Talk:Nicholas Hoult/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 11:02, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 11:02, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "to study English," — English literature? if so, write it that way.
 * It is never really specified.


 * "and earned him a BAFTA Rising Star Award nomination" — For which one? Single Man or COTT?
 * Wikilink "Dame" and "borough" for those who may not be aware of the terms.
 * I may be wrong but shouldn't the years during which these TV series were broadcasted be included?
 * Not really, the longevity is always changing and the years can be misleading as to how long the subject was a part of the series.


 * "when he starred, alongside Hugh Grant, in Chris and Paul Weitz's comedy-drama film About a Boy." — Add the year for About a Boy in the article's body
 * "ferociously bright and articulate but sexually confused sixth-former" — Who said this? Hoult or critics? Do clarify.
 * "Hoult's performance was poorly received by such film critics as Mary Pols, Justin Chang and Richard Roeper." — Wikilink Chang and Roeper. Pity Pols doesn't have her own wikipedia article.
 * "the "beautiful" scenery helped to tell story better." — "the "beautiful" scenery helped to tell the story better."
 * Wikilink critics who have wikipedia articles (example: Robbie Collin)
 * Write "Relativity" as "Relativity Media" and wikilink it.
 * The Prestige was a 2006 film, not a 2015 one.


 * Source Review
 * Archive Ref no. 39
 * Reformat Ref no. 6, 10, 77, 101, 102, 104, 105
 * The archived URL for Ref no. 104 shows "Error". Fix it or find another reference.
 * Author's name not included in Ref no. 8, 87, 97

Good job on the article,. Once these comments are addressed, the article will be promoted. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 13:39, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I've (hopefully) fixed everything . Thank you for taking a look.  Vedant  Talk  16:01, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I still see the Bristol Post (Kaya Scodelario Maze Runner Preview one) shows "Error" for the archived URL. Fix it or find another reference. —  Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 17:02, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * I am sorry for missing that, it must have been the numbering that confused me. I have removed the bit as it is isn't the most significant piece of information.  Vedant  Talk  17:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Thank you for addressing the comments, . Congratulations, the article has passed. —  Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 17:17, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much .  Vedant  Talk  17:27, 6 March 2018 (UTC)