cent compared to 54.5 per cent). The under five mortality rate of tribal children is also much higher. Similarly, the percentage of Dalit participation in the NREGA programme is three times less in Gujarat (7.83 per cent) than in India at large (22.67 per cent) (Outlook, December 10, 2012, p. 38). In fact, development has meant socio-economic polarization, because Gujarat is a typical case of growth without development for all. The Gujarat chap- ter of the India Human Development Report 2011 concluded ‘the high growth rate achieved by the state over the years has not percolated to the marginalized sections of society, particularly STs and SCs, to help improve their human development outcomes’ (p. 50). (Jaffrelot, C. ujarat Elections: The Sub-Text of Modi's 'Hattrick'−−High Tech Populism and the 'Neo-middle Class''', Studies in Indian Politics 2013 1: 79, page 84 . --regentspark (comment) 13:35, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

This seems to me to be sufficient verification that I had actually read the source I inserted. What further objections exist to replacing it in the article?Vanamonde93 (talk) 19:40, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Please note that anything that can be verified cannot be included, the source presented by RP has no real value for this article of Modi, the excellent report of Pratham, what is that?. Well if you are concerned about Malnutrition then may be this would be of some help, if you need I can provide you sources about Gujarat providing electricity to villages, much better than any other state.-sarvajna (talk) 21:12, 5 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks to regent's park for the paragraph.Firstly electricity is an issue but while i saw at these links ,,,even with some dark sports there are signs of improvement to boost rural activities."Gujarat has emerged as the largest solar power maker in India with more than 18,000 villages of the state receiving 24-hour electricity".For malnutrition ,Apart from sarvajna this link direct's us to somewhere else. ---zeeyanwiki  discutez 06:16, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Sarvajna, Zeeyanwiki, we neither evaluate the conclusions drawn by reliable sources nor do we look for evidence that demonstrates that they are wrong. Rather, we present their conclusions, duly weighted, in the article. Studies in Indian Politics is a 'blind, peer-reviewed' journal and can be considered reliable and therefore Jaffrelot's conclusions are includable in the article. Whether they should be included in the lead is an open question though, and that is better evaluated through policies like WP:UNDUE. --regentspark (comment) 13:37, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * We have had many discussions concerning weighting in the lead. The "economic miracle" was seen as a counterbalance to the "controversial" statement, although of course it is not because "controversial" is a simple statement of fact whereas the "miracle", like most things statistical in government, is very subjective. We already know from those past discussions that the "miracle" bit overeggs the pudding, in so far as there are plenty of reliable sources that have questioned the extent of it and thus any mention in the lead section would require elaboration. It might be easier to say something like "The policies of the Modi administration have been praised for enabling socio-economic development in Gujarat; the impact and extent of these developments is disputed." Or something like that - I'm not proposing this exact wording because it doesn't sound quite right to me (I'm concerned about weaseling). What we definitely do not want is yet more citations in the lead section, and anything that is there has to be in the body anyway. . - Sitush (talk) 14:32, 6 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Exclusion of the critique of Modis human development index is not an option. The critique is highly prominent and persistent in reliable sources. Excluding it would be a clear NPOV violation. User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 16:19, 6 November 2013 (UTC)


 * It's not highly prominent whereas development model and Gujarat riots indeed because nobody can doubt them.It might not be exclude from the article but this disputable content doesn't appropriate in the lead section though in body somewhere else. ---zeeyanwiki discutez 18:16, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * IF the "miracle" is mentioned in the lead then the contradiction is also. Logically.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 20:51, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * RP, I agree that we do not evaluate the conclusion but we do include evidence which contradicts the conclusion and include both the views. I am not opposed to the inclusion of this HDI thing in the article but everything need not be in the lead.-sarvajna (talk) 19:10, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Only if that evidence is in the form of statements from reliable secondary sources. We don't, ourselves, include evidence. For example, your electricity link above isn't really something we can use because it is not an examination of Modi, electricity, and Gujarat. Jaffrelot, on the other hand, is an academic scholar and his interpretation of data carries weight. --regentspark (comment) 21:04, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * RP, First I did not provide that source (This is not the first time you are doing this) second I still do not understand why that source should not be accepted, it is not an opinion piece. It gives us information that Gujarat "supplies near 24-hour electricity not only to its large cities and towns but to the 18,000 villages, too". Since when did we start stop accepting news papers as secondary reliable sources? -sarvajna (talk) 21:17, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * If you didn't provide the source, and my assumption bothers you, then my apologies. But, that doesn't really matter because the point I made is the same wherever the source comes from. But let's look at this objectively. No one is denying that there are sources that say that Modi is behind the development engine of Gujarat. Everyone has accepted that. What we're now discussing is whether to include other views that state that his policies have unevenly benefited people in the state. Is there much point in dragging in more sources (whether you dragged them in first or not is not really germane) to show that he has done good for Gujarat? --regentspark (comment) 21:48, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * What we're now discussing is whether to include other views that state that his policies have unevenly benefited people in the state, that is very much included in the article and I am not opposing it.-sarvajna (talk) 22:29, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * In the lead Sarvajna, in the lead. I should think that that is quite clear so I take it you're ok with putting this stuff in the lead and we're all good. --regentspark (comment) 22:33, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I am sorry that I did not make my point clear, no I am not ok with putting this stuff in the lead, there are sources which says that Gujarat has done better in the field of HDI, for example Bhagwati has a different opinion about Gujarat's HDI. I am sure Bhagwati is reliable.If we start putting these things then we need not have a body but just a lead for this article.-sarvajna (talk) 13:05, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * You are even misrepresenting the source which in fact also states that "There are some dark spots - like the latest census shows 11 lakh homes in the state still have no power source - though. Of these, about 15% are in the urban areas. At least nine lakh homes are in rural areas, where the government claims to have implemented Jyoti Gram. About nine lakh houses use kerosene lamps to light their homes. Of this, over eight lakh are in the rural areas." This clearly corroborates the critique of Jaffrelot and others. User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 21:33, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Like I have said above, I am not opposing the inclusion of Jaffrelot's critique in the article, it is very much present in the article.-sarvajna (talk) 22:29, 7 November 2013 (UTC)


