Talk:Onchidella binneyi

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2021 and 1 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): ShantelleB, Emadish. Peer reviewers: EM456 MB, Edmokamsi.

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Peer review
Hello,

Your article is pretty good! There are a few things that you may want to take a look at, though. The latter half of the "Description" section has some redundant and confusing wording, and if onchidal has a page, you should probably link to it. I'm also not sure how much of the medical information is relevant to the page of the slug itself.

--EM456 MB (talk) 19:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)