 * It is basic logic that per NPOV the lead cannot pesent a contested claim as uncontradicted fact. So it is either both views or neither. User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 20:51, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Sarvajna, the point here is that the "first" view is already in the article in the form of the statement about high economic growth. The bit about HDI is a counterweight to that. Saying we need a counterweight to the HDI statement is nitpicking. If there are no further objections, reasonable or otherwise, then I will proceed to out the source back in.Vanamonde93 (talk) 22:57, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Furthermore, having just re-checked WP:UNDUE it seems that the viewpoint being presented by Jaffrelot is certainly significant enough that it has to be addressed; the question of weight can be addressed in the language.Vanamonde93 (talk) 23:01, 6 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Vanamonde93, please hold on, Jaffrelot mentioned something in 2012, now that is contradicted by recent data released by the central government in 2013.We cannot mention everything in the lead.-sarvajna (talk) 20:44, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * It is not contradicted by any "recent data" that is published in reliable sources.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 21:33, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
 * . "Gujarat has among the lowest poverty ratios for Muslims and it counts among the seven states which have lower poverty than Hindus in rural as well as urban areas". Jaffrelot used figures from year 2009-10. The condition of SC/STs, minorities and OBCs have improved a lot with biggest percentage increase. In this article, it seems Jaffrelot is being given undue weightage, for whatever he has said/ published, is reproduced as it is, while opnions of Surjit Bhalla, Jagdish Bhagwati etc are not given much prominence. The article seems like has criticism for every good thing done by his Government, but any criticism, the positive side is not given. Eg " he is controversial....,"used extreme anti-Muslim...." .....polrising figure". 210.212.144.141 (talk) 10:04, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

Spiritual leaders
We presently says that "Spiritual leaders like Ramdev and Morari Bapu have supported Modi's Prime Ministerial candidacy. " I would have thought that was a no-brainer, given that they are Hindus with alleged RSS sympathies. In the interests of balance, what do non-Hindu leaders think? Or are they keeping a low profile? - Sitush (talk) 17:44, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * What makes Modi unacceptable - Rohit Pradhan.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 17:56, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Why we protested against Modi.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 17:57, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Why we protested against Modi.User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 17:57, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Kancha Ilaiah Dalit Activist urges to Boycott Modi
 * Gujarat opposition leader accuses Modi of victimizing Dalits
 * Dalits left out of Modis inclusive politics
 * Dalits petitions high court to move Modi rally which expropriates their landsUser:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 18:03, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw·, it seems to me these are political/social leaders or academics, and not "spiritual" leaders as such, whatever the term may mean. So while they are important, they aren't exactly a counter-weight to Baba Ramdev.Vanamonde93 (talk) 18:09, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

Here are few Muslim leaders who seem to be sympathetic to Modi, If you want sources for Muslim leaders opposing Modi, there is a ocean. We can easily get it. Narendra Modi not a political untouchable for Muslims: Shia cleric Muslims won't mind if Narendra Modi is elected PM: Darul Uloom Deoband's Ghulam Muhammad Vastanvi -sarvajna (talk) 19:11, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Interesting cherrypicking when these kinds of sources are much in the majority.There is nothing that Modi or BJP can do in the next seven months to earn the trust of Muslims. It would amount to rank foolishness to trust a man like Modi.Modi not secular lacks goodwill towards muslims cleric saysIf conversations, events and initiatives of the past four weeks are an indicator, Muslim social and political organisations as well as prominent Muslims have evolved a one-point agenda: to deny the Bharatiya Janata Party (BJP) strongman Narendra Modi a shot at becoming India’s prime minister after the 16th General Election that is due in a year. Their tactic: defeat the BJP and its potential allies in every Lok Sabha constituency where the Muslim vote can sway the result.The hardships of being a Muslim in Modis Gujarat (interestingly demonstrates that HDI is even lower for the pçmuslim population than for the general population, and thjat Modi has refused to set aside funds for develoiping the muslim community).User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 22:11, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I am not cherrypicking, if you had cared to read, I had written If you want sources for Muslim leaders opposing Modi, there is a ocean. We can easily get it. -sarvajna (talk) 07:25, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks like a Congress supporter and agent masquerading as an Wikipedia user is working full time to malign a leader and making the article look like printed straight from the stable of Congress headquarters. The viciousness and libelous language used by user Maunus leaves nothing else to say. The user should be banned for fanning such communal sentiments and using slanderous language. No neuatrality will be left in any article if such users are given editing powers. 2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B99 (talk) 09:12, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
 * LOL!User:Maunus ·ʍaunus·snunɐw· 16:23, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Laughing matters apart,2001:4490:D660:0:0:0:0:B99, if you're serious about these allegations you should report them to the appropriate forum. If you're not, then don't do anything, but whatever the case, stop making them here on the talk page. They are unconstructive, and I notice you've done the same thing multiple times above. And before you start on a rant about suppressing opinions, notice I'm just asking you to take those opinions to the right place. Only actual content debates belong here, and I have noticed precious little constructive contributions from you. Vanamonde93 (talk) 16:38, 9 November 2013 (UTC